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Re: Picture Book Mockup



On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
> Setting in critic mode:
> Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
> Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
> Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it
> might help.
> 
This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll
make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D

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