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Re: [PATCH] Make complete text mention updates (#244431)



On Mon, 2008-12-01 at 12:52 -0800, Jesse Keating wrote:
> On Mon, 2008-12-01 at 15:32 -0500, Jeremy Katz wrote:
> > +                "Please reboot the system to use the installed system.  "
> > +                "Note that updates may be available to ensure the proper "
> 
> That sounds a bit redundant.  Sorry for the bike shedding, but "Please
> reboot to use the installed system." perhaps?

Sounds good to me.  I wrote each of these string change patches a few
times to try to get the best wording, but eventually decided to just
send them and that the review would make the wording better :-)

Jeremy


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