jargon-buster jargon-buster-en.xml,1.6,1.7

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue Aug 30 21:33:39 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/jargon-buster
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv15886

Modified Files:
	jargon-buster-en.xml 
Log Message:
Additional editing, down to "mozilla"


Index: jargon-buster-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/jargon-buster/jargon-buster-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- jargon-buster-en.xml	28 Aug 2005 21:53:51 -0000	1.6
+++ jargon-buster-en.xml	30 Aug 2005 21:33:36 -0000	1.7
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@
             url="http://www.fsf.org/licensing/licenses/gpl-faq.html"/>.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
-      </glossentry><!-- end PWF -->
+      </glossentry>
       <glossentry id="gl-jb-grub">
         <glossterm>GRUB</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
@@ -681,7 +681,7 @@
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-iso">
         <glossterm>ISO</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
@@ -770,40 +770,35 @@
         <glossterm>LILO</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            LILO (LInux LOader) is a basic system program which boots
-            your Linux system. LILO loads the Linux kernel from a floppy
-            or a hard drive, boots the kernel and passes control of the
-            system to the kernel. LILO can also boot other operating
-            systems.
+            The LInux LOader, or <acronym>LILO</acronym>, is a basic
+            system program which boots your Linux system. LILO loads the
+            Linux kernel from a floppy or a hard drive, boots the kernel
+            and passes control of the system to the kernel. LILO can
+            also boot other operating systems.  LILO has been superseded
+            by <xref linkend="gl-jb-grub"/> in &FED;.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-lsb">
         <glossterm>LSB</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            Linux standard base. The goal of the LSB is to develop and
-            promote a set of standards that will increase compatability
-            among Linux distributions
-            <ulink
- url="http://www.linuxbase.org/">linuxbase.org</ulink>
+            The Linux Standard Base, or <acronym>LSB</acronym>, is a
+            project that develops and promotes a set of standards to
+            increase compatibility among Linux distributions.  For more
+            information about LSB, refer to <ulink
+            url="http://www.linuxbase.org/"/>.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-lspci">
         <glossterm>lspci</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            lspci is a utility for displaying information about all PCI
-            buses in the system and all devices connected to them.
-          </para>
-        </glossdef>
-      </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
-        <glossterm>Mandrake</glossterm>
-        <glossdef>
-          <para>
-            Another Linux distribution
+            The <command>lspci</command> utility displays information
+            about all PCI buses in the system and all devices connected
+            to them.  It is frequently used to diagnose problems with
+            hardware recognition or driver compatibility.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
@@ -811,66 +806,85 @@
         <glossterm>md5sum</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            md5sum computes a 128-bit checksum (or fingerprint or
-            message-digest) for each specified file. Refer to
-            <ulink
- url="http://www.gnu.org/software/textutils/manual/textutils/html_chapter/textutils_6.html#SEC21">gnu.org</ulink>
-            for Linux man pages. Why is it useful? Having downloaded
-            Fedora, you'll mostly see a related file MD5SUM which holds
-            some rather strange numbers. Run md5sum against the
-            downloaded file or image, and you'll see a match if you are
-            lucky, or if you don't get the match, you can be assured
-            that the download is somehow faulty, and you need to
-            download again, before you burn the CD.
+            The <command>md5sum</command> utility computes a 128-bit
+            message digest hash value for any specified files.  A hash
+            value is a "fingerprint" for a given file, created by a
+            computation that makes it very unlikely that any two files
+            will create the same hash value.
+	  </para>
+	  <para>
+            Download mirrors for &FC; <xref linkend="gl-jb-iso"/> image
+            files also include a related MD5SUMS file which contains the
+            hash values for the <xref linkend="gl-jb-iso"/> files.  Run
+            <command>md5sum</command> against the downloaded files to
+            verify the hash value.  If a file's hash value does not
+            match, you should not use that file to burn a CD.  Try
+            downloading the file again.
           </para>
           <para>
-            For windows,
-            <ulink
-url="http://downloads.activestate.com/contrib/md5sum/Windows/">activestate.com</ulink>
+	    To download an MD5 hash program for Windows operating
+	    systems, refer to <ulink
+	    url="http://unxutils.sourceforge.net/"/>.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
-        <glossterm>Memtest86</glossterm>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-memtest86">
+        <glossterm>memtest86</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            Memory testing may be performed prior to installing Fedora
-            Core by entering <command> memtest86</command> at the boot:
-            prompt. This causes the <command>Memtest86</command>
-            standalone memory testing software to run.
-            <command>Memtest86</command> memory testing continues until
-            the Esc key is pressed.
+            The &FC; Installation CD 1 includes a memory testing utility
+            called <command>memtest86</command>.  To perform memory
+            testing before you install Fedora Core, or to diagnose a RAM
+            problem, enter <command>memtest86</command> at the
+            <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt. The tests continue until you
+            press the <keycap>Esc</keycap> key.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
-        <glossterm>Mount point</glossterm>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-mount">
+        <glossterm>mount</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            Mounting a CD is the equivalent of telling the Operating
-            System that you want to use it. In Linux the only file
-            system that is automatically mounted is the root file system
-            which is automatically mounted on the root directory. Other
-            file systems (eg. your floppy drive, cd rom drive, windows
-            partitions, and any linux partitions other than root) can be
-            mounted and unmounted as required. In the case of drives
-            used with portable media (such as floppy drives, cd rom
-            drives, and zip drives) it is necessary to unmount the drive
-            before being able to remove the media from the drive.
+            To use a disk device such as a CD, USB drive, or floppy
+            diskette, you must first <command>mount</command> it.  &FED;
+            uses a single unified file system for all attached devices.
+            This is in direct contrast to Windows systems, which use a
+            "drive letter" for each disk device, such as
+            <systemitem>A:</systemitem> or <systemitem>C:</systemitem>.
+            When you <command>mount</command> a disk device, its file
+            system becomes part of the unified file system on &FED;.
+            The device is mounted on a <firstterm>mount
+            point</firstterm>, which is a directory that points to that
+            device, such as <filename>/media/floppy</filename>.  You
+            must also unmount the file system before you eject or remove
+            the disk, to insure all file information is safely written
+            to the device.
           </para>
+	  <para>
+	    Since these functions are often handled through
+	    user-friendly helpers, you may perform all mounting,
+	    unmounting, and file browsing through the graphical desktop
+	    interface.  For instance, if you use the <xref
+	    linkend="gl-jb-gnome"/> Desktop, the <xref
+	    linkend="gl-jb-nautilus"/> file management utility makes it
+	    easy to perform these tasks.
+	  </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-mozilla">
         <glossterm>Mozilla</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>
-            Mozilla is an open-source web browser, designed for
-            standards compliance, performance and portability. Refer to
-            <ulink url="http://www.mozilla.org">Mozilla.org</ulink>
+            The Mozilla Project produces several user applications such
+            as the Firefox web browser and the Thunderbird email client.
+            These programs are designed for standards compliance,
+            performance and portability. For more information about
+            Mozilla software, refer to <ulink
+            url="http://www.mozilla.org/"/>.
           </para>
         </glossdef>
       </glossentry>
-      <glossentry>
+      <glossentry id="gl-jb-nautilus">
         <glossterm>Nautilus</glossterm>
         <glossdef>
           <para>




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