fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu May 5 21:15:32 UTC 2005
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv10951
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
Log Message:
Amendments for compliance with style guidelines.
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 3 May 2005 12:19:44 -0000 1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 5 May 2005 21:15:30 -0000 1.4
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
<!-- $Id: -->
<chapter id="ch-firstboot">
- <title>The Setup Agent</title>
+ <title>On First Boot</title>
<para>
- The first time that you load a new installation of &FC; the Setup
- Agent will run, enabling you to configure the basic elements of the
- system.
+ The Setup Agent will run the first time that you load a new
+ installation of &FC;, enabling you to configure the basic elements
+ of the system.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-welcome">
@@ -33,10 +33,8 @@
<note>
<title>The Setup Agent requires a graphical interface</title>
<para>
- The Setup Agent cannot run if you chose to install a system with
- no graphical interface. In this case you must manually configure
- a user account for yourself, and if necessary, adjust the system
- date and time.
+ If your system does not have a graphical interface you must
+ manually carry out these configuration tasks.
</para>
</note>
@@ -80,8 +78,8 @@
<title>Date and Time</title>
<para>
- You can either set the date and time of your system, or use
- network time servers (NTP). If possible you should use NTP
+ You can either set the date and time of your system, or use NTP
+ (network time protocol). If possible you should use NTP
servers so that your system clock will automatically be kept
accurate.
</para>
@@ -131,9 +129,8 @@
<para>
To configure your system to use network time servers you must
<guilabel>Enable Network Time Protocol</guilabel>. This
- disables thesettings on the <guilabel>Date and Time</guilabel>
- tab and allows you to access to the other settings on this
- display.
+ disables the settings on the <guilabel>Date and Time</guilabel>
+ tab and allows you to access to the other settings on this screen.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-time-ntp">
@@ -161,17 +158,6 @@
becomes unavailable.
</para>
- <tip>
- <title>You do not need to edit the list of NTP servers</title>
- <para>
- The three server clusters provide a highly reliable method of
- setting your system clock. You only need change the list of
- <guilabel>NTP Servers</guilabel> if your system does not have
- full access to the Internet. In this case replace the listed
- servers with the time servers on your network.
- </para>
- </tip>
-
<para> To use an additional time server either select it from the
<guilabel>Server</guilabel> drop-down box, or type the DNS name
in the box, and <guilabel>Add</guilabel>. To remove a server or
@@ -295,8 +281,8 @@
manufacturer to view the models of monitor. Select the correct
model from the list and click <guibutton>OK</guibutton>. If none
of the listed models match your monitor, select the closest match
- from the <guilabel>Generic CRT Display</guilabel> or
- <guilabel>Generic LCD Display</guilabel>, as appropriate.
+ from either the <guilabel>Generic CRT Display</guilabel> list or
+ the <guilabel>Generic LCD Display</guilabel> list.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-display-monitor">
@@ -367,11 +353,11 @@
<tip>
<title>Changing the sound card</title>
<para>
- If you have to reconfigure the sound card later, use the
- <application>system-config-soundcard</application> utility.
- From the main menu, choose <menuchoice><guimenu>System
- Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Soundcard
- Detection</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
+ Use the <application>system-config-soundcard</application> utility
+ to redetect your current sound card, if it is not automatically
+ configured after a change of hardware. From the main menu, choose
+ <menuchoice><guimenu>System
+ Settings</guimenu><guimenuitem>Soundcard Detection</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
</para>
</tip>
@@ -404,8 +390,9 @@
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- <para>Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to move on to the final
- screen.</para>
+ <para>
+ Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to move on to the final screen.
+ </para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-finish">
<title>Finish Setup Screen</title>
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