Re: Overview rewrite

["John Babich" <jmbabich gmail com>]

On Dec 31, 2007 4:08 AM, Rahul Sundaram <sundaram fedoraproject org> wrote:
> Timothy Murphy wrote:
> > Rahul Sundaram wrote:
> >
> >> Finally did a quick rewrite of the overview page that I have been
> >> wanting to do for a while now. Appreciate a review and additional content.
> >>
> >> http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Overview
> >
> > I found it interesting and informative.
> > But I didn't understand the section on Upstream Focus,
> > "Fedora Project has a strong focus
> > on not deviating from upstream as much as possible
> > in all the different software it includes in the repository",
> > until I read the link provided, when it became clear.
> >
> > But if the document is intended for non-gurus,
> > it might be worth re-wording this bit.
> > Something like, "Fedora tries to follow the development of packages
> > as closely as possible, only adding its own patches
> > where this is essential."
>
> Fixed. Thanks.
>
Rahul:

I copied what you did and performed a fairly large rewrite - the
result of being an obsessive-compulsive word-hacker.

It's at http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JohnBabich/Overview.

Use whatever you like.

Best Regards,

John Babich
Hacker of the Written Word