install-guide fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.12, 1.13

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13343

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	29 May 2005 13:38:55 -0000	1.12
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:19:01 -0000	1.13
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
     <para>
       &FC; divides included software into <indexterm>
 	<primary>package groups</primary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm> which make
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm> that make
       software selection easier.
     </para>
 
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
     <para>
       To change which packages within a selected group will be
       installed, select the <guilabel>Details</guilabel> link next to
-      the name of the group.  &FED; automatically installs
+      the name of the group.  &FC; automatically installs
       <guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group if the group is
       selected.  Change the selection of <guilabel>Optional
 	Packages</guilabel> by using the checkbox next to the name of
@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      &FED; lists with each group the number of packages currently
+      &FC; lists with each group the number of packages currently
       selected for installation, and the total number of packages within
       that group.
     </para>
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@
     <title>Additional Language Support</title>
 
     <para>
-      Your &FED; system automatically supports the language that you
+      Your &FC; system automatically supports the language that you
       selected at the start of the installation process.  To include
       support for additional languages, select the packages for those
       languages from the <guilabel>Language Support</guilabel> package
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>, &FED; installs
-      <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided.  Although &FED;
+      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>, &FC; installs
+      <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided.  Although &FC;
       installs many additional network services in this package group,
       some are not enabled after installation. This option may be useful
       for some testing and development purposes.
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@
 
     <para>
       After you choose the desired packages, select
-      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.  &FED; checks your
+      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.  &FC; checks your
       selection, and automatically adds any extra packages required to
       use the software you select.
     </para>