please review mockup (was Re: website mockups, what is fedora?)

[Bill Nottingham]

mairin at linuxgrrl.com (mairin at linuxgrrl.com) said: 
> Please let me know if this mockup is an improvement over the other one and
> helps.

I'm missing an earlier one to compare against... but it's certainly miles
better than what's there now.

Minor comments:

- s/Need to upgrade/Already using/ ?
- 'More download options' and 'Other options' seems redundant.
- The light gray text gives an impression of the entire site running at 75%
  opacity to me. Maybe I'm nuts.

Bill