install-guide fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,1.8,1.9

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13180

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:16 -0000	1.9
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 
     <para>
       Avoid disabling the firewall.  If you believe it is necessary to
-      do so, however, select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
+      do so, select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
     </para>
 
     <tip>