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Re: USB station poster Solar background.



>
> Looks great.  Although the grammar could be improved slightly.
>
> You put:
>
> 'You provide the pen, the rest it's up to us'
>
> Should say:
>
> 'You provide the pen, the rest is up to us'


I disown the line. ;)
It was originally there[1], I haven't changed it. :)
I didn't notice it either, but yes, the second line is more correct.

[1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/LiveUsbCreator.



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