Re: Fedora 11 Release Announcement FINAL

["Paul W. Frields" <stickster gmail com>]

On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 09:22:39AM +1000, Murray McAllister wrote:
> On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
> <eric christensenplace us> wrote:
> > Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the release
> > announcement[1] built.  We, at Docs, have reviewed the final draft and
> > think we are in consensus that it is complete.  Please look over it
> > and see if anything jumps out at you.  If not, this is what we'd like
> > to go with.
> >
> > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11
> 
> First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?

That's intended, in the spirit of usage in English over a century ago.

> Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following.

I removed the ellipses since they really didn't indicate anything in
particular.  I suppose I could go read up and find out how they were
used idiomatically way back when, but it didn't seem vital.

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