install-guide fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml,1.6,1.7

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat May 14 15:22:54 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

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diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	12 May 2005 23:55:56 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	14 May 2005 15:22:52 -0000	1.7
@@ -4,29 +4,33 @@
 
   <para>
     A <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> is a small program that reads
-    the operating system from mass storage and gets it ready to be run
-    in main memory. &FED; defaults to the
-    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader.
+    and launches the operating system. &FED; uses the
+    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader by default.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    If you are building a multi-boot system, you probably already have a
-    boot loader. While you can continue to use the existing boot loader,
-    it does not recognize the Linux partitions and you will not be able
-    to boot &FED; easily. We recommend that you use
-    <application>GRUB</application> as your boot loader because it boots
-    both Linux and most other operating systems as well. Simply follow
-    the directions in this section and <application>GRUB</application>
-    will replace any existing boot loader.
+    You may have a boot loader installed on your system already.  If
+    your boot loader does not recognize Linux partitions, you may not be
+    able to boot &FED;.  Use <application>GRUB</application> as your
+    boot loader to boot Linux and most other operating systems.  Follow
+    the directions in this section to install
+    <application>GRUB</application>.
   </para>
 
+  <warning>
+    <title>Installing GRUB</title>
+    <para>
+      If you install GRUB, it may overwrite your existing boot loader.
+    </para>
+  </warning>
+
   <para>
-      <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-config-fig"/> shows the boot
-    loader configuration choices.
+    <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-config-fig"/> shows the boot loader
+    configuration choices.
   </para>
   <figure id="ch-bootloader-config-fig">
     <title>
-      Boot loader Configuration Screen
+      Boot Loader Configuration Screen
     </title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
@@ -36,24 +40,25 @@
         <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloader-config.png" format="PNG" width="500"/>
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
-        <phrase>Boot loader Configuration Screen</phrase>
+        <phrase>Boot loader configuration screen</phrase>
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
 
   <section id="ch-bootloader-config-change">
     <title>
-      Keeping Your Existing Boot loader Settings
+      Keeping Your Existing Boot Loader Settings
     </title>
     <para>
-      By default, the boot loader will be installed in the
-      <firstterm>master boot record</firstterm>, or <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>
-      of the device for the root file system. To change the selection,
-      or to decline to install a new boot loader, press the
-      <guibutton>Change boot loader</guibutton>. The pop-up shown in
-      <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-change-fig"/>
-      allows you to avoid installing or changing your existing boot
-      loader settings.
+      By default, the installation program installs GRUB in the
+      <firstterm>master boot record</firstterm>, <indexterm>
+	<primary>master boot record</primary>
+      </indexterm> or <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>, of the device for the root
+      file system.  To change or decline installation of a new boot
+      loader, select the <guibutton>Change boot loader</guibutton>
+      button.  The pop-up shown in
+      <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-change-fig"/> allows you to avoid
+      installing or changing your existing boot loader settings.
     </para>
     <figure id="ch-bootloader-change-fig">
       <title>Change Boot Loader</title>
@@ -65,7 +70,7 @@
           <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloader-change.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
-          <phrase>Change Boot Loader Pop-up</phrase>
+          <phrase>Change boot loader dialog</phrase>
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
@@ -73,7 +78,7 @@
       <para>
         If you decline to install any boot loader, you will not be able
 	to boot Linux after the installation unless you choose to
-	generate a start-up disk later in the installation process.
+	generate a startup disk.  Refer to 
       </para>
     </note>
   </section>
@@ -86,9 +91,9 @@
       If you have other operating systems already installed, &FED;
       attempts to automatically detect and configure
       <application>GRUB</application> so that any installed
-      <abbrev>OS</abbrev> can be booted. You can also manually configure
+      <abbrev>OS</abbrev> can be booted.  You can also manually configure
       any additional operating systems if
-      <application>GRUB</application> does not detect them. To the right
+      <application>GRUB</application> does not detect them.  To the right
       of the partition display there are three buttons that allow you to
       add, remove, or change the detected operating system settings.
     </para>
@@ -105,9 +110,9 @@
 	  </para>
           <para>
 	    You must know the disk partition holding the bootable
-	    operating system. Select the disk partition holding the
+	    operating system.  Select the disk partition holding the
 	    bootable operating system from the drop-down list and give
-	    the entry a label. The label is shown at boot-time when
+	    the entry a label.  The label is shown at boot-time when
 	    <application>GRUB</application> presents its boot menu.
 	  </para>
         </glossdef>
@@ -160,9 +165,9 @@
     <para>
       A useful <application>GRUB</application> feature is that it can
       browse disk files itself on many file system layouts, not relying
-      on any active <abbrev>OS</abbrev>. An operator can interrupt the
+      on any active <abbrev>OS</abbrev>.  An operator can interrupt the
       booting sequence to choose a different image file to boot, or to
-      change the command line arguments passed to the kernel. A system
+      change the command line arguments passed to the kernel.  A system
       administrator can use the features to recover a system that will
       not boot.
     </para>
@@ -179,18 +184,18 @@
       You do not have to set a <application>GRUB</application> password.
       If you have trusted operators, or a physically secured system with
       controlled console access, you probably do not need a boot
-      password. Likewise if you have a single-user system and you do not
+      password.  Likewise if you have a single-user system and you do not
       worry about passers-by rebooting your system and fiddling with it,
       you can probably dispense with a boot password.
     </para>
     <para>
       If you decide to use a boot password, mark the checkbox beside the
-      <guibutton>Use a boot loader password</guibutton> legend. The
+      <guibutton>Use a boot loader password</guibutton> legend.  The
       <guibutton>Change password</guibutton> button will become
-      un-grayed and selectable. Press the <guibutton>Change
+      un-grayed and selectable.  Press the <guibutton>Change
 	password</guibutton> button to display the pop-up shown in
       <xref
-	linkend="ch-bootloader-password-fig"/>. Carefully type in your
+	linkend="ch-bootloader-password-fig"/>.  Carefully type in your
       desired password and then confirm its correctness by typing it
       again in the space provided.
     </para>
@@ -211,7 +216,7 @@
     <warning>
       <para>
         Choose a password that is easy for you to remember but hard for
-	others to guess. The password is stored in encrypted form and
+	others to guess.  The password is stored in encrypted form and
 	<emphasis>cannot</emphasis> be recovered.
       </para>
       <para>
@@ -227,7 +232,7 @@
       Advanced Boot loader Options
     </title>
     <para>
-      The default boot options are adequate for most situations. The
+      The default boot options are adequate for most situations.  The
       <application>GRUB</application> boot loader will be stored in the
       <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>, overwriting any existing boot loader.
     </para>
@@ -240,14 +245,14 @@
     <para>
       You may also need the advanced options if your
       <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev> has numbered your disk devices differently
-      than Linux expects. On some systems, Linux may not configure the
+      than Linux expects.  On some systems, Linux may not configure the
       disk drive geometry for large disks correctly because of a broken
-      <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev>. As a work around, mark the <guibutton>Force
+      <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev>.  As a work around, mark the <guibutton>Force
 	LBA32</guibutton> checkbox.
     </para>
     <para>
       The Linux kernel usually auto-detects its environment correctly,
-      and no additional kernel parameters are needed. However, it is
+      and no additional kernel parameters are needed.  However, it is
       possible to provide any needed kernel parameter using the advanced
       boot loader options.
     </para>
@@ -255,17 +260,16 @@
       <para>
         For a partial list of the kernel command line parameters, type
 	the following command in a terminal window: <userinput>man
-	  bootparam</userinput>. Note that these many not be up to date;
-	refer to the documentation provided in the kernel sources for
-	the authoritative list.
+	  bootparam</userinput>.  For a comprehensive and authoritative
+	list, refer to the documentation provided in the kernel sources.
       </para>
     </note>
     <para>
       If you need to alter any of these settings, mark the
       <guibutton>Configure advanced boot loader options</guibutton>
-      checkbox. Then, when you press <guibutton>Next</guibutton>, the
-      menu shown
-      in <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-advanced-fig"/> will appear.
+      checkbox.  Then, when you press <guibutton>Next</guibutton>, the
+      menu shown in <xref linkend="ch-bootloader-advanced-fig"/> will
+      appear.
     </para>
     <note>
       <para>




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