install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,1.2,1.3

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 17:18:57 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8923

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Note about SELinux FAQ
- Eliminate future tense



Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 02:31:58 -0000	1.2
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 17:18:49 -0000	1.3
@@ -268,6 +268,10 @@
         Level and Firewall</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
       </para>
     </tip>
+    <para>
+      For more information about &SEL;, refer to the &SEL; FAQ at <ulink
+      url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq/"/>.
+    </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-firstboot-datetime">
     <title>Date and Time</title>
@@ -344,7 +348,7 @@
       By default, &FC; is configured to use three separate groups, or
       <firstterm>pools</firstterm>, of time servers. Time server pools
       create redundancy, so if one time server is unavailable, your
-      system will synchronize with another server.
+      system synchronizes with another server.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -542,7 +546,7 @@
     <tip>
       <title>Changing the Sound Card</title>
       <para>
-        &FED; will automatically attempt to detect a new sound card if
+        &FED; automatically attempts to detect a new sound card if
         you add one to your system. If you need to launch the detection
         process manually, choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
         <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Soundcard




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