install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3 fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 02:32:06 UTC 2006


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv6756

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Amended links for updated screenshots.




Index: fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.2
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 <chapter id="ch-abouttoinstall">
   <title>About to Install</title>
-    
+
   <para>
     No changes are made to your computer until you click the
     <guilabel>Next</guilabel> button.  If you abort the installation
@@ -22,6 +22,12 @@
     </para>
   </important>
 
+    <para>
+      <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
+      </remark>
+    </para>
+
+<!-- SE: Needs screenshot.
   <figure id="fig-about-to-install">
     <title>About to Install Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
@@ -38,11 +44,12 @@
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
-
+-->
   <para>
     Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to begin the installation.
   </para>
 
+<!-- SE: Check this - it doesn't seem to happen on FC5 test2.
   <para>
     If your installation requires more than one disc, &FC; displays a
     list of all discs required to complete the process.  If you do not
@@ -50,6 +57,7 @@
     <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to abort the installation. Otherwise,
     choose <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed with installation.
   </para>
+-->
 
 </chapter>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.2
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@
     <title>Welcome Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-welcome.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootwelcome-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
       </imageobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-welcome.png" format="PNG"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootwelcome-en.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <phrase>
@@ -56,14 +56,14 @@
       <ulink
 	url="http://www.opensource.org/">http://www.opensource.org/</ulink>.
     </para>
-    <figure id="fig-fboot-licence">
+    <figure id="fig-fboot-license">
       <title>License Agreement Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-licence.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootlicense-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-licence.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootlicense-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -105,10 +105,22 @@
       services on your &FED; system.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
-      <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
-      </remark>
-    </para>
+        <figure id="fig-fboot-firewall">
+      <title>Firewall Screen</title>
+      <mediaobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootfirewall-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootfirewall-en.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>
+	    Firewall screen.
+	  </phrase>
+        </textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
 
     <para>
       To enable access to the services listed on this screen, click the
@@ -158,10 +170,22 @@
   <section id="sn-firstboot-selinux">
     <title>&SEL;</title>
 
-    <para>
-      <remark role="FIXME">Needs screenshot.
-      </remark>
-    </para>
+        <figure id="fig-fboot-selinux">
+      <title>&SEL; Screen</title>
+      <mediaobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootselinux-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <imageobject>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootselinux-en.png" format="PNG"/>
+        </imageobject>
+        <textobject>
+          <phrase>
+	    &SEL; screen.
+	  </phrase>
+        </textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
 
     <para>
       The
@@ -269,10 +293,10 @@
       <title>Date and Time Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-time.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetime-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-time.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetime-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -304,10 +328,10 @@
       <title>Date and Time Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-time-ntp.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetimentp-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-time-ntp.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdatetimentp-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -361,10 +385,10 @@
       <title>Display Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-display.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplay-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-display.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplay-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -388,10 +412,10 @@
       <title>Monitor Dialog</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-display-monitor.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplaymonitor-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-display-monitor.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootdisplaymonitor-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -429,10 +453,10 @@
       <title>System User Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-user.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootsystemuser-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-user.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootsystemuser-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -532,10 +556,10 @@
       <title>Finish Setup Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-finish.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootfinish-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-finish.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fbootfinish-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>


Index: fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-installingpackages-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.2
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
     <title>Installing Packages Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installing-inprogress.eps" format="EPS"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installingpackages-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
       </imageobject>
       <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installing-inprogress.png" format="PNG"/>
+        <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/installingpackages-en.png" format="PNG"/>
       </imageobject>
       <textobject>
         <phrase>


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 21:32:31 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.3
@@ -143,10 +143,10 @@
       <title>Package Group Selection Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/packagegroups-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/packagegroups-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>
@@ -182,10 +182,10 @@
       <title>Package Group Details Dialog</title>
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.eps" format="EPS"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/packagegroupdetail-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
         </imageobject>
         <imageobject>
-          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/package-selection-details.png" format="PNG"/>
+          <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/packagegroupdetail-en.png" format="PNG"/>
         </imageobject>
         <textobject>
           <phrase>


Index: fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	9 Feb 2006 23:22:40 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-upgrading-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.3
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
       <title>Upgrade Bootloader Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
 	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.eps" format="EPS"/>
+	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/upgradebootloader-en.eps" format="EPS"/>
 	</imageobject>
 	<imageobject>
-	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/upgrade-bootloader.png" format="PNG"/>
+	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/upgradebootloader-en.png" format="PNG"/>
 	</imageobject>
 	<textobject>
 	  <phrase>




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