install-guide fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml,1.7,1.8

["Paul W. Frields" (pfrields) <fedora-docs-commits redhat com>]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1631

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml 
Log Message:
2nd round, very minor style edits



Index: fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml	15 May 2005 16:06:06 -0000	1.7
+++ fedora-install-guide-rootpassword-en.xml	22 May 2005 13:37:21 -0000	1.8
@@ -21,9 +21,10 @@
       Account</title>
     <para>
       Avoid logging in to &FC; as <systemitem
-	class="username">root</systemitem>.  Any administration tools
-      which require <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
-      privileges will prompt you for the password.
+	class="username">root</systemitem> when possible.  Any
+      administration tools which require <systemitem
+	class="username">root</systemitem> privileges will prompt you
+      for the password.
     </para>
   </important>
 
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@
     The &FED; installation program requires the <systemitem
       class="username">root</systemitem> to be at least six characters
     long.  Because the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem>
-    account can potentially control any part of the system, use the
+    account may potentially control any part of the system, use the
     following guidelines to create a good password:
   </para>