install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,1.2,1.3
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 17:18:57 UTC 2006
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8923
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
Log Message:
- Note about SELinux FAQ
- Eliminate future tense
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000 1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 17:18:49 -0000 1.3
@@ -268,6 +268,10 @@
Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
</para>
</tip>
+ <para>
+ For more information about &SEL;, refer to the &SEL; FAQ at <ulink
+ url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq/"/>.
+ </para>
</section>
<section id="sn-firstboot-datetime">
<title>Date and Time</title>
@@ -344,7 +348,7 @@
By default, &FC; is configured to use three separate groups, or
<firstterm>pools</firstterm>, of time servers. Time server pools
create redundancy, so if one time server is unavailable, your
- system will synchronize with another server.
+ system synchronizes with another server.
</para>
<para>
@@ -542,7 +546,7 @@
<tip>
<title>Changing the Sound Card</title>
<para>
- &FED; will automatically attempt to detect a new sound card if
+ &FED; automatically attempts to detect a new sound card if
you add one to your system. If you need to launch the detection
process manually, choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
<guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Soundcard
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