[libvirt] [libvirt-virshcmdref 04/10] update documentation for command dump

Eric Blake eblake at redhat.com
Wed Sep 14 22:43:22 UTC 2011


On 09/14/2011 01:28 AM, Hu Tao wrote:

> +<parameter requirement="optional">
> +<keyword requirement="optional">--crach</keyword>

s/crach/crash/

> +<examples type="fullcontext">
> +<example>
> +<text>
> +        In this example we will dump the core of a domain and analysis it

s/analysis/analyze/

> +<terminal>crash /patch/to/vmlinux /mnt/data/dumps/example-domain.dump</terminal>
> +<text>

Trailing whitespace.

> +        the vmlinux is the file containing debug information, usually it locates at the root

s/locates/is located/

ACK to 1-3 as-is, and to 4 with these nits fixed, so I've pushed.  I'll 
see if I can get review time for 5-10 soon, but I've run out of time today.

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