Release announcement revisions

["Paul W. Frields" <stickster gmail com>]

https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11

I made some more revisions to the new draft.  Could people take a look
and give me a thumbs-up/thumbs-down?  I dropped some of the features
because the quantity made it difficult to come up with a fun story
around them.  A good problem to have, don't you think?  :-)

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