On Mon, 2006-01-23 at 23:38 +0000, David Fletcher wrote: > I set up an email box specifically for use with this email list just a few > days ago. > > I submitted some work to the list on Friday that I've not yet had a response > to, This is the one that puzzles me. :) You might have filtered out this reply? http://www.redhat.com/archives/fedora-docs-list/2006-January/msg00171.html In general it looks quite good. A few small passive -> active voice changes (changing "will happen" to "happens", for example). Dropping references to mp3s, etc. What Rahul suggests is good, the fedora-release maintainer needs to own the source of the document, and bring it to us for final clean-up. Thanks a million for carrying this need over from the fedora-list discussions/rest of the community. cheers - Karsten -- Karsten Wade, RHCE * Sr. Tech Writer * http://people.redhat.com/kwade/ gpg fingerprint: 2680 DBFD D968 3141 0115 5F1B D992 0E06 AD0E 0C41 Content Services Fedora Documentation Project http://www.redhat.com/docs http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject
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