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Re: artTeam Home Page Mockup



On Mon, 2007-02-26 at 16:31 +0200, Nicu Buculei wrote:
> John Baer wrote:
> > 
> > I could not be more delighted by the discussion taking place and I want 
> > to add an additional item to the discussion and that is a mock up of the 
> > team wiki home page.
> > 
> > http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JohnBaer/SandBox 
> 
> May I ask who is the intended audience for this page?
> - a Fedora user wanting to enhance the look of his desktop or some 
> Fedora graphics for his website;
> - a Fedora enthusiast seeking a way to contribute to the project;
> - an existing contributor to Fedora Art seeking where to channel his work.
> 
> I think is obvious that I am not a native speaker of the English 
> language and from my point of view the first phrase with "enabler" and 
> "facilitator" would scare me away if I would be new here.

Yes, it's important to use simple and clear language whenever possible.
I made some changes as John requested.

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