install-guide fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.10, 1.11

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv25752

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Indexing corrections
- Shorten admonition title (DocG, 8.4.9.1)
-



Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	29 May 2005 16:15:33 -0000	1.10
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	29 May 2005 16:44:42 -0000	1.11
@@ -274,34 +274,37 @@
       <title>Understanding LVM</title>
 
       <indexterm>
-	<primary>LVM, understanding</primary>
+	<primary>LVM</primary>
+	<secondary>understanding</secondary>
       </indexterm>
 
       <para>
-	Formatting the disks on your computer with LVM (Logical Volume
-	Management) partitions provides a number of advantages over
-	standard partitions.
-      </para>
-
-       <para>
-	With LVM, partitions are formatted as <indexterm>
-	<primary>physical volumes</primary></indexterm>
+	LVM (Logical Volume Management) partitions provide a number of
+	advantages over standard partitions.  LVM partitions are
+	formatted as <indexterm>
+	  <primary>LVM</primary>
+	  <secondary>physical volume</secondary></indexterm>
 	<firstterm>physical volumes</firstterm>.  One or more physical
-	volumes are combined to form a <indexterm><primary>volume groups</primary>
+	volumes are combined to form a <indexterm>
+	  <primary>LVM</primary>
+	  <secondary>volume group</secondary>
       </indexterm> <firstterm>volume group</firstterm>.  Each volume
-	group's total storage is then divided into one or more <indexterm>
-	<primary>logical volumes</primary></indexterm> 
+	group's total storage is then divided into one or more
+	<indexterm>
+	  <primary>LVM</primary>
+	  <primary>logical volume</primary></indexterm>
 	<firstterm>logical volumes</firstterm>.  The logical volumes
 	function much like standard data partitions.  They have a file
-	system type, such as ext3, and a mount point. 
+	system type, such as <systemitem
+	  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>, and a mount point. 
       </para>
 
       <para>
 	An administrator may grow or shrink logical volumes without
-	destroying data, unlike standard disk partitions.  If the physical
-	volumes in a volume group are on separate drives then
+	destroying data, unlike standard disk partitions.  If the
+	physical volumes in a volume group are on separate drives then
 	administrators may also spread a logical volume across multiple
-	disks and RAID arrays. 
+	disks and RAID arrays.
       </para>
 
       <note>
@@ -410,10 +413,12 @@
 	    </para>
 	  </note>
           <important>
-           <title><filename>/boot</filename> may not be on an LVM volume</title>
+           <title>LVM and <filename>/boot</filename></title>
            <para>
-	       Create the <filename>/boot</filename> partition before
-	       configuring any volume groups.
+	      The <filename>/boot</filename> partition may not reside on
+	      an LVM volume group.  Create the
+	      <filename>/boot</filename> partition before configuring
+	      any volume groups.
            </para>
           </important>
 	  <para>