Re: [Fedora Installation Guide] #1: Chapter 1 update

["Fedora Installation Guide" <trac fedorahosted org>]

#1: Chapter 1 update
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  Reporter:  quaid        |       Owner:  ke4qqq  
      Type:  enhancement  |      Status:  new     
  Priority:  minor        |   Milestone:  RC-ready
 Component:  Content      |     Version:  10.0.0  
Resolution:               |    Keywords:          
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Changes (by eawest):

  * priority:  major => minor
  * type:  task => enhancement

Comment:

 Recommend change in first paragraph, third sentence from

 '''"The installation system is flexible enough to use even if you have no
 previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks."'''

 to

 '''"The installation system is easy to use even if you lack previous
 knowledge of Linux or computer networks."'''

 Explanation: Sentence's position in the middle of the paragraph is not
 great for such a lengthy sentence when the message is simple "This is
 easy, even for novices." Removing just those two words makes the sentence
 more succinct and easy to understand for the reader.

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Ticket URL: <https://fedorahosted.org/install-guide/ticket/1#comment:3>
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