Re: 'Joining in' wiki page draft

[Adam Williamson <awilliam redhat com>]

On Tue, 2009-02-10 at 07:22 -0800, Adam Williamson wrote:

> > Agreeing with Leam a we bit too long
> > 
> > Added the banner and __NOTOC__ to it to shrink it
> > 
> > Could you try to shrink as close to one page?
> 
> Thanks for adding the banner, I forgot that. And thanks for the
> feedback, guys, you're exactly right, I tend to write too much. I'll try
> and cut it down.

Thanks again for the feedback, guys. I have tried to trim it as much as
possible. It's not quite one page at 1024x768, but as close as I can
get. What do you think now? Look good? Did I cut the right stuff?
Thanks.

URL remains: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Adamwill/Draft_Join
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