A couple bite-sized tips for writing as we collaborate on the wiki:
* Avoid dangling prepositions.
"Note the version you are upgrading from." <-- Incorrect
"Note the version from which you are upgrading." <-- Correct
* Avoid personalization ("you," "he," "she") where doing so doesn't
cause unnecessary awkwardness.
"Note the version from which you are upgrading." <-- Not as good
"Note the currently installed version." <-- Better
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