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Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request

Máirí­n Duffy wrote:
María Leandro wrote:


Me too, my favorite is wallpaper 3.

Me too :p  It is much stronger than the other

A couple quick comments:

- I would take the outline that is around the infinity symbol in the Fedora logo out. You want to make sure you are using the logo according to the usage guidelines [1] which prohibit this kind of treatment.

I saw that coming...

- Instead of using a specialized font for the "EDU", I would maybe just write out "Education" in MgOpen Modata. It would fit in nicely with our secondary branding scheme then.

I love the bright colors and I also like how the focus of the graphics is on the lower right, although maybe this graphic is too busy for a wallpaper. I think it would be really nice for splashes and other branding materials though, and maybe you could pull out the pencils/sun and just have a slightly desaturated version of the sky+clouds for the wallpaper?

And pay more attention to the light source and direction. Your primary light source is the sun, so it think:
- pencil shadows on the ground should be directed to the down-left;
- the pencil shadows on the other pencils should go the opposite way;
- the light rays should originate from the sun, not from the ground.

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