Fedora 9 preview release notes clean-up

["Murray McAllister" <murray mcallister gmail com>]

Hi,

I (perhaps crazily) put my hand up to help with converting the release
notes from wiki to CVS/DocBook. According to the schedule,
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/Schedule, the wiki freeze
for the release notes is the 16th of March. Before the content is
moved into CVS, the wiki content needs to be edited for clarity,
grammar, and to make sure the correct tags
(http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/WritingUsingTheWiki) are
being used.

I can start going over these
(http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats). Maybe
if others are helping, they could post to the list and let everyone
else know which sections they were looking at.

Thanks a lot for your help!

Kind Regards,

Murray.

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