Re: Fedora 11 Release Announcement FINAL

["Robert P. J. Day" <rpjday crashcourse ca>]

On Sat, 30 May 2009, Murray McAllister wrote:

> On Sat, May 30, 2009 at 3:13 AM, Eric Christensen
> <eric christensenplace us> wrote:
> > Thanks to Jack and Paul for stepping up and really getting the
> > release announcement[1] built.  We, at Docs, have reviewed the
> > final draft and think we are in consensus that it is complete.
> >  Please look over it and see if anything jumps out at you.  If
> > not, this is what we'd like to go with.
> >
> > [1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Release_Announcement_for_F11
>
> First sentence spells today as "to-day", but maybe that is intended?
> Also, there are spaces after "..." and the capital letter following.

  the impending roar of the lion ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aa2umu1vILI

or something like that.

rday
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