install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 rpm-info-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu Feb 9 21:32:39 UTC 2006


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv28143/en

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml rpm-info-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Added a section on the Task Selection screen.
- More syslog material.




Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 21:32:31 -0000	1.2
@@ -298,12 +298,12 @@
       </para>
     </tip>
     <para>
-      The installation system supports two types of VNC connection. You
-      may either start the installation and manually login to the
-      graphical display with a VNC client on another system, or
-      configure the installation system to automatically connect to a
-      VNC client on the network that is running in <firstterm>listening
-      mode</firstterm>.
+      The installation system supports two methods of establishing a VNC
+      connection. You may start the installation, and manually login to
+      the graphical display with a VNC client on another system.
+      Alternatively, you may configure the installation system to
+      automatically connect to a VNC client on the network that is
+      running in <firstterm>listening mode</firstterm>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -447,12 +447,12 @@
 <!-- SE: Note that there is also a "display" option that redirects anaconda's X display to an X server on another system. -->
   </section>
   <section id="sn-remote-logging">
-    <title>Logging to a Remote System</title>
+    <title>Logging to a Remote System During the Installation</title>
 
     <para>
-      By default, the installation system sends log messages to the
-      console. You may configure the system to log to a remote system
-      that runs a
+      By default, the installation process sends log messages to the
+      console as they are generated. You may specify that these messages
+      go to a remote system that runs a
       <indexterm>
         <primary>syslog</primary>
       </indexterm>
@@ -460,9 +460,15 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      To enable remote logging, specify the IP address of the remote
-      system with the <option>syslog</option> option. For example, to
-      connect to a <command>syslog</command> service on the system
+      To configure remote logging, add the <option>syslog</option>
+      option. Specify the IP address of the logging system, and the UDP
+      port number of the log service on that system. By default, syslog
+      services that accept remote messages listen on UDP port
+      <systemitem>514</systemitem>.
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      For example, to connect to a syslog service on the system
       <systemitem
 	class="ipaddress">192.168.1.20</systemitem>, enter
       the following at the
@@ -470,11 +476,11 @@
       prompt:
     </para>
 <screen>
-<userinput>linux syslog=<replaceable>192.168.1.20</replaceable></userinput>
+<userinput>linux syslog=<replaceable>192.168.1.20:514</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
     <para>
-      &FED; uses <command>syslogd</command> to provide a syslog service. The
-      default configuration of <command>syslogd</command> rejects
+      &FED; uses <command>syslogd</command> to provide a syslog service.
+      The default configuration of <command>syslogd</command> rejects
       messages from remote systems.
     </para>
 
@@ -483,16 +489,17 @@
 
       <para>
         The <command>syslogd</command> service includes no security
-        measures. &FED; systems that enable remote access to this
-        service may be attacked by sending large quantities of log
-        messages. In addition, crackers may intercept or falsify
-        messages sent to the service.
+        measures. Crackers may slow or crash systems that permit access
+        to the logging service, by sending large quantities of false log
+        messages. In addition, hostile users may intercept or falsify
+        messages sent to the logging service over the network.
       </para>
     </caution>
 
     <para>
-      To configure a &FED; system to accept log messages from remote systems,
-      edit the file <filename>/etc/sysconfig/syslog</filename>. Add the
+      To configure a &FED; system to accept log messages from other
+      systems on the network, edit the file
+      <filename>/etc/sysconfig/syslog</filename>. Add the
       <option>-r</option> to the <command>SYSLOGD_OPTIONS</command>.
     </para>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 22:31:10 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 21:32:31 -0000	1.3
@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@
 
 <!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
 <!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.17">
-<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2006-02-02">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.18">
+<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2006-02-09">
 <!ENTITY DOCID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
 <!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
 <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
 <!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "5">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.17"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.18"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
 <!ENTITY FDP-INFO SYSTEM "fdp-info-en.xml" >
 
 <!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 21:32:31 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,86 +1,75 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
 
 <chapter id="ch-packageselection">
-  <title>Package Selection</title>
-  <remark role="FIXME">TEXT SUBJECT TO CHANGE: The package selection screen is still being developed.</remark>
+  <title>Software Selection</title>
   <para>
     By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
-    software that is suitable for a desktop system. The package
-    selection screen enables you to customize the set of software to
-    match your requirements.
+    software that is suitable for a desktop system.
   </para>
-  <para>
-    &FED; divides included software into
-    <indexterm>
-      <primary>package groups</primary>
-    </indexterm>
-    <firstterm>package groups</firstterm>. For ease of use, this screen
-    displays the package groups in six categories:
-  </para>
-  <figure id="fig-package-selection">
-    <title>Package Group Selection Screen</title>
+  <figure id="fig-task-selection">
+    <title>Task Selection Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/taskselection-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
       </imageobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.png" format="PNG"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/taskselection-en.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <phrase>
-	    Package group selection screen.
+	    Task selection screen.
 	  </phrase>
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
   <para>
-    To view the package groups for a category, select the category from
-    the list on the left. The list on the right displays the package
-    groups for the currently selected category.
-  </para>
-  <para>
-    To specify a package group for installation, select the checkbox
-    next to the group. The box at the bottom of the screen displays the
-    details of the package group that is currently highlighted.
-    <emphasis>None</emphasis> of the packages from a group will be
-    installed unless the checkbox for that group is selected.
+    To include or remove software for common tasks, select the relevent
+    items from the list:
   </para>
+  <variablelist>
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term>Office and Productivity</term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          This option provides the OpenOffice.org productivity suite.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term>Software Development</term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          This option provides the necessary tools to compile software
+          on your &FED; system.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+
+    <varlistentry>
+      <term>Web server</term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          This option provides the Apache Web server.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+  </variablelist>
   <para>
-    If you select a package group, &FED; automatically installs the base
-    and mandatory packages for that group. To change which optional
-    packages within a selected group will be installed, select the
-    <guibutton>Optional Packages</guibutton> button under the
-    description of the group. Change the selection of
-    <guibutton>Optional Packages</guibutton> by using the checkbox next
-    to the name of the individual package.
+    Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to specify the software
+    packages for your final system in more detail. This option causes
+    the installation processto display an additional customization
+    screen when you select <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.
   </para>
-  <figure id="fig-package-selection-details">
-    <title>Package Group Details Dialog</title>
-    <mediaobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.eps" format="EPS"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <textobject>
-        <phrase>
-	    Package group details dialog.
-	  </phrase>
-      </textobject>
-    </mediaobject>
-  </figure>
-  <tip>
-    <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
+  <note>
+    <title>Installing Support for Additional Languages</title>
+
     <para>
-      The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot
-      your system, use the <application>pirut</application> tool to make
-      different software selections for your system. To run this tool,
-      from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
-      <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem>
-      </menuchoice>.
+      Select <guilabel>Customize now</guilabel> to install support for
+      additional languages. Refer to <xref linkend="sn-lang-packages"/>
+      for more information on configuring language support.
     </para>
-  </tip>
+  </note>
   <section id="sn-mandatory-services">
     <title>Core Network Services</title>
 
@@ -91,6 +80,11 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
+          centralized logging through syslog
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
           email through SMTP (Simple Mail Transfer Protocol)
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -121,11 +115,11 @@
     <para>
       Some automated processes on your Fedora system use the email
       service to send reports and messages to the system administrator.
-      By default, the email and printing services do not accept
-      connections from other systems. Although Fedora connects to NFS
-      services on other systems, the NFS sharing component is disabled
-      by default. You may configure your Fedora system after
-      installation to offer email, NFS, or print services.
+      By default, the email, logging, and printing services do not
+      accept connections from other systems. Although Fedora connects to
+      NFS services on other systems, the NFS sharing component is
+      disabled by default. You may configure your Fedora system after
+      installation to offer email, logging, NFS, or print services.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -134,6 +128,84 @@
       process completes.
     </para>
   </section>
+  <section id="sn-package-selection">
+    <title>Customizing the Software Selection</title>
+
+    <para>
+      &FED; divides the included software into
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>package groups</primary>
+      </indexterm>
+      <firstterm>package groups</firstterm>. For ease of use, the
+      package selection screen displays these groups as six categories:
+    </para>
+    <figure id="fig-package-selection">
+      <title>Package Group Selection Screen</title>
+      <mediaobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>
+	    Package group selection screen.
+	  </phrase>
+        </textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
+    <para>
+      To view the package groups for a category, select the category
+      from the list on the left. The list on the right displays the
+      package groups for the currently selected category.
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      To specify a package group for installation, select the checkbox
+      next to the group. The box at the bottom of the screen displays
+      the details of the package group that is currently highlighted.
+      <emphasis>None</emphasis> of the packages from a group will be
+      installed unless the checkbox for that group is selected.
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      If you select a package group, &FED; automatically installs the
+      base and mandatory packages for that group. To change which
+      optional packages within a selected group will be installed,
+      select the <guibutton>Optional Packages</guibutton> button under
+      the description of the group. Change the selection of
+      <guibutton>Optional Packages</guibutton> by using the checkbox
+      next to the name of the individual package.
+    </para>
+    <figure id="fig-package-selection-details">
+      <title>Package Group Details Dialog</title>
+      <mediaobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>
+	    Package group details dialog.
+	  </phrase>
+        </textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
+    <tip>
+      <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
+      <para>
+        The packages that you select are not permanent. After you boot
+        your system, use the <application>pirut</application> tool to
+        make different software selections for your system. To run this
+        tool, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+        <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Add/Remove
+        Software</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
+      </para>
+    </tip>
+  </section>
   <section id="sn-lang-packages">
     <title>Additional Language Support</title>
 


Index: rpm-info-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/rpm-info-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- rpm-info-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 22:31:10 -0000	1.2
+++ rpm-info-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 21:32:31 -0000	1.3
@@ -28,10 +28,15 @@
     </translation>
   </titles>
   <changelog order="newest-first">
+    <revision date="2006-02-09" number="1.18" role="doc">
+      <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
+<!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
+      <details>Added the task selection screen.</details>
+    </revision>
     <revision date="2006-02-02" number="1.17" role="doc">
       <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
 <!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
-      <details>Added section on remote logging.</details>
+      <details lang="en">Added section on remote logging.</details>
     </revision>
     <revision date="2006-01-29" number="1.16" role="doc">
       <author worker="StuartEllis"/>




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