release-notes README-en.xml,1.1,1.2

[Jeremy Katz (katzj)]

Author: katzj

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv18613

Modified Files:
	README-en.xml 
Log Message:
some updates to the readme for accuracy for fc5 test3.  this probably needs
actual eyes on it before fc5 final



Index: README-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/README-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- README-en.xml	24 Oct 2005 13:13:33 -0000	1.1
+++ README-en.xml	15 Feb 2006 19:25:12 -0000	1.2
@@ -14,19 +14,19 @@
 <!ENTITY NAME "Fedora"> <!-- The project's (and software's) basic name -->
 <!ENTITY PROJ "&NAME; Project"> <!-- The project's name -->
 <!ENTITY DISTRO "&NAME; Core"> <!-- The software's name -->
-<!ENTITY DISTROVER "4"> <!-- The software's version -->
+<!ENTITY DISTROVER "5 test3"> <!-- The software's version -->
 
 ]>
 
-<article id="index" lang="en" arch="x86;x86_64" os="test;final">
+<article id="index" lang="en" arch="x86;x86_64;ppc" os="test;final">
   <articleinfo>
     <title>&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; README</title>
     <copyright>
-      <year>2005</year>
+      <year>2006</year>
       <holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder>
     </copyright>
     <legalnotice id="legalnotice">
-      <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2005 &PROJ; and
+      <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2006 &PROJ; and
         others.  Refer to the End User License Agreement and individual
         copyright notices in each source package for distribution terms.</para>
 
@@ -85,6 +85,8 @@
   |                               Core used by the installation process
   |----> images                -- boot and driver disk images
   |----> isolinux              -- files necessary to boot from CD-ROM
+  |----> repodata              -- repository information used by the 
+  |                               installation process
   |----> README                -- this file
   |----> RELEASE-NOTES         -- the latest information about this release
   |                               of Fedora Core
@@ -126,7 +128,7 @@
     <para>If you are setting up an installation tree for NFS, FTP, or HTTP
       installations, you need to copy the <filename>RELEASE-NOTES</filename>
       files and all files from the <filename>Fedora</filename> directory on
-      discs 1-3.  On Linux and Unix systems, the following process will properly
+      discs 1-5.  On Linux and Unix systems, the following process will properly
       configure the /target/directory on your server (repeat for each disc):</para>
 
     <orderedlist>
@@ -210,7 +212,7 @@
       properly authorized.  The obligations under this paragraph shall survive
       in perpetuity.</para>
   </section>
-<!--
+
   <section id="s1-test" os="test">
     <title>README Feedback Procedure</title>
 
@@ -232,7 +234,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><guilabel>Version:</guilabel> Not really important (I'm using
+        <para><guilabel>Version:</guilabel> "devel" </para>
           "devel")</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -251,37 +253,9 @@
           what could be improved.</para>
       </listitem>
 
-      <listitem>
-        <para><guilabel>Blocks:</guilabel> 114406 (The README blocker bug
-          number)</para>
-      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
-    <para>A quick way of seeing what sorts of bugs have been posted against the
-      README is to look at the bugs listed in the <guilabel>Bug 114406 depends
-      on:</guilabel> field of the &DISTRO; release notes blocker bug:</para>
-
-    <para><ulink
-        url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=114406">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=114406</ulink></para>
-
-    <para>If you are interested in following the discussion of any of these
-      bugs, feel free to add yourself to the bug's CC list.  That way, you'll
-      get email whenever there are any changes to the bug.</para>
-
-    <para>As bugs are posted for the various parts of the README file,
-      subsequent test versions of these release notes will contain links similar
-      to this one:</para>
-
-    <remark os="test">%%% <ulink
-        url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=114408">https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=114408</ulink>
-        %%%</remark>
-
-    <para>These links point to Bugzilla entries for the information preceding
-  the link.  This makes it easier for people to contribute — just
-      point your browser at the link, add your comments to the bug, and commit
-      your changes.</para>
   </section>
--->
+
 <!--
   <ackno>(
     <emphasis arch="x86">x86</emphasis>