fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 16:13:19 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv26489/install-guide

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml 
Log Message:
Style changes


Index: fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml	2 May 2005 22:18:42 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-locale-en.xml	9 May 2005 16:13:17 -0000	1.2
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <para>
     If the installation system fails to identify the display hardware on
-    your computer, it will display text screens rather than the default
+    your computer, it displays text screens rather than the default
     graphical interface.  The text screens provide the same functions as
     the standard screens. Later in the installation process you can
     manually specify your display hardware.
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@
 
   <important>
     <para>
-      Network installations with HTTP and FTP will always use text
-      screens on systems with less than 128Mb of memory.
+      Network installations with HTTP and FTP always use text screens on
+      systems with less than 128Mb of memory.
     </para>
   </important>
 
@@ -22,10 +22,7 @@
 
     <para>
       The installation program displays a list of languages supported by
-      &FED;.  The installation process continues in this language. This
-      language also becomes the default language for your system. The
-      installation program provides additional language support at a
-      later stage.
+      &FED;.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-lang-selection">
@@ -80,7 +77,10 @@
 
     <para>
       Highlight the correct layout on the list, and select
-      <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
+      <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.  The installation process continues
+      in this language. This language also becomes the default language
+      for your system. The installation program provides additional
+      language support at a later stage.
     </para>
 
   </section>




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