install-guide fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml, 1.20, 1.21 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.15, 1.16

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat Dec 10 13:48:48 UTC 2005


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1293

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Modified sections on installing from a network server to cover using mirrors
- Moved Architecture explanation to a separate section, as both mirror URLs and disc sets reference architecture names




Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.20
retrieving revision 1.21
diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	6 Dec 2005 20:54:47 -0000	1.20
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 13:48:41 -0000	1.21
@@ -1,33 +1,32 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
+
 <preface id="ch-intro">
   <title>Introduction</title>
-
   <para>
     &FC; is a complete desktop and server operating system created
     entirely with open source software.
   </para>
-  
   <caution>
     <title>&FC; Lifecycle</title>
+
     <para>
       &FC; is a rapidly evolving system which follows the latest
-      technical developments.  &FC; may not be appropriate for use in
+      technical developments. &FC; may not be appropriate for use in
       critical applications in your organization.
     </para>
   </caution>
-
   <para>
     This manual helps you to install &FC; on desktops, laptops and
-    servers.  The installation system is flexible enough to use even if
-    you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks.  If
-    you select default options, &FC; provides a complete desktop
-    operating system, including productivity applications, Internet
-    utilities, and desktop tools.
+    servers. The installation system is flexible enough to use even if
+    you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If you
+    select default options, &FC; provides a complete desktop operating
+    system, including productivity applications, Internet utilities, and
+    desktop tools.
   </para>
-
   <para>
     This document does not detail all of the features of the
-    installation system.  <!-- Automating the installation process and
+    installation system.
+<!-- Automating the installation process and
     configuring network installation servers will be described in
     separate tutorials.  [These tutorials will be added later. Until
     they exist, do not reference them. - PWF.] -->
@@ -41,69 +40,117 @@
     <para>
       The &FP;, which produces and maintains &FC;, is a collaboration
       between &FORMAL-RHI; and the <indexterm>
-	<primary>free software</primary>
-	<see>FOSS</see>
+      <primary>free software</primary>
+      <see>FOSS</see>
       </indexterm><indexterm>
-	<primary>open source</primary>
-	<see>FOSS</see>
-      </indexterm>
-      <indexterm>
-	<primary>FOSS (free and open source software)</primary>
+      <primary>open source</primary>
+      <see>FOSS</see>
+      </indexterm> <indexterm>
+      <primary>FOSS (free and open source software)</primary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>free and open source software</firstterm>
-      (FOSS) community.  The &FP; also provides &FEX;, additional
+      (FOSS) community. The &FP; also provides &FEX;, additional
       software packaged for installation on a &FC; system.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      For more information about the &FP;, please visit <ulink
-	url="http://fedora.redhat.com/">&FP-URL;</ulink>.  Refer to
+      For more information about the &FP;, please visit
+      <ulink
+	url="http://fedora.redhat.com/">&FP-URL;</ulink>. Refer to
       <ulink
-	url="http://www.opensource.org/">http://www.opensource.org/</ulink> 
-      and <ulink
-	url="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html</ulink> 
+	url="http://www.opensource.org/">http://www.opensource.org/</ulink>
+      and
+      <ulink
+	url="http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html">http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.html</ulink>
       for more information about open source software.
     </para>
-
   </section>
+  <section id="sn-hwarchitecture">
+    <title>Understanding i386 and Other Architectures</title>
 
+    <para>
+      The &FP; provides versions of &FC; for PCs, and also for a range
+      of other machines that are based on different technologies. Each
+      version of &FC; is built for computers that are based on a
+      specific <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>. All 32-bit PCs are
+      based on the <firstterm>i386</firstterm> architecture. You may
+      also install versions of &FC; on computers that are based on
+      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm>, and <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>. The
+      architectures are explained below:
+    </para>
 
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>i386</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Intel x86-compatible processors, including Intel Pentium and
+            Pentium-MMX, Pentium Pro, Pentium-II, Pentium-III, Celeron,
+            Pentium 4, and Xeon; VIA C3/C3-m and Eden/Eden-N; and AMD
+            Athlon, AthlonXP, Duron, AthlonMP, and Sempron
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>ppc</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            PowerPC processors, such as those found in Apple Power
+            Macintosh, G3, G4, and G5, and IBM pSeries systems
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
+        <term>x86_64</term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            64-bit AMD processors such as Athlon64, Turion64, Opteron;
+            and Intel 64-bit processors such as EM64T
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
+  </section>
   <section id="sn-before-begin">
     <title>Before You Begin</title>
-    
+
     <para>
       Before installing &FC; you will need access to the following
       things:
     </para>
+
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Boot or installation media (refer to <xref
+        <para>
+          Boot or installation media (refer to
+          <xref
 	  linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information)
-	</para>
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Information about your network configuration
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          Information about your network configuration
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  A copy of this &IG; and the Release Notes for this version of
-	  &FC;
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          A copy of this &IG; and the Release Notes for this version of
+          &FC;
+        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
       The Release Notes specify the hardware requirements for the
-      version of &FC; which you are about to install.  They also provide
+      version of &FC; which you are about to install. They also provide
       advice on any known problems with particular hardware and software
       configurations.
     </para>
-    
+
     <para>
       The Release Notes are available on the first disc in HTML and
-      plain text format.  The latest versions of this &IG; and the
+      plain text format. The latest versions of this &IG; and the
       Release Notes can always be found at &FDPDOCS-URL;.
     </para>
 
@@ -111,34 +158,36 @@
       <title>Networking</title>
 
       <para>
-	By default, &FC; systems attempt to discover correct connection
-	settings for the attached network using <indexterm>
-	  <primary>DHCP (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol)</primary>
-	</indexterm> <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm> (Dynamic Host Control
-	Protocol). Your network may include a DHCP provider which
-	delivers settings to other systems on demand.  The DHCP provider
-	may be a router or wireless access point for the network, or a
-	server.
+        By default, &FC; systems attempt to discover correct connection
+        settings for the attached network using <indexterm>
+        <primary>DHCP (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol)</primary>
+        </indexterm> <firstterm>DHCP</firstterm> (Dynamic Host Control
+        Protocol). Your network may include a DHCP provider which
+        delivers settings to other systems on demand. The DHCP provider
+        may be a router or wireless access point for the network, or a
+        server.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	In some circumstances you may need to provide information about
-	your network during the installation process.  Refer to <xref
-	linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation" /> and <xref
-	linkend="sn-installing-managed-network" /> for more information.
+        In some circumstances you may need to provide information about
+        your network during the installation process. Refer to
+        <xref
+	linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation" /> and
+        <xref
+	linkend="sn-installing-managed-network" /> for more
+        information.
       </para>
 
       <note>
-	<title>Modem Configuration</title>
-	<para>
-	  The installation system for &FC; does not configure modems. If
-	  your computer has a modem, configure the dialing settings
-	  after you complete the installation and reboot.
-	</para>
-      </note>
+        <title>Modem Configuration</title>
 
+        <para>
+          The installation system for &FC; does not configure modems. If
+          your computer has a modem, configure the dialing settings
+          after you complete the installation and reboot.
+        </para>
+      </note>
     </section>
-    
 <!--
 
     Is it just me, or is this section really out of place? [PWF]
@@ -161,65 +210,103 @@
     </section>
 
 -->
-
     <section id="sn-installing-networkinstallation">
-      <title>Installing from a Network Server</title>
+      <title>Installing from a Server or Website</title>
 
       <para>
-	To install &FC; using a network installation server you will
-	need to know the following:
+        You may install &FC; using a <firstterm>mirror</firstterm>, a
+        website or network server that provide a copy of the necessary
+        files. To use a mirror you will need to know the following:
       </para>
+
       <itemizedlist>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    the name of the server
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    the network protocol used for installation (FTP, HTTP, or
-	    NFS)
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    the path to the installation files
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            the name of the server
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            the network protocol used for installation (FTP, HTTP, or
+            NFS)
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            the path to the installation files on the server
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>
-	A network installation requires boot media, unless you are using
-	<firstterm>PXE</firstterm> (Pre-boot eXecution Environment) to
-	boot your computer.  Boot your computer using either an
-	installation DVD, the first installation CD, a boot CD, or a
-	prepared USB storage device.  Refer to <xref
-	linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information.
+        You may install &FC; from your own private mirror, or use one of
+        the public mirrors maintained by members of the community. The
+        &FP; maintains a list of public mirrors that provide the
+        installation files with HTTP and FTP:
+        <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/mirrors.html"/>.
+        Choose a server from the list for your region.
       </para>
-      
+
       <para>
-	PXE (also referred to as <firstterm>netboot</firstterm>) is a
-	standard that enables PCs to use files on a server as a boot
-	device.  &FC; includes utilities that allow it to function as a
-	  PXE server for other computers.
+        Add
+        <filename>/&FCLOCALVER;/<replaceable>architecture</replaceable>/os/</filename>
+        to the path shown on the website, to determine the complete the
+        directory path for the installation files.
+      </para>
+      <tip>
+        <title>Building Your Own Mirror</title>
+        <para>
+          Refer to <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/mirror/"/>
+          for information on how to create your own &FED; mirror for
+          either public or private use.
+        </para>
+      </tip>
+      <para>
+        To use a mirror, boot your computer with a &FED; disc, and
+        follow the instructions in
+        <xref linkend="ch-other-install-methods"/>. Refer to
+        <xref
+	linkend="sn-preparing-media"/> for more information on
+        creating the boot media.
+      </para>
+
+      <note>
+        <title>Using the Installation Discs</title>
+
+        <para>
+          If you boot your computer with either an installation DVD, or
+          the first installation CD, enter <userinput>linux
+          askmethod</userinput> at the
+          <prompt>boot:</prompt>
+          prompt to access the server installation options.
+        </para>
+      </note>
+
+      <para>
+        If your network includes a server, you may also use
+        <firstterm>PXE</firstterm> (Pre-boot eXecution Environment) to
+        boot your computer. PXE (also referred to as
+        <firstterm>netboot</firstterm>) is a standard that enables PCs
+        to use files on a server as a boot device. &FC; includes
+        utilities that allow it to function as a PXE server for other
+        computers.
       </para>
-      
     </section>
-    
 
     <section id="sn-installing-managed-network">
       <title>Installing &FC; on a Managed Network</title>
 
       <para>
-	Some corporate networks include a <firstterm>directory
-	  service</firstterm> that manages user accounts for the
-	organization.  &FC; systems can join a Kerberos, NIS, Hesiod, or
-	<trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> <trademark
-	  class="registered">Windows</trademark> domain as part of the
-	installation process.  &FC; can also use LDAP directories.
+        Some corporate networks include a <firstterm>directory
+        service</firstterm> that manages user accounts for the
+        organization. &FC; systems can join a Kerberos, NIS, Hesiod, or
+        <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark>
+        <trademark
+	  class="registered">Windows</trademark> domain as
+        part of the installation process. &FC; can also use LDAP
+        directories.
       </para>
-
-	<!--
+<!--
 	
 	<para>
 	  The process of configuring your &FC; system to use network
@@ -229,22 +316,19 @@
 	[When this tutorial exists, remove these comments.]
 
 	-->
-
       <caution>
-	<title>Consult Network Administrators</title>
-	<para>
-	  If you are installing outside of your home, always consult the
-	  administrators before installing a &FC; system on an existing
-	  network.  They can provide correct network and authentication
-	  settings, and guidance on specific organizational policies and
-	  requirements.
-	</para>
-      </caution>
+        <title>Consult Network Administrators</title>
 
+        <para>
+          If you are installing outside of your home, always consult the
+          administrators before installing a &FC; system on an existing
+          network. They can provide correct network and authentication
+          settings, and guidance on specific organizational policies and
+          requirements.
+        </para>
+      </caution>
     </section>
-
   </section>
-
   <section id="sn-preparing-media">
     <title>Preparing Media</title>
 
@@ -254,20 +338,20 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  CD or DVD media (either installation disc #1 or a special
-	  boot-only disc)
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          CD or DVD media (either installation disc #1 or a special
+          boot-only disc)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  USB media
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          USB media
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Network interface (via PXE)
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          Network interface (via PXE)
+        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -277,75 +361,42 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  CD or DVD media installation discs
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          CD or DVD media installation discs
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Hard disk
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          Hard disk
+        </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-	<para>
-	  Network installation tree via HTTP, FTP, or NFS
-	</para>
+        <para>
+          Network installation tree via HTTP, FTP, or NFS
+        </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <note>
       <title>Installation from Diskettes</title>
+
       <para>
-	There is no option to install &FC; from diskettes.
+        There is no option to install &FC; from diskettes.
       </para>
     </note>
 
     <para>
       To install &FC; from discs, you need five installation CDs, or the
-      installation DVD.  There are separate disc sets for each supported
-      <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>.  Currently, &FC; supports the
-      <firstterm>i386</firstterm>, <firstterm>ppc</firstterm>, and
-      <firstterm>x86_64</firstterm> architectures.  These architectures
-      are described below:
+      installation DVD. There are separate disc sets for each supported
+      architecture.
     </para>
 
-    <variablelist>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>i386</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    Intel x86-compatible processors, including Intel Pentium and
-	    Pentium-MMX, Pentium Pro, Pentium-II, Pentium-III, Celeron,
-	    Pentium 4, and Xeon; VIA C3/C3-m and Eden/Eden-N; and AMD
-	    Athlon, AthlonXP, Duron, AthlonMP, and Sempron
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>ppc</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    PowerPC processors, such as those found in Apple Power
-	    Macintosh, G3, G4, and G5, and IBM pSeries systems
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-      <varlistentry>
-	<term>x86_64</term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    64-bit AMD processors such as Athlon64, Turion64, Opteron;
-	    and Intel 64-bit processors such as EM64T
-	  </para>
-	</listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-    </variablelist>
-
     <important>
       <title>Architecture-Specific Distributions</title>
+
       <para>
-	To install &FC; you need the boot or installation media that is
-	particular to your architecture.
+        To install &FC; you need the boot or installation media that is
+        particular to your architecture.
       </para>
     </important>
 
@@ -358,10 +409,11 @@
 
     <para>
       You may also use the first CD or DVD installation disc from the
-      complete &FC; distribution as boot media.  For instructions to
+      complete &FC; distribution as boot media. For instructions to
       download and prepare this CD or DVD installation media, refer to
-      <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/"/>.  If you already
-      have the full set of &FC; installation media, skip to <xref
+      <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/download/"/>. If you already
+      have the full set of &FC; installation media, skip to
+      <xref
       linkend="sn-booting-from-disc"/>.
     </para>
 
@@ -369,97 +421,89 @@
       <title>Preparing CD or DVD Media</title>
 
       <para>
-	The <filename>images/boot.iso</filename> file on the first &FC;
-	installation disc is a boot image designed for CD and DVD media.
-	This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;.  You
-	can also find this file on mirror sites in the &FC; distribution
-	directory for your particular architecture.
+        The <filename>images/boot.iso</filename> file on the first &FC;
+        installation disc is a boot image designed for CD and DVD media.
+        This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;. You
+        can also find this file on mirror sites in the &FC; distribution
+        directory for your particular architecture.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	To convert an ISO file into a physical CD, use the option in
-	your CD-writing program that burns a CD image file to a CD. If
-	you copy the file itself to a CD instead, the disc will not boot
-	or work correctly.  Refer to your CD writing program
-	documentation for instructions.  If you are using Linux, use the
-	following command to burn a CD image file to a blank recordable
-	CD:
+        To convert an ISO file into a physical CD, use the option in
+        your CD-writing program that burns a CD image file to a CD. If
+        you copy the file itself to a CD instead, the disc will not boot
+        or work correctly. Refer to your CD writing program
+        documentation for instructions. If you are using Linux, use the
+        following command to burn a CD image file to a blank recordable
+        CD:
       </para>
-
 <screen>
 <userinput>cdrecord --device=<replaceable>cdwriter-device</replaceable> -tao -eject <replaceable>image-file.iso</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
-
     </section>
-    
+
     <section id="sn-preparing-usb-media">
       <title>Preparing USB Boot Media</title>
 
       <warning>
-	<title>Data Loss</title>
-	<para>
-	  <emphasis>This procedure destroys data on the
-	    media.</emphasis> Back up any important information before
-	  you begin.  Some models of USB media use additional partitions
-	  or software to provide functions such as encryption.  This
-	  procedure may make it difficult or impossible to access these
-	  special areas on your boot media.
-	</para>
+        <title>Data Loss</title>
+
+        <para>
+          <emphasis>This procedure destroys data on the
+          media.</emphasis> Back up any important information before you
+          begin. Some models of USB media use additional partitions or
+          software to provide functions such as encryption. This
+          procedure may make it difficult or impossible to access these
+          special areas on your boot media.
+        </para>
       </warning>
 
       <para>
-	The <filename>images/diskboot.img</filename> file on the first
-	&FC; installation disc is a boot image designed for USB media.
-	This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;.
+        The <filename>images/diskboot.img</filename> file on the first
+        &FC; installation disc is a boot image designed for USB media.
+        This file also appears on FTP and Web sites providing &FC;.
       </para>
 
       <para>
-	Several software utilities are available for Windows and Linux
-	that can write image files to a device.  Linux includes the
-	<command>dd</command> command for this purpose.  To write an
-	image file to boot media with <command>dd</command> on a current
-	version of &FC;:
+        Several software utilities are available for Windows and Linux
+        that can write image files to a device. Linux includes the
+        <command>dd</command> command for this purpose. To write an
+        image file to boot media with <command>dd</command> on a current
+        version of &FC;:
       </para>
-
       <procedure>
-	<step>
-	  <para>
-	    Locate the image file.
-	  </para>
-	</step>
-	<step>
-	  <para>
-	    Attach or insert the media.
-	  </para>
-	</step>
-	<step>
-	  <para>
-	    Your system may automatically detect and open the media. If
-	    that happens, close or unmount the media before continuing.
-	  </para>
-	</step>
-	<step>
-	  <para>
-	    Open a terminal window.
-	  </para>
-	</step>
-	<step>
-	  <para>
-	    In the terminal window, type the following command:
-	  </para>
-
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Locate the image file.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Attach or insert the media.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Your system may automatically detect and open the media. If
+            that happens, close or unmount the media before continuing.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            Open a terminal window.
+          </para>
+        </step>
+        <step>
+          <para>
+            In the terminal window, type the following command:
+          </para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>dd if=diskboot.img of=/dev/sda</userinput>
 </screen>
-
-	</step>
+        </step>
       </procedure>
-
     </section>
-
   </section>
-
-  
 </preface>
 
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--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	26 Nov 2005 16:59:27 -0000	1.15
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 13:48:41 -0000	1.16
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
 
 <chapter id="ch-other-install-methods">
-  <title>Other Installation Methods</title>
-
+  <title>Alternative Installation Methods</title>
   <para>
     The installation method screen below appears if one of the following
     is true:
@@ -10,17 +9,17 @@
   <orderedlist>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-	You booted with PXE, USB media, or boot-only CD or DVD media.
+        You booted with PXE, USB media, or boot-only CD or DVD media.
       </para>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
       <para>
-	You entered the <option>askmethod</option> option at the
-	<prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt.
+        You entered the <option>askmethod</option> option at the
+        <prompt>boot:</prompt>
+        prompt.
       </para>
     </listitem>
   </orderedlist>
-
   <figure id="fig-install-method">
     <title>Installation Method Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
@@ -37,214 +36,203 @@
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
-
   <para>
     Highlight the appropriate installation method on the list, and
     select <guibutton>OK</guibutton>.
   </para>
-
   <note>
     <title>CD/DVD Activity</title>
+
     <para>
       If the first &FC; distribution installation disc is in your
       computer's CD or DVD drive, the installation program loads its
-      next stage from that disc.  The installation program still
+      next stage from that disc. The installation program still
       downloads <emphasis>package data</emphasis> from the source you
       choose.
     </para>
   </note>
-
-
   <section id="sn-install-method-server">
     <title>Installation from a Network Server</title>
 
     <para>
       You may install &FC; from a network server using FTP, HTTP, or
       <indexterm>
-	<primary>NFS (Network File System)</primary>
-	<secondary>install from</secondary>
-      </indexterm> NFS protocols.  <!-- These installation methods
-      require a properly configured server.  Setting up an installation
-      server is detailed in a separate tutorial. [This comment can be
-      removed when the tutorial exists. - PWF.] -->
+      <primary>NFS (Network File System)</primary>
+      <secondary>install from</secondary>
+      </indexterm> NFS protocols. Refer to
+      <xref linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation"/> for
+      information on installation servers.
     </para>
 
-
     <section id="sn-installer-tcpip">
       <title>TCP/IP Configuration</title>
 
       <para>
-	By default, the installation program uses DHCP to automatically
-	provide the network settings.  If your network has no DHCP
-	server, clear the checkbox labeled <guibutton>Use dynamic IP
-	  configuration</guibutton> and enter the settings manually.
-	Select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
+        By default, the installation program uses DHCP to automatically
+        provide the network settings. If your network has no DHCP
+        server, clear the checkbox labeled <guibutton>Use dynamic IP
+        configuration</guibutton> and enter the settings manually.
+        Select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
       </para>
-
       <figure id="fig-inst-ipsetup">
-	<title>Configure TCP/IP Dialog</title>
-	<mediaobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/inst-ipsetup.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/inst-ipsetup.png" format="PNG"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <textobject>
-	    <phrase>
+        <title>Configure TCP/IP Dialog</title>
+        <mediaobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/inst-ipsetup.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/inst-ipsetup.png" format="PNG"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <textobject>
+            <phrase>
 	      TCP/IP configuration dialog.
 	    </phrase>
-	  </textobject>
-	</mediaobject>
+          </textobject>
+        </mediaobject>
       </figure>
-
       <para>
-	These settings apply only during the installation process.  The
-	installation program allows you to configure the final network
-	configuration later.
+        These settings apply only during the installation process. The
+        installation program allows you to configure the final network
+        configuration later.
       </para>
-
     </section>
 
-
     <section id="sn-installer-service-settings">
       <title>Network Service Setup</title>
 
       <para>
-	The FTP, HTTP, and NFS service setup dialogs are very similar.
-	Each requires the name or IP address of the server, and a
-	directory where the installation tree resides.
+        The FTP, HTTP, and NFS service setup dialogs are very similar.
+        Each requires the name or IP address of the server, and a
+        directory where the installation files reside. To use a public
+        server, or mirror website, refer to
+        <xref linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation"/> for
+        information on valid server names and directory paths.
       </para>
-
       <figure id="fig-ftp-setup">
-	<title>FTP Setup Dialog</title>
-	<mediaobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <textobject>
-	    <phrase>
+        <title>FTP Setup Dialog</title>
+        <mediaobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <textobject>
+            <phrase>
 	      FTP setup dialog.
 	    </phrase>
-	  </textobject>
-	</mediaobject>
+          </textobject>
+        </mediaobject>
       </figure>
-
       <para>
-	The FTP service setup dialog also has an option for
-	<guilabel>non-anonymous FTP</guilabel>.  If your FTP server does
-	not provide anonymous access, select this check box, and provide
-	an account name and password in the following dialog.  Select
-	<guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
+        The FTP service setup dialog also has an option for
+        <guilabel>non-anonymous FTP</guilabel>. If your FTP server does
+        not provide anonymous access, select this check box, and provide
+        an account name and password in the following dialog. Select
+        <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
       </para>
-
       <figure id="fig-ftp-setup-further">
-	<title>Non-anonymous FTP Account Dialog</title>
-	<mediaobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup-further.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <imageobject>
-	    <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup-further.png" format="PNG"/>
-	  </imageobject>
-	  <textobject>
-	    <phrase>
+        <title>Non-anonymous FTP Account Dialog</title>
+        <mediaobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup-further.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <imageobject>
+            <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/ftp-setup-further.png" format="PNG"/>
+          </imageobject>
+          <textobject>
+            <phrase>
 	      Non-anonymous FTP account dialog.
 	    </phrase>
-	  </textobject>
-	</mediaobject>
+          </textobject>
+        </mediaobject>
       </figure>
-
     </section>
-
   </section>
-
-
   <section id="sn-installing-from-harddrive">
     <title>Installation from a Hard Drive</title>
 
     <para>
       You may install from a hard drive that contains the ISO image
-      files for the &FED; discs.  The hard drive may be internal to the
-      computer or attached by USB.  The partition on the hard drive
+      files for the &FED; discs. The hard drive may be internal to the
+      computer or attached by USB. The partition on the hard drive
       holding the ISO files must be formatted with the <indexterm>
-	<primary>ext2</primary>
-	<see>file systems</see>
+      <primary>ext2</primary>
+      <see>file systems</see>
       </indexterm><indexterm>
-	<primary>file systems</primary>
-	<secondary>ext2</secondary>
+      <primary>file systems</primary>
+      <secondary>ext2</secondary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>ext2</firstterm>, <indexterm>
-	<primary>ext3</primary>
-	<see>file systems</see>
+      <primary>ext3</primary>
+      <see>file systems</see>
       </indexterm><indexterm>
-	<primary>file systems</primary>
-	<secondary>ext3</secondary>
+      <primary>file systems</primary>
+      <secondary>ext3</secondary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>ext3</firstterm> or <indexterm>
-	<primary>vfat</primary>
-	<see>file systems</see>
+      <primary>vfat</primary>
+      <see>file systems</see>
       </indexterm><indexterm>
-	<primary>file systems</primary>
-	<secondary>vfat</secondary>
+      <primary>file systems</primary>
+      <secondary>vfat</secondary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>vfat</firstterm> file system. In &FED;,
       <systemitem class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem> includes a range
       of file systems, such as FAT-16 and FAT-32, found on most
-      removable media.  External hard drives usually contain <systemitem
-	class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem> (FAT-32) file systems.
-      Some Microsoft Windows systems also use <systemitem
-	class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem> file systems on internal
-      hard disk partitions.
+      removable media. External hard drives usually contain
+      <systemitem
+	class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem> (FAT-32) file
+      systems. Some Microsoft Windows systems also use
+      <systemitem
+	class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem> file systems on
+      internal hard disk partitions.
     </para>
 
     <note>
       <title>FAT-16, FAT-32, and <systemitem
 	  class="filesystem">vfat</systemitem></title>
+
       <para>
-	Before you begin installation from a hard drive, check the
-	partition type to ensure that &FED; can read it.  To check a
-	partition's file system under Windows, use the <application>Disk
-	  Management</application> tool.  To check a partition's file
-	system under Linux, use the <command>fdisk</command> utility.
+        Before you begin installation from a hard drive, check the
+        partition type to ensure that &FED; can read it. To check a
+        partition's file system under Windows, use the <application>Disk
+        Management</application> tool. To check a partition's file
+        system under Linux, use the <command>fdisk</command> utility.
       </para>
     </note>
 
     <para>
       You cannot use ISO files on partitions controlled by LVM (Logical
-      Volume Management). Refer to <xref
-	linkend="sn-partitioning-general" /> for more information about
-      file systems.
+      Volume Management). Refer to
+      <xref
+	linkend="sn-partitioning-general" /> for more information
+      about file systems.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       If you choose this option, the following screen appears:
     </para>
-
     <figure id="fig-hdd-instmethod">
       <title>Select Partition Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/hdd-instmethod.eps" format="EPS"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/hdd-instmethod.png" format="PNG"/>
-	</imageobject>
-	<textobject>
-	  <phrase>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/hdd-instmethod.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/hdd-instmethod.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>
 	    Select partition screen.
 	  </phrase>
-	</textobject>
+        </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
-
     <para>
       Select the partition containing the ISO files from the list of
-      available partitions.  Internal IDE drive device names begin with
-      <filename>/dev/hd</filename>.  SCSI or USB drive device names
-      begin with <filename>/dev/sd</filename>.  Each individual drive
-      has its own letter, for example <filename>/dev/hda</filename>.
-      Each partition on a drive is numbered, for example
+      available partitions. Internal IDE drive device names begin with
+      <filename>/dev/hd</filename>. SCSI or USB drive device names begin
+      with <filename>/dev/sd</filename>. Each individual drive has its
+      own letter, for example <filename>/dev/hda</filename>. Each
+      partition on a drive is numbered, for example
       <filename>/dev/sda1</filename>.
     </para>
 
@@ -257,9 +245,7 @@
     <para>
       Select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.
     </para>
-
   </section>
-
 </chapter>
 
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