install-guide fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml,1.6,1.7

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13249

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml	27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-installtypes-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:35 -0000	1.7
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
       connections from other systems.  Although &FED; connects to NFS
       services on other systems, the NFS <emphasis>sharing</emphasis>
       component is disabled by default.  You may configure your &FED;
-      system after installation to offer email, NFS or print services.
+      system after installation to offer email, NFS, or print services.
       The SSH service is enabled by default.
     </para>