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Re: [PATCH] Make complete text mention updates (#244431)



Jeremy Katz wrote:
> On Mon, 2008-12-01 at 12:52 -0800, Jesse Keating wrote:
>> On Mon, 2008-12-01 at 15:32 -0500, Jeremy Katz wrote:
>>> +                "Please reboot the system to use the installed system.  "
>>> +                "Note that updates may be available to ensure the proper "
>> That sounds a bit redundant.  Sorry for the bike shedding, but "Please
>> reboot to use the installed system." perhaps?
> 
> Sounds good to me.  I wrote each of these string change patches a few
> times to try to get the best wording, but eventually decided to just
> send them and that the review would make the wording better :-)
> 

I also support Jesse's change.  Aside from that, looks good.

-- 
David Cantrell <dcantrell redhat com>
Red Hat / Honolulu, HI


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