install-guide fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.14, 1.15 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.28, 1.29 fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml, 1.15, 1.16 fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu Dec 8 00:27:39 UTC 2005


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv12664

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Updated Disk Partitioning to match new screen
- Added initial note on Modifying SELinux Policy option
- Added yum and Package Updater to indexing




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 <!-- $Id: -->
+
 <chapter id="ch-disk-partitioning">
   <title>Disk Partitioning</title>
- 
   <para>
-    If you are new to Linux, you may want to use the automatic
-    partitioning method.  If you are a more experienced Linux user, use
-    the manual partitioning method for more control over your system
-    configuration, or select and modify the automatically defined
-    partitions.
+    &FC; creates and uses several <firstterm>partitions</firstterm> on
+    the available hard drives. You may customize both the partitions,
+    and how the drives on your system are managed. On systems with more
+    than one hard drive you may also configure &FC; to operate several
+    drives as a group, or array, with RAID. Partitions and RAID arrays
+    are explained in <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/>, and
+    <xref linkend="sn-disk-druid"/>.
   </para>
+  <note>
+    <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
 
-    <figure id="fig-partitioning-setup">
-    <title>
-      Disk Partitioning Setup Screen
-    </title>
-    <mediaobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitioning-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitioning-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <textobject>
-        <phrase>disk partitioning setup screen</phrase>
-      </textobject>
-    </mediaobject>
-  </figure>
-
-
-  <section id="sn-choosing-partition-method">
-    <title>Choosing a Partitioning Method</title>
-
-    <section id="sn-automatic-partitioning">
-      <title>Setting Up Partitions Automatically</title>
-
-      <para>
-	Choose <guilabel>Automatic partitioning</guilabel> at the
-	partitioning menu to use a preset partitioning layout.
-	<application>Disk Druid</application> then displays additional
-	options:
-      </para>
-
-      
-    <figure id="fig-partitioning-automatic">
-    <title>
-      Automatic Partitioning Setup Screen
-    </title>
-    <mediaobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitioning-automatic.eps" format="EPS"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/partitioning-automatic.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <textobject>
-        <phrase>automatic partitioning screen</phrase>
-      </textobject>
-    </mediaobject>
-  </figure>
-
-      <variablelist>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><guilabel>Remove all Linux partitions on this
-	      system</guilabel></term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      Removes all <firstterm>ext2</firstterm>,
-	      <firstterm>ext3</firstterm>, and <firstterm>Linux
-		swap</firstterm> partitions from all hard disks
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><guilabel>Remove all partitions on this
-	      system</guilabel></term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      Removes <emphasis>all</emphasis> partitions from all hard
-	      disks
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-	<varlistentry>
-	  <term><guilabel>Keep all partitions and use only existing free
-	      space</guilabel></term>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      Uses only the unpartitioned space on the hard disk(s) to
-	      install &FC;
-	    </para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</varlistentry>
-      </variablelist>
-
-      <para>
-	Select the desired option.
-      </para>
-
-      <para>
-	Next, select any disks you wish to use for Linux partitions. If
-	your system contains only one disk, that disk is automatically
-	selected.  Any disks you select are used for Linux partitions
-	according to the option selected above.  The option selection is
-	global, and you may not select a different option for each disk.
-      </para>
-
-      <note>
-	<title>Device Names</title>
-	<para>
-	  If you are confused about the device names used in this box,
-	  consult the Linux Partition-HOWTO at <ulink
-	    url="http://www.tldp.org/HOWTO/Partition/partition-2.html">http://www.tldp.org/HOWTO/Partition/partition-2.html</ulink>.
-	</para>
-      </note>
-
-      <para>
-	To review the automatic partition configuration, select the
-	<guilabel>Review</guilabel> checkbox.
-      </para>
-      <para>
-	If you remove any existing partitions, the installation program
-	asks you to confirm this choice.  After you review and approve
-	the partition configuration, select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>
-	to continue to the next installation step.  Proceed with <xref
-	  linkend="ch-bootloader"/>.
-      </para>
-
-    </section>
-
-    <section id="sn-manual-partitioning">
-      <title>Setting Up Partitions Manually</title>
+    <para>
+      The installation process makes no changes to your system until
+      package installation begins. You may use
+      <guibutton>Back</guibutton> to return to previous screens and
+      change your selections at any time.
+    </para>
+  </note>
+  <para>
+    <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
+      </remark>
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    The box on the screen lists the available drives. By default, the
+    installation process may affect all of the drives on your computer.
+    To ensure that specific drives are not repartitioned, clear the
+    checkbox next to those drives on this list.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    The installation process erases any existing Linux partitions on the
+    selected drives, and replaces them with the default set of
+    partitions for &FC;. All other types of partitions remain unchanged.
+    For example, partitions used by Microsoft Windows, and system
+    recovery partitions created by the computer manufacturer, are both
+    left intact. You may choose an alternative from the drop-down list:
+  </para>
+  <variablelist>
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term><guilabel>Remove all partitions on selected drives and create default layout</guilabel></term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          Avoid this option, unless you wish to erase all of the
+          existing operating systems and data on the selected drives.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
 
-      <para>
-	To manually set up all disk partitions, choose
-	<guilabel>Manually partition with Disk Druid</guilabel>.  Choose
-	this method if you require a special partition configuration.
-	If you are familiar with how disk partitions and the Linux file
-	system work, move on to <xref linkend="sn-disk-druid"/>.
-	Otherwise, read <xref linkend="sn-partitioning-general"/>.
-      </para>
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term><guilabel>Use free space on selected drives and create default layout</guilabel></term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          If the selected drives have capacity that has not been
+          assigned to a partition, this option installs &FC; into the
+          free space. This ensures that no existing partition is
+          modified by the installation process.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
 
-    </section>
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term><guilabel>Create custom layout</guilabel></term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          You manually specify the partitioning on the selected drives.
+          The next screen enables you to configure the drives and
+          partitions for your computer. If you choose this option, &FC;
+          creates no partitions by default.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+  </variablelist>
+  <para>
+    Select <guilabel>Review and modify partitioning layout</guilabel> to
+    customize the set of partitions that &FC; creates, to configure your
+    system to use drives in RAID arrays, or to modify the boot options
+    for your computer. If you choose one of the alternative partitioning
+    options, this is automatically selected.
+  </para>
+  <para>
+    Choose a partitioning option, and select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>
+    to proceed.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+    <title>The Next Screen</title>
 
-  </section>
-    
+    <para>
+      The next screen is <guilabel>Network Devices</guilabel>, explained
+      <xref linkend="ch-networkconfig"/>, unless you select an option to
+      customize the partition layout. If you choose to either
+      <guilabel>Create custom layout</guilabel>, or <guilabel>Review and
+      modify partitioning layout</guilabel>, proceed to the next section
+      of this document.
+    </para>
+  </note>
   <section id="sn-partitioning-general">
     <title>General Information on Partitions</title>
 
@@ -153,199 +106,194 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  A data partition mounted at <filename>/boot</filename>
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          A data partition mounted at <filename>/boot</filename>
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  A data partition mounted at <filename>/</filename>
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          A data partition mounted at <filename>/</filename>
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  A swap partition
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          A swap partition
+        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
       Many systems have more partitions than the minimum listed above.
-      Choose partitions based on your particular system needs.  If you
-      are not sure what to choose, use the Automatic Partitioning
-      method shown in <xref linkend="sn-choosing-partition-method"/>.
+      Choose partitions based on your particular system needs. If you
+      are not sure what to choose, accept the default partition layout.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       Data partitions have a <indexterm>
-	<primary>mount point</primary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>mount point</firstterm>.  The mount point
-      indicates the directory whose contents reside on that partition.
-      A partition with no mount point is not accessible by users.  Data
-      not located on any other partition resides in the
+      <primary>mount point</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>mount point</firstterm>. The mount point
+      indicates the directory whose contents reside on that partition. A
+      partition with no mount point is not accessible by users. Data not
+      located on any other partition resides in the
       <filename>/</filename> (or <indexterm>
-	<primary>partition</primary>
-	<secondary>root</secondary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>root</firstterm>) partition.  
-     </para>
+      <primary>partition</primary>
+      <secondary>root</secondary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>root</firstterm>) partition.
+    </para>
 
     <important>
-     <title>Root and <filename>/root</filename></title>
+      <title>Root and <filename>/root</filename></title>
+
       <para>
-       The <filename>/</filename> (or
-	      <indexterm><primary>partition</primary><secondary>root</secondary></indexterm>
-	      root) partition is the top of the directory structure.  The
-	      <indexterm><primary>partition</primary><secondary><filename>/root</filename></secondary></indexterm>
-	      <filename>/root</filename> (sometimes pronounced
-	      "slash-root") directory is the home directory of the user
-	      account for system administration.
-	    </para>
-     </important>
+        The <filename>/</filename> (or <indexterm>
+        <primary>partition</primary>
+        <secondary>root</secondary>
+        </indexterm> root) partition is the top of the directory
+        structure. The <indexterm>
+        <primary>partition</primary>
+        <secondary><filename>/root</filename>
+        </secondary>
+        </indexterm> <filename>/root</filename> (sometimes pronounced
+        "slash-root") directory is the home directory of the user
+        account for system administration.
+      </para>
+    </important>
 
     <para>
-    In the minimum configuration shown above:
+      In the minimum configuration shown above:
     </para>
+
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  All data under the <filename>/boot/</filename> directory
-	  resides on the <filename>/boot</filename> partition.  For
-	  example, the file <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename>
-	  resides on the <filename>/boot</filename> partition.
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          All data under the <filename>/boot/</filename> directory
+          resides on the <filename>/boot</filename> partition. For
+          example, the file <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename>
+          resides on the <filename>/boot</filename> partition.
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Any file outside of the <filename>/boot</filename> partition,
-	  such as <filename>/etc/passwd</filename>, resides on the
-	  <filename>/</filename> partition.
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          Any file outside of the <filename>/boot</filename> partition,
+          such as <filename>/etc/passwd</filename>, resides on the
+          <filename>/</filename> partition.
+        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
+
     <para>
-      Subdirectories may be assigned to partitions as well.  Some
+      Subdirectories may be assigned to partitions as well. Some
       administrators create both <filename>/usr</filename> and
-      <filename>/usr/local</filename> partitions.  In that case, files
-      under <filename>/usr/local/</filename>, such as
+      <filename>/usr/local</filename> partitions. In that case, files
+      under <filename>/usr/local</filename>, such as
       <filename>/usr/local/bin/foo</filename>, will be on the
-      <filename>/usr/local</filename> partition.  Any other files in
+      <filename>/usr/local</filename> partition. Any other files in
       <filename>/usr/</filename>, such as
       <filename>/usr/bin/foo</filename>, will be in the
       <filename>/usr</filename> partition.
     </para>
+
     <para>
       If you create many partitions instead of one large
-      <filename>/</filename> partition, upgrades become easier.  Refer
-      to the description of <application>Disk Druid's</application>
-      <link linkend="disk-druid-edit">Edit option</link> for more
-      information.
+      <filename>/</filename> partition, upgrades become easier. Refer to
+      the description of <application>Disk Druid's</application>
+      <link linkend="disk-druid-edit">Edit option</link>
+      for more information.
     </para>
 
-
-     <section id="sn-partitioning-types">
+    <section id="sn-partitioning-types">
       <title>Partition Types</title>
 
       <para>
-	Every partition has a <indexterm>
-	  <primary>partition</primary>
-	  <secondary>type</secondary>
-	  <seealso>file system</seealso>
-	</indexterm> <firstterm>partition type</firstterm>, to indicate
-	the format of the <indexterm>
-	  <primary>file system</primary> </indexterm> <firstterm>file
-	  system</firstterm> on that partition.  The file system enables
-	Linux to organize, search, and retrieve files stored on that
-	partition.  Use the
-	<indexterm>
-	  <primary><systemitem
-	      class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem></primary>
-	  <see>file system</see>
-	</indexterm><indexterm>
-	  <primary>file system</primary>
-	  <secondary
-	    sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem></secondary>
-	</indexterm> <systemitem
+        Every partition has a <indexterm>
+        <primary>partition</primary>
+        <secondary>type</secondary>
+        <seealso>file system</seealso>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>partition type</firstterm>, to indicate
+        the format of the <indexterm>
+        <primary>file system</primary>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>file system</firstterm> on that
+        partition. The file system enables Linux to organize, search,
+        and retrieve files stored on that partition. Use the <indexterm>
+        <primary><systemitem
+	      class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
+        </primary>
+        <see>file system</see>
+        </indexterm><indexterm>
+        <primary>file system</primary>
+        <secondary
+	    sortas="filesystem"><systemitem>ext3</systemitem>
+        </secondary>
+        </indexterm>
+        <systemitem
 	  class="filesystem"><firstterm>ext3</firstterm></systemitem>
-	file system for data partitions that are not part of LVM, unless
-	you have specific needs that require another type of file
-	system.
+        file system for data partitions that are not part of LVM, unless
+        you have specific needs that require another type of file
+        system.
       </para>
+    </section>
 
-      </section> 
-
-    
-     <section id="sn-partitioning-lvm">
+    <section id="sn-partitioning-lvm">
       <title>Understanding LVM</title>
-
       <indexterm>
-	<primary>LVM</primary>
-	<secondary>understanding</secondary>
+      <primary>LVM</primary>
+      <secondary>understanding</secondary>
       </indexterm>
-
       <para>
-	LVM (Logical Volume Management) partitions provide a number of
-	advantages over standard partitions.  LVM partitions are
-	formatted as <indexterm>
-	  <primary>LVM</primary>
-	  <secondary>physical volume</secondary></indexterm>
-	<firstterm>physical volumes</firstterm>.  One or more physical
-	volumes are combined to form a <indexterm>
-	  <primary>LVM</primary>
-	  <secondary>volume group</secondary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>volume group</firstterm>.  Each volume
-	group's total storage is then divided into one or more
-	<indexterm>
-	  <primary>LVM</primary>
-	  <primary>logical volume</primary></indexterm>
-	<firstterm>logical volumes</firstterm>.  The logical volumes
-	function much like standard data partitions.  They have a file
-	system type, such as <systemitem
-	  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>, and a mount point. 
+        LVM (Logical Volume Management) partitions provide a number of
+        advantages over standard partitions. LVM partitions are
+        formatted as <indexterm>
+        <primary>LVM</primary>
+        <secondary>physical volume</secondary>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>physical volumes</firstterm>. One or
+        more physical volumes are combined to form a <indexterm>
+        <primary>LVM</primary>
+        <secondary>volume group</secondary>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>volume group</firstterm>. Each volume
+        group's total storage is then divided into one or more
+        <indexterm>
+        <primary>LVM</primary>
+        <primary>logical volume</primary>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>logical volumes</firstterm>. The logical
+        volumes function much like standard data partitions. They have a
+        file system type, such as
+        <systemitem
+	  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>, and a mount
+        point.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	An administrator may grow or shrink logical volumes without
-	destroying data, unlike standard disk partitions.  If the
-	physical volumes in a volume group are on separate drives then
-	administrators may also spread a logical volume across multiple
-	disks and RAID arrays.
+        An administrator may grow or shrink logical volumes without
+        destroying data, unlike standard disk partitions. If the
+        physical volumes in a volume group are on separate drives then
+        administrators may also spread a logical volume across multiple
+        disks and RAID arrays.
       </para>
 
       <note>
-	<title>Automatic Partitioning and LVM</title>
-         <para>
-	  The Automatic Partitioning option creates partitions as LVM volumes.
-         </para>
-      </note>
+        <title>LVM and the Default Partition Layout</title>
 
+        <para>
+          By default, the installation process creates partitions within
+          LVM volumes.
+        </para>
+      </note>
     </section>
 
     <section id="sn-partitioning-home">
       <title>Creating a <filename>/home</filename> Partition</title>
 
       <para>
-	Many users find it helpful to create a separate partition for
-	the <filename>/home</filename> directory.  With a separate
-	<filename>/home</filename> partition, you can reinstall &FC;
-	without erasing user data files.  If you expect that you or
-	other users will be creating data files, you should create a
-	<filename>/home</filename> partition.
+        If you expect that you or other users will be storing data on
+        the system, create a separate partition for the
+        <filename>/home</filename> directory within an LVM volume. With
+        a separate <filename>/home</filename> partition, you may upgrade
+        or reinstall &FC; without erasing user data files. LVM provides
+        you with the ability to add more storage capacity for the user
+        data at a later time.
       </para>
-
-      <tip>
-	<title>LVM and <filename>/home</filename></title>
-	<para>
-	  If your &FC; system will host accounts for numerous users, you
-	  should create the <filename>/home</filename> partition in an
-	  LVM logical volume.  LVM provides flexibility for adding more
-	  user data storage later.
-	</para>
-      </tip>
-
     </section>
-
   </section>
-
 <!-- some notes follow:
 
     Sanity checks on partitions require:
@@ -366,348 +314,358 @@
     /var/mail /usr/bin/X11 /usr/lib/X11 /usr/tmp
 
 -->
-
   <section id="sn-disk-druid">
     <title>Disk Druid</title>
 
     <para>
-      <indexterm> 
-	<primary>Disk Druid</primary>
-      </indexterm> <application><firstterm>Disk
-	  Druid</firstterm></application> is an interactive program for
-      editing disk partitions.  Users run it only within the &FC;
-      installation system.  Disk Druid supports <indexterm>
-	<primary>RAID</primary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> and
       <indexterm>
-	<primary>LVM</primary>
+      <primary>Disk Druid</primary>
+      </indexterm> <application><firstterm>Disk
+      Druid</firstterm></application> is an interactive program for
+      editing disk partitions. Users run it only within the &FC;
+      installation system. Disk Druid supports <indexterm>
+      <primary>RAID</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> and <indexterm>
+      <primary>LVM</primary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>LVM</firstterm> to provide more extensible
       and reliable data storage.
     </para>
-
     <figure id="fig-disk-setup">
-      <title>
-	Disk Setup Screen
-      </title>
+      <title>Disk Setup Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<textobject>
-	  <phrase>disk setup screen</phrase>
-	</textobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>disk setup screen</phrase>
+        </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
-
     <para>
       <application>Disk Druid</application> displays the following
       actions in the installation program:
     </para>
+
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry id="vle-disk-druid-new">
-	<term><guilabel>New</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this option to add a partition <indexterm>
-	      <primary>partition</primary>
-	      <secondary>adding</secondary>
-	    </indexterm> or LVM physical volume to the disk.  In the
-	    <guilabel>Add partition</guilabel> dialog, choose a mount
-	    point and a partition type.  If you have more than one disk
-	    on the system, choose which disks the partition may inhabit.
-	    Indicate a size in megabytes for the partition.
-	  </para>
-	  <important>
-	    <title>Illegal Partitions</title>
-	    <para>
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary>partition</primary>
-		<secondary>illegal</secondary>
-	      </indexterm> The <filename>/bin/</filename>,
-	      <filename>/dev/</filename>, <filename>/etc/</filename>,
-	      <filename>/lib/</filename>, <filename>/proc/</filename>,
-	      <filename>/root/</filename>, and
-	      <filename>/sbin/</filename> directories may not be used
-	      for separate partitions in <application>Disk
-		Druid</application>.  These directories reside on the
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary>partition</primary>
-		<secondary>root</secondary>
-	      </indexterm> <filename>/</filename> (root) partition.
-	    </para>
-	    <para>
-	      The <filename>/boot</filename> partition may not reside on
-	      an LVM volume group.  Create the
-	      <filename>/boot</filename> partition before configuring
-	      any volume groups.
-	    </para>
-	  </important>
-	  <para>
-	    You may also choose from three options for sizing your
-	    partition:
-	  </para>
-	  <variablelist>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Fixed size</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Use a fixed size as close to your entry as possible.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Fill all space up to</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Grow the partition to a maximum size of your choice.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Fill to maximum allowable
+        <term><guilabel>New</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this option to add a partition <indexterm>
+            <primary>partition</primary>
+            <secondary>adding</secondary>
+            </indexterm> or LVM physical volume to the disk. In the
+            <guilabel>Add partition</guilabel> dialog, choose a mount
+            point and a partition type. If you have more than one disk
+            on the system, choose which disks the partition may inhabit.
+            Indicate a size in megabytes for the partition.
+          </para>
+          <important>
+            <title>Illegal Partitions</title>
+
+            <para>
+              <indexterm>
+              <primary>partition</primary>
+              <secondary>illegal</secondary>
+              </indexterm> The <filename>/bin/</filename>,
+              <filename>/dev/</filename>, <filename>/etc/</filename>,
+              <filename>/lib/</filename>, <filename>/proc/</filename>,
+              <filename>/root/</filename>, and
+              <filename>/sbin/</filename> directories may not be used
+              for separate partitions in <application>Disk
+              Druid</application>. These directories reside on the
+              <indexterm>
+              <primary>partition</primary>
+              <secondary>root</secondary>
+              </indexterm> <filename>/</filename> (root) partition.
+            </para>
+
+            <para>
+              The <filename>/boot</filename> partition may not reside on
+              an LVM volume group. Create the <filename>/boot</filename>
+              partition before configuring any volume groups.
+            </para>
+          </important>
+          <para>
+            You may also choose from three options for sizing your
+            partition:
+          </para>
+          <variablelist>
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Fixed size</guilabel></term>
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Use a fixed size as close to your entry as possible.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Fill all space up to</guilabel></term>
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Grow the partition to a maximum size of your choice.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Fill to maximum allowable
 		  size</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Grow the partition until it fills the remainder of the
-		  selected disks.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	  </variablelist>
-	  <note>
-	    <title>Partition Sizes</title>
-	    <para>
-	      The actual partition on the disk may be slightly smaller
-	      or larger than your choice.  Disk geometry issues cause
-	      this effect, not an error or bug.
-	    </para>
-	  </note>
-	  <para>
-	    After you enter the details for your partition, select
-	    <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Grow the partition until it fills the remainder of the
+                  selected disks.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+          </variablelist>
+          <note>
+            <title>Partition Sizes</title>
+
+            <para>
+              The actual partition on the disk may be slightly smaller
+              or larger than your choice. Disk geometry issues cause
+              this effect, not an error or bug.
+            </para>
+          </note>
+          <para>
+            After you enter the details for your partition, select
+            <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry id="disk-druid-edit">
-	<term><guilabel>Edit</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this option to edit an existing partition,
-	    <indexterm>
-	      <primary>partition</primary>
-	      <secondary>editing</secondary>
-	    </indexterm> LVM volume group, or an LVM physical volume that
-	    is not yet part of a volume group.  To change the size of a
-	    LVM physical volume partition, first remove it from any
-	    volume groups.
-	  </para>
-	  <warning>
-	    <title>Removing LVM Physical Volumes</title>
-	    <para>
-	      If you remove an LVM physical volume from a volume group,
-	      you will erase any logical volumes it contains.
-	    </para>
-	  </warning>
-	  <para>
-	    Edit a partition to change its size, mount point, or file
-	    system type.  Use this function to:
-	  </para>
-	  <itemizedlist>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		correct a mistake in setting up your partitions
-	      </para>
-	    </listitem>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		migrate Linux partitions if you are upgrading or
-		reinstalling &FC;
-	      </para>
-	    </listitem>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para>
-		provide a mount point for non-Linux partitions such as
-		those used on some Windows operating systems
-	      </para>
-	    </listitem>
-	  </itemizedlist>
-	  <note>
-	    <title>Windows Partitions</title>
-	    <para>
-	      You may not label Windows partitions that use the
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary><systemitem
-		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem></primary>
-		<see>file system</see>
-	      </indexterm>
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary>file system</primary>
-		<secondary><systemitem
-		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem></secondary>
-	      </indexterm> <systemitem
-		class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem> file system with a
-	      mount point in the &FC; installer.  You may label
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary><systemitem
-		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></primary>
-		<see>file system</see>
-	      </indexterm>
-	      <indexterm>
-		<primary>file system</primary>
-		<secondary><systemitem
-		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></secondary>
-	      </indexterm> <systemitem
-		class="filesystem"><firstterm>vfat</firstterm></systemitem> 
-	      (<systemitem class="filesystem">FAT16</systemitem> or
-	      <systemitem class="filesystem">FAT32</systemitem>)
-	      partitions with a mount point.
-	    </para>
-	  </note>
-	  <para>
-	    If you need to make <emphasis>drastic</emphasis> changes to
-	    your partition configuration, you may want to delete
-	    partitions and start again.  If your disk contains data that
-	    you need to keep, back it up before you edit any partitions.
-	    If you edit the size of a partition, you may lose all data
-	    on it.
-	  </para>
-	  <para>
-	    If your system contains many separate partitions for system
-	    and user data, it is easier to upgrade your system. The
-	    installation program allows you to erase or retain data on
-	    specific partitions.  If your user data is on a separate
-	    <indexterm>
-	      <primary>partition</primary>
-	      <secondary><filename>/home</filename></secondary>
-	    </indexterm> <filename>/home</filename> partition, you may
-	    retain that data while erasing system partitions such as
-	    <filename>/boot</filename>.  
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+        <term><guilabel>Edit</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this option to edit an existing partition,
+            <indexterm>
+            <primary>partition</primary>
+            <secondary>editing</secondary>
+            </indexterm> LVM volume group, or an LVM physical volume
+            that is not yet part of a volume group. To change the size
+            of a LVM physical volume partition, first remove it from any
+            volume groups.
+          </para>
+          <warning>
+            <title>Removing LVM Physical Volumes</title>
+
+            <para>
+              If you remove an LVM physical volume from a volume group,
+              you will erase any logical volumes it contains.
+            </para>
+          </warning>
+          <para>
+            Edit a partition to change its size, mount point, or file
+            system type. Use this function to:
+          </para>
+          <itemizedlist>
+            <listitem>
+              <para>
+                correct a mistake in setting up your partitions
+              </para>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
+              <para>
+                migrate Linux partitions if you are upgrading or
+                reinstalling &FC;
+              </para>
+            </listitem>
+            <listitem>
+              <para>
+                provide a mount point for non-Linux partitions such as
+                those used on some Windows operating systems
+              </para>
+            </listitem>
+          </itemizedlist>
+          <note>
+            <title>Windows Partitions</title>
+
+            <para>
+              You may not label Windows partitions that use the
+              <indexterm>
+              <primary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem>
+              </primary>
+              <see>file system</see>
+              </indexterm> <indexterm>
+              <primary>file system</primary>
+              <secondary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem>
+              </secondary>
+              </indexterm>
+              <systemitem
+		class="filesystem">NTFS</systemitem> file
+              system with a mount point in the &FC; installer. You may
+              label <indexterm>
+              <primary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem>
+              </primary>
+              <see>file system</see>
+              </indexterm> <indexterm>
+              <primary>file system</primary>
+              <secondary><systemitem
+		    class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem>
+              </secondary>
+              </indexterm>
+              <systemitem
+		class="filesystem"><firstterm>vfat</firstterm></systemitem>
+              (<systemitem class="filesystem">FAT16</systemitem> or
+              <systemitem class="filesystem">FAT32</systemitem>)
+              partitions with a mount point.
+            </para>
+          </note>
+          <para>
+            If you need to make <emphasis>drastic</emphasis> changes to
+            your partition configuration, you may want to delete
+            partitions and start again. If your disk contains data that
+            you need to keep, back it up before you edit any partitions.
+            If you edit the size of a partition, you may lose all data
+            on it.
+          </para>
+          <para>
+            If your system contains many separate partitions for system
+            and user data, it is easier to upgrade your system. The
+            installation program allows you to erase or retain data on
+            specific partitions. If your user data is on a separate
+            <indexterm>
+            <primary>partition</primary>
+            <secondary><filename>/home</filename>
+            </secondary>
+            </indexterm> <filename>/home</filename> partition, you may
+            retain that data while erasing system partitions such as
+            <filename>/boot</filename>.
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-	<term><guilabel>Delete</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this option to erase an existing partition
-	    <indexterm>
-	      <primary>partition</primary>
-	      <secondary>deleting</secondary>
-	    </indexterm> or LVM physical volume.  To delete an LVM
-	    physical volume, first delete any volume groups of which
-	    that physical volume is a member.
-	  </para>
-	  <para>
-	    If you make a mistake, use the <guilabel>Reset</guilabel>
-	    option to abandon all the changes you have made.
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+        <term><guilabel>Delete</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this option to erase an existing partition
+            <indexterm>
+            <primary>partition</primary>
+            <secondary>deleting</secondary>
+            </indexterm> or LVM physical volume. To delete an LVM
+            physical volume, first delete any volume groups of which
+            that physical volume is a member.
+          </para>
+          <para>
+            If you make a mistake, use the <guilabel>Reset</guilabel>
+            option to abandon all the changes you have made.
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-	<term><guilabel>Reset</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this option to force <application>Disk
-	      Druid</application> to abandon all changes made to disk
-	    partitions.
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+        <term><guilabel>Reset</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this option to force <application>Disk
+            Druid</application> to abandon all changes made to disk
+            partitions.
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-	<term><guilabel>RAID</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this button to set up software RAID <indexterm>
-	      <primary>RAID</primary>
-	    </indexterm> on your &FED; system.
-	  </para>
-	  <variablelist>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Create a software RAID
+        <term><guilabel>RAID</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this button to set up software RAID <indexterm>
+            <primary>RAID</primary>
+            </indexterm> on your &FED; system.
+          </para>
+          <variablelist>
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Create a software RAID
 		  partition</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Choose this option to add a partition for software
-		  RAID.  This option is the only choice available if
-		  your disk contains no software RAID partitions.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Create a RAID device</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Choose this option to construct a RAID device from two
-		  or more existing software RAID partitions.  This
-		  option is available if two or more software RAID
-		  partitions have been configured.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	    <varlistentry>
-	      <term><guilabel>Clone a drive to create a RAID
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Choose this option to add a partition for software
+                  RAID. This option is the only choice available if your
+                  disk contains no software RAID partitions.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Create a RAID device</guilabel></term>
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Choose this option to construct a RAID device from two
+                  or more existing software RAID partitions. This option
+                  is available if two or more software RAID partitions
+                  have been configured.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+
+            <varlistentry>
+              <term><guilabel>Clone a drive to create a RAID
 		  device</guilabel></term>
-	      <listitem>
-		<para>
-		  Choose this option to set up a RAID
-		  <firstterm>mirror</firstterm> of an existing disk.
-		  This option is available if two or more disks are
-		  attached to the system.
-		</para>
-	      </listitem>
-	    </varlistentry>
-	  </variablelist>
-	</listitem>
+              <listitem>
+                <para>
+                  Choose this option to set up a RAID
+                  <firstterm>mirror</firstterm> of an existing disk.
+                  This option is available if two or more disks are
+                  attached to the system.
+                </para>
+              </listitem>
+            </varlistentry>
+          </variablelist>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-	<term><guilabel>LVM</guilabel></term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Select this button to set up LVM <indexterm>
-	      <primary>LVM</primary>
-	    </indexterm> on your &FED; system. First create at least one
-	    partition or software RAID device as an LVM physical volume,
-	    using the <application>New</application> dialog.
-	  </para>
-	  <para>
-	    To assign one or more physical volumes to a volume group,
-	    first name the volume group.  Then select the physical
-	    volumes to be used in the volume group.  Finally, configure
-	    logical volumes on any volume groups using the
-	    <guilabel>Add</guilabel>, <guilabel>Edit</guilabel> and
-	    <guilabel>Delete</guilabel> options.
-	  </para>
-	  <para>
-	    You may not remove a physical volume from a volume group if
-	    doing so would leave insufficient space for that group's
-	    logical volumes.  For example, if a volume group is made up
-	    of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, then it contains
-	    an 8 GB logical volume.  The installer would not allow you
-	    to remove either of the component physical volumes, since
-	    that would leave only 5 GB in the group for an 8 GB logical
-	    volume.  If you reduce the total size of any logical volumes
-	    appropriately, you may then remove a physical volume from
-	    the volume group.  In the example, reducing the size of the
-	    logical volume to 4 GB would allow you to remove one of the
-	    5 GB physical volumes.
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+        <term><guilabel>LVM</guilabel></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Select this button to set up LVM <indexterm>
+            <primary>LVM</primary>
+            </indexterm> on your &FED; system. First create at least one
+            partition or software RAID device as an LVM physical volume,
+            using the <application>New</application> dialog.
+          </para>
+          <para>
+            To assign one or more physical volumes to a volume group,
+            first name the volume group. Then select the physical
+            volumes to be used in the volume group. Finally, configure
+            logical volumes on any volume groups using the
+            <guilabel>Add</guilabel>, <guilabel>Edit</guilabel> and
+            <guilabel>Delete</guilabel> options.
+          </para>
+          <para>
+            You may not remove a physical volume from a volume group if
+            doing so would leave insufficient space for that group's
+            logical volumes. For example, if a volume group is made up
+            of two 5 GB LVM physical volume partitions, then it contains
+            an 8 GB logical volume. The installer would not allow you to
+            remove either of the component physical volumes, since that
+            would leave only 5 GB in the group for an 8 GB logical
+            volume. If you reduce the total size of any logical volumes
+            appropriately, you may then remove a physical volume from
+            the volume group. In the example, reducing the size of the
+            logical volume to 4 GB would allow you to remove one of the
+            5 GB physical volumes.
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
+
     <para>
       After you finish setting up and reviewing your partition
       configuration, select <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to continue the
       installation process.
     </para>
-
   </section>
-
 </chapter>
-  
-    
 
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.28
retrieving revision 1.29
diff -u -r1.28 -r1.29
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	6 Dec 2005 20:54:47 -0000	1.28
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	8 Dec 2005 00:27:16 -0000	1.29
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
 
 <!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
 <!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.0.4">
-<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-12-06">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.0.5">
+<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-12-08">
 <!ENTITY BOOKID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
 <!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/legalnotice-en.xml">
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
 <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
 <!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "5">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0.4"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0.5"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
 
 
 <!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">
@@ -154,6 +154,16 @@
           </para>
         </revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+        <revnumber>1.0.5</revnumber>
+        <date>2005-12-08</date>
+        <authorinitials>StuartEllis</authorinitials>
+        <revdescription>
+          <para>
+            Updated partitioning section.
+          </para>
+        </revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory>
   </bookinfo>
 


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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	6 Dec 2005 01:25:25 -0000	1.15
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	8 Dec 2005 00:27:16 -0000	1.16
@@ -92,6 +92,11 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
+      <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
+      </remark>
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
       To enable access to services listed on this screen, click the
       check box next to the service name. After installation is
       complete, you can enable access to other services as well.
@@ -104,7 +109,7 @@
     <tip>
       <title>Changing the Firewall Settings</title>
       <para>
-        To change these settings later, from the main menu, choose
+        To change these settings later, choose
         <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Security
         Level and Firewall</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
@@ -115,6 +120,11 @@
     <title>&SEL;</title>
 
     <para>
+      <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
+      </remark>
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
       The <indexterm>
       <primary>&SEL;</primary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>&SEL;</firstterm> (Security Enhanced
@@ -166,7 +176,7 @@
           <para>
             If you choose this mode for &SEL;, &FED; does not configure
             the access control system at all. To make &SEL; active
-            later, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+            later, select <menuchoice>
             <guimenu>System</guimenu>
             <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
             <guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
@@ -175,12 +185,17 @@
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
+
+    <para>
+      To adjust &SEL;, choose <guilabel>Modify SELinux Policy</guilabel>. To exempt a service from &SEL;, select the service from the list, and choose the <guilabel>Remove SELinux protection</guilabel> option. 
+    </para>
+
     <tip>
       <title>Changing the &SEL; policy</title>
       <para>
         &SEL; is unique in that it cannot be bypassed, even by the
         system administrators. To change the behavior of &SEL; after
-        installation, from the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+        installation, choose <menuchoice>
         <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Security
         Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
@@ -228,7 +243,7 @@
     <tip>
       <title>Setting the Clock</title>
       <para>
-        To change these settings later, from the main menu, choose
+        To change these settings later, choose
         <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Date &
         Time</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
@@ -283,7 +298,7 @@
 
     <para>
       If you enable the <guilabel>Enable NTP Broadcast</guilabel>
-      advanced option, &FC; will attempt to automatically locate time
+      advanced option, &FC; attempts to automatically locate time
       servers on the network.
     </para>
   </section>
@@ -350,8 +365,7 @@
     <tip>
       <title>Resetting the display</title>
       <para>
-        To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
-        from the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+        To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed, choose <menuchoice>
         <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu>
         <guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
@@ -393,7 +407,7 @@
       <title>Creating extra user accounts</title>
       <para>
         To add additional user accounts to your system after the
-        installation is complete, from the main menu, choose
+        installation is complete, choose
         <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Users &
         Groups</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
@@ -458,7 +472,7 @@
       <para>
         &FC; will automatically attempt to detect a new sound card if
         you add one to your system. If you need to launch the detection
-        process manually, from the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+        process manually, choose <menuchoice>
         <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Soundcard
         Detection</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.


Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	6 Dec 2005 01:25:25 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	8 Dec 2005 00:27:16 -0000	1.9
@@ -16,13 +16,16 @@
       vulnerabilities. To ensure the security of your system, carry out
       an update when the installation process completes. You should then
       update regularly, and as soon as possible after a security
-      announcement. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-news-subscriptions"/> for
-      information on the &FED; announcements services.
+      announcement is issued. Refer to
+      <xref linkend="sn-news-subscriptions"/> for information on the
+      &FED; announcements services.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       To update your system with the latest packages, use the
-      <application>Package Updater</application>:
+      <indexterm>
+      <primary>Package Updater</primary>
+      </indexterm> <application>Package Updater</application>:
     </para>
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -66,9 +69,10 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      To update packages from the command-line, use the
-      <command>yum</command> utility. Type this command to begin a full
-      update of your system with <command>yum</command>:
+      To update packages from the command-line, use the <indexterm>
+      <primary>yum</primary>
+      </indexterm> <command>yum</command> utility. Type this command to
+      begin a full update of your system with <command>yum</command>:
     </para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>su -c 'yum update'</userinput>
@@ -126,7 +130,7 @@
     </variablelist>
 
     <para>
-      The annnouncements mailing list also provides you with news on the
+      The announcements mailing list also provides you with news on the
       &FP;, and the &FED; community.
     </para>
 




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