smolt privacy policy

[Paul W. Frields]

On Mon, 2007-02-19 at 13:27 -0500, Bill Nottingham wrote:
> Mike McGrath (mmcgrath at redhat.com) said: 
> > http://hg.fedoraproject.org/hg/hosted/smolt?f=d7efe18be592;file=doc/PrivacyPolicy
> > 
> > It is also my intention to add package lists in the very near future.  I 
> > believe this policy covers that.  Please let me know what you think not 
> > just in terms of content but also wording, formatting, etc.
> 
> Should be "parties' attention", at least. Might want to spell out OS,
> in fact, you probably want to explicitly list what's being sent.

At the beginning of the policy, you probably should say what Smolt
*does* rather than what its intentions are, especially since it can't
have any intentions of its own.  Or... *CAN IT?*   8-O

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