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Re: Picture Book Mockup

From: Luya Tshimbalanga <luya fedoraproject org>
To: Fedora Art List <fedora-art-list redhat com>
Subject: Re: Picture Book Mockup
Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2009 23:07:38 -0800

Setting in critic mode:
Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it
might help.

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Luya Tshimbalanga
Graphic & Web Design
E: luya fedoraproject org

Follow-Ups:
- Re: Picture Book Mockup
  - From: Ian Weller

References:
- Picture Book Mockup
  - From: Máirín Duffy

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