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FINAL Draft Ready for Review: Ch. 2: PackageKit



The PackageKit chapter of the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide is in final draft stage. The fine-pick comb has already been applied. Only content corrections should be applied at this point. Thanks to Richard Hughes, Rahul Sundaram, Rahul Kavalapara for their helpful 2nd draft reviews and suggestions

Notable changes:

* addition of a short discussion on, and screenshot of, the Software Update Preferences window, for setting update-checking intervals. (Rahul Kavalapara pointed out this omission--thanks!) * all screenshots now correct; all but three have "Figure X: description" captions
* entire chapter now formatted (i.e. the bold has been applied)

Review and feedback on this chapter is still welcome.

For details on how to get involved in the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide update, see the project page (and join the mailing list) at:

https://fedorahosted.org/deploymentguide/

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Douglas Silas
Technical Writer | Red Hat, Inc.


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