fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 22:47:16 UTC 2005
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4050
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml
Log Message:
Minor style and word corrections.
Index: fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml 2 May 2005 22:24:28 -0000 1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-timezone-en.xml 9 May 2005 22:47:14 -0000 1.3
@@ -4,14 +4,14 @@
<title>Sixth Step: Time Zone Selection</title>
<para>
- You must specify the correct timezone for the location of your
+ You must specify the correct time zone for the location of your
computer. This is necessary even if you will be using a network time
service (NTP) to maintain the accuracy of the system clock.
</para>
<para>
- There are two methods for selecting the timezone. These are both visible on the
- screen:
+ There are two methods for selecting the time zone. These are both visible on the
+ screen.
</para>
<figure id="fig-timezone">
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
<title><trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark> will alter the
hardware clock</title>
<para>
- Do not enable the option to take UTC from the hardware clock if your
+ Do not enable the option to take UTC time from the hardware clock if your
machine has multiple operating systems, and one of the other operating
systems is a version of <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark>
<trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark>. <trademark
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