Re: F10 Preview release announcement

["Adam D. Ligas" <adam physco com>]

On Tue, 2008-11-04 at 05:06 -0500, Karsten Wade wrote:
> And so it is.  Adam, thanks for the great work.  I edited, tweaked a bit, added URLs, pruned, and reduced to only two exclamation points.  Hopefully you find that emphasized the quality of the work by removing diluting content. :)
> 
> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Cambridge_(F-10)_Preview_Release_announcement
> 
> "Test pre-release?  No, way, we _taste_ pre-releases."
> 
> How does everyone like this "final" version?  Ready to:

Looks good to me!

Only suggestion I have, reflecting something Paul pointed out earlier,
is to reduce/remove the word "smell".  So in the line

> Doesn't it smell yummy? We know you can't resist, and we don't want
> you to.

Perhaps we should change it to say "Doesn't it look yummy?".

Also, with all the nice new links tossed in, the
"(http://bugzilla.redhat.com) link in the bug section might be
redundant.  Removing it might make things look/flow a little better
there.

But both of these are nit picks, and I'm +1 with or without them.

- Adam