Re: Overview rewrite

[Timothy Murphy <tim birdsnest maths tcd ie>]

Rahul Sundaram wrote:

> Finally did a quick rewrite of the overview page that I have been
> wanting to do for a while now. Appreciate a review and additional content.
> 
> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview

I found it interesting and informative.
But I didn't understand the section on Upstream Focus,
"Fedora Project has a strong focus
on not deviating from upstream as much as possible 
in all the different software it includes in the repository",
until I read the link provided, when it became clear.

But if the document is intended for non-gurus,
it might be worth re-wording this bit.
Something like, "Fedora tries to follow the development of packages
as closely as possible, only adding its own patches
where this is essential."



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