fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 22:47:16 UTC 2005


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4050

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml 
Log Message:

Minor style and word corrections.



Index: fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml	2 May 2005 22:24:28 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml	9 May 2005 22:47:14 -0000	1.3
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
   <title>Sixth Step: Time Zone Selection</title>
 
   <para>
-      You must specify the correct timezone for the location of your
+      You must specify the correct time zone for the location of your
       computer. This is necessary even if you will be using a network time
       service (NTP) to maintain the accuracy of the system clock.
 </para>
 
   <para>
-      There are two methods for selecting the timezone.  These are both visible on the
-      screen:
+      There are two methods for selecting the time zone.  These are both visible on the
+      screen.
 </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-timezone">
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
     <title><trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark> will alter the
     hardware clock</title>
      <para>
-	  Do not enable the option to take UTC from the hardware clock if your
+	  Do not enable the option to take UTC time from the hardware clock if your
      machine has multiple operating systems, and one of the other operating
      systems is a version of <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark>
      <trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark>. <trademark




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