[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]

Re: Picture Book Mockup



Setting in critic mode:
Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it
might help.

-- 
Luya Tshimbalanga
Graphic & Web Design
E: luya fedoraproject org


[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]