release-notes/en Desktop-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 Feedback-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 FileSystems-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 Kernel-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Printing-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 ServerTools-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Feb 13 04:10:38 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv14031/en

Modified Files:
	Desktop-en.xml Feedback-en.xml FileSystems-en.xml 
	Kernel-en.xml Printing-en.xml ServerTools-en.xml 
Log Message:
More quick and dirty editing


Index: Desktop-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Desktop-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- Desktop-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.3
+++ Desktop-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -5,11 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Desktop">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Desktop</title>
-    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
-    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para>
-    <section>
-      <title>Fedora Desktop</title>
+    <title>Desktop</title>
       <para>GNOME 2.13.2 and KDE 3.5 Release Candidate 2 has been included in Fedora Core 5 test 2. GNOME 2.14 (or a release candidate) is scheduled to be available as part of Fedora Core 5. </para>
       <para>The current test release has GNOME 2.12.1, together with some previews of technology from the forthcoming GNOME 2.14. Feedback on these packages is especially appreciated. </para>
       <itemizedlist>
@@ -27,19 +23,10 @@
       <screen>yum install nautilus-open-terminal</screen>
       <para>Screensavers except the one providing a blank screen are not installed by default from Fedora Core 4 onwards. Many of the screensavers are found to be offensive or known to abruptly terminate the graphical interface, in particular some of the OpenGL animated ones provided within xscreensaver-gl-extras package. Some of them also provide a unexpected suprise to users. Users who need it can install it using the following command. </para>
       <screen>yum install xscreensaver-extras xscreensaver-gl-extras</screen>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
+    <note>
+      <title>system-config-mouse Removed</title>
           <para>
-            <inlinemediaobject>
-              <imageobject>
-                <imagedata width='16' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/icon-info.png' depth='16'/>
-              </imageobject>
-              <textobject>
-                <phrase>{i}</phrase>
-              </textobject>
-            </inlinemediaobject> system-config-mouse configuration utility has been dropped from this release since synaptic and 3 button mouse configuration is being done automatically during installation and serial mice are not formally supported in Fedora Core anymore. </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </section>
+system-config-mouse configuration utility has been dropped from this release since synaptic and 3 button mouse configuration is being done automatically during installation and serial mice are not formally supported in Fedora Core anymore. </para>
+    </note>
   </section>
 </article>


Index: Feedback-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Feedback-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- Feedback-en.xml	12 Feb 2006 16:13:16 -0000	1.3
+++ Feedback-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Feedback">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Feedback</title>
+    <title>Feedback</title>
     <para>Thanks for your interest in helping us with the release notes by providing feedback.  This section explains how you can give that feedback. </para>
     <section>
       <title>Release Notes Feedback Procedure</title>


Index: FileSystems-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/FileSystems-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- FileSystems-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.3
+++ FileSystems-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -6,7 +6,11 @@
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-FileSystems">
     <title>Docs/Beats/FileSystems</title>
-    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
-    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para>
+<!--    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
+    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions -->
+<!--    about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can -->
+<!--    be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to -->
+<!--    fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para> -->
+    <para><emphasis>No changes to report.</emphasis></para>
   </section>
 </article>


Index: Kernel-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Kernel-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Kernel-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.4
+++ Kernel-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.5
@@ -14,20 +14,12 @@
         <ulink url='http://www.kernel.org/'>http://www.kernel.org/</ulink>
       </para>
       <para>You may obtain a list of any such patches by using the command on the Fedora Core package:  </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>rpm -qpl kernel-<version>.src.rpm</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Changelog</title>
       <para>The package changelog can be retrieved using the following command </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>rpm -q --changelog <kernel-version></screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>If you need a user friendly version of the changelog, refer to <ulink url='http://wiki.kernelnewbies.org/LinuxChanges'>http://wiki.kernelnewbies.org/LinuxChanges</ulink>. A short and full diff of the kernel is available from <ulink url='http://kernel.org/git'>http://kernel.org/git</ulink>. The Fedora version is based on the Linus tree. </para>
       <para>Customisations made for the Fedora version are available from <ulink url='http://cvs.fedora.redhat.com'>http://cvs.fedora.redhat.com</ulink> . </para>
     </section>
@@ -51,82 +43,30 @@
           <para> Kdump kernel for use with kexec/kdump capabilities. Configured sources are available in the <command>kernel-kdump-devel-<version>.<arch>.rpm</command> package. </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-      <para>Sources for all kernel flavors may be installed at the same time. The files will be installed into the <command>/usr/src/kernels/<version>[-xen-hypervisor/xen-guest/kdump]-<arch>/</command> tree. Use the command: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
+      <para>Sources for all kernel flavors may be installed at the same
+          time. The files will be installed into the
+          <command>/usr/src/kernels/<version>[-xen-hypervisor/xen-guest/kdump]-<arch>/</command>
+          tree. Use this command as appropriate: </para>
           <screen>rpm -Uvh kernel-[xen-hypervisor/xen-guest/kdump]-devel-<version>.<arch>.rpm</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-      <para>as appropriate. </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-            
-            <row>
-              <entry>
-                <para>
-                  <inlinemediaobject>
-                    <imageobject>
-                      <imagedata width='16' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/icon-info.png' depth='16'/>
-                    </imageobject>
-                    <textobject>
-                      <phrase>{i}</phrase>
-                    </textobject>
-                  </inlinemediaobject>
-                  <emphasis role='strong'>The default kernels in x86_64 architecture provide the SMP capability</emphasis>
-                </para>
-              </entry>
-            </row>
-            <row>
-              <entry>
+      <important>
+                  <title>Default Kernels in x86_64 Architecture Provide SMP Capability</title>
                 <para> There is no separate SMP kernel available for this architecture in Fedora Core . </para>
-              </entry>
-            </row>
-          </tbody></tgroup></table>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+      </important>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Following Generic Textbooks</title>
       <para>Many of the tutorials, examples, and textbooks about Linux kernel development assume the kernel sources are installed under the <command>/usr/src/linux/</command> directory. If you make a symbolic link, as shown below, you should be able to use those learning materials with the Fedora Core packages. Install the appropriate kernel sources, as shown earlier, and then: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>ln -s /usr/src/kernels/kernel-<all-the-rest> /usr/src/linux</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Preparing for Kernel Development</title>
       <para>Fedora Core  does not include the kernel-source package provided by older versions. Instead, configured sources are available, as described in this kernel flavors section. </para>
       <para>Users that require access to Fedora Core original kernel sources can find them in the kernel .src.rpm package.  </para>
       <para>To create an exploded source tree from this file, perform the following steps: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-            
-            <row>
-              <entry>
-                <para>
-                  <inlinemediaobject>
-                    <imageobject>
-                      <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/alert.png' depth='15'/>
-                    </imageobject>
-                    <textobject>
-                      <phrase>/!\</phrase>
-                    </textobject>
-                  </inlinemediaobject>
-                  <emphasis role='strong'>These Instructions Refer to the Currently-running Kernel</emphasis>
-                </para>
-              </entry>
-            </row>
-            <row>
-              <entry>
+      <important>
+                  <title>These Instructions Refer to the Currently-running Kernel</title>
                 <para> To simplify the following directions, we have assumed that you want to configure the kernel sources to match your currently-running kernel. In the steps below, you must understand that the phrase <version> refers to the kernel version shown by the command: <command>uname -r</command>. </para>
-              </entry>
-            </row>
-          </tbody></tgroup></table>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+      </important>
       <para>1. Obtain the kernel-<version>.src.rpm file from one of the following sources: </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
@@ -141,61 +81,40 @@
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
       <para>2. Install <command>kernel-<version>.src.rpm</command> using the command:  </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>rpm -Uvh kernel-<version>.src.rpm`</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>This writes the RPM contents into <command>/usr/src/redhat/SOURCES</command> and <command>/usr/src/redhat/SPECS</command>. </para>
       <para>3. Prepare the kernel sources using the commands: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>cd /usr/src/redhat/SPECSrpmbuild -bp --target $(arch) kernel-2.6.spec</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>The kernel source tree is then located in the <command>/usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<version>/</command> directory. It is common practice to move the resulting linux-<version> directory to the <command>/usr/src/</command> tree; while not strictly necessary, do this to match the generally-available documentation. </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <screen>cd /usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<version>mv linux-<version> /usr/src/cd /usr/srcln -s ./linux-<version> linuxcd /usr/src/linux</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+          <screen>
+<command>cd /usr/src/redhat/BUILD/kernel-<version>
+mv linux-<version> /usr/src/
+cd /usr/src
+ln -s ./linux-<version> linux
+cd /usr/src/linux</command>
+</screen>
       <para>4. The configurations for the specific kernels shipped in Fedora Core  are in the configs/ directory. For example, the i686 SMP configuration file is named <command>configs/kernel-<version>-i686-smp.config</command>. Issue the following command to place the desired configuration file in the proper place for building: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>cp configs/<desired-config-file> .config</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>You can also find the <command>.config</command> file that matches your current kernel configuration in the <command>/lib/modules/<version>/build/.config</command> file. </para>
       <para>5. Every kernel gets a name based on its version number. This is the value the <command>uname -r</command> command displays. The kernel name is defined by the first four lines of the kernel Makefile. To protect the innocent, the Makefile has been changed to generate a kernel with a different name from that of the running kernel. Before a module can be accepted by the running kernel, that module must have been compiled for a kernel with the correct name. To do this, you must edit the kernel Makefile. </para>
       <para>For example, if the <command>uname -r</command> returns the string <command>2.6.11-1.234_FC4</command>, change the <command>EXTRAVERSION</command> definition from this: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>EXTRAVERSION = -prep</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>to this: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>EXTRAVERSION = -1.234_FC4</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>that is, substitute everything from the final dash onward. </para>
       <para>6. Issue the following command: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
           <screen>make oldconfig</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
       <para>You can then proceed as usual. </para>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Building Only Kernel Modules</title>
       <para>An exploded source tree is not required to build a kernel module, such as your own device driver, against the currently in-use kernel. For example, to build the <command>foo.ko</command> module, create the following Makefile in the directory containing the <command>foo.c</command> file: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <screen>obj-m := foo.oKDIR  := /lib/modules/$(shell uname -r)/buildPWD   := $(shell pwd)default:$(MAKE) -C $(KDIR) M=$(PWD) modules</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+          <screen>
+<computeroutput>obj-m := foo.o
+KDIR  := /lib/modules/$(shell uname -r)/build
+PWD   := $(shell pwd)
+default:$(MAKE) -C $(KDIR) M=$(PWD) modules</computeroutput>
+</screen>
       <para>Issue the <command>make</command> command to build the <command>foo.ko</command> module. </para>
     </section>
     <section>


Index: Printing-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Printing-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- Printing-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.3
+++ Printing-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
@@ -6,7 +6,11 @@
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Printing">
     <title>Docs/Beats/Printing</title>
-    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
-    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para>
+<!--    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
+    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions -->
+<!--    about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can -->
+<!--    be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to -->
+<!--    fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para> -->
+    <para><emphasis>No changes to report.</emphasis></para>
   </section>
 </article>


Index: ServerTools-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/ServerTools-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- ServerTools-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.4
+++ ServerTools-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-ServerTools">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/ServerTools</title>
+    <title>Server Tools</title>
     <para>This section highlights changes and additions to the various GUI server and system configuration tools in Fedora Core. </para>
     <section>
       <title>system-config-printer</title>
@@ -27,11 +27,7 @@
       <section>
         <title>Port Ranges</title>
         <para>When defining "Other Ports" in the <command>system-config-securitylevel</command> tool, port ranges can now be specified.  For example, specifying "6881-6999:tcp" results in the addition of the following line to <command>/etc/sysconfig/iptables</command>: </para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
             <screen>A RH-Firewall-1-INPUT -m state --state NEW -m tcp -p tcp --dport 6881:6999 -j ACCEPT </screen>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
       </section>
     </section>
   </section>




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