[Fedora Release Notes] #32: Probable typos in the F10 preview release notes

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#32: Probable typos in the F10 preview release notes
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 Reporter:  runab    |       Owner:  quaid
     Type:  defect   |      Status:  new  
 Priority:  minor    |   Milestone:       
Component:  Content  |     Version:  10   
 Keywords:           |  
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 The following strings probably contain some minor typos:

 string # 43:

 "All of the packages from a DVD install can occupy over 9 GB of disk
 space.
 The final install size is determined by the installing spin and the
 packages
 selected during installation. Additional disk space is required during
 installation to support the installation environment. The additional disk
 space corresponds to the size of /Fedora/base/stage2.img plus the size of
 the files in /var/lib/rpm on the installed system."

 probable correction:

 "filename" tags missing for "/Fedora/base/stage2.img" and "/var/lib/rpm".
 Ref: string 32 and 321

 string # 437:

 "There is no support for Xen or kdump for the PowerPC architecture in
 Fedora.
 32-bit PowerPC does still have a separate SMP kernel."

 probable correction:

 "32-bit PowerPC does still have a separate SMP kernel." => "32-bit PowerPC
 still has a separate SMP kernel."

 string # 581:

 "indhi" => should be "Sindhi"

 string # 993:

 "<ulink url=\"http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ThomasCanniot\";>
 ThomasCanniot</
 ulink> (translator - French)"

 correction: A space missing between "Thomas" and "Canniot"

 Thanks
 Runa

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