install-guide fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml, 1.8, 1.9 fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml, 1.13, 1.14 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.40, 1.41 fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml, 1.18, 1.19 fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.17, 1.18 fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6 rpm-info.xml, 1.5, 1.6

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Jan 29 20:38:03 UTC 2006


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8184

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml rpm-info.xml 
Log Message:
- Updated indexing.
- Added SSH to Tech Ref section.
- Package Selection is still subject to change at this point.




Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	26 Jan 2006 00:15:39 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.9
@@ -22,17 +22,18 @@
 
     <para>
       The &FED; installation and <firstterm>rescue discs</firstterm> may
-      either boot with <firstterm>rescue mode</firstterm> , or load the
+      either boot with <firstterm>rescue mode</firstterm>, or load the
       installation system. For more information on rescue discs and
       rescue mode, refer to <xref linkend="sn-mode-rescue"/>.
     </para>
   </note>
   <section id="sn-bootoptions-installer">
-    <title>Configuring the Installation System</title>
+    <title>Configuring the Installation System at the
+      <prompt>boot:</prompt>
+      Prompt</title>
 
     <para>
-      You may configure the installation system without affecting the
-      final &FED; system. The
+      The
       <prompt>boot:</prompt>
       prompt enables you to specify a number of settings for the
       installation system. These include:
@@ -70,8 +71,8 @@
       <title>Specifying the Language</title>
 
       <para>
-        To set the language for the installation process screens,
-        specify the ISO code for that language with the
+        To set the language for both the installation process and the
+        final system, specify the ISO code for that language with the
         <option>lang</option> option. For example, the ISO code
         <userinput>fr</userinput> identifies the French language:
       </para>
@@ -95,16 +96,35 @@
 <userinput>linux resolution=<replaceable>1024x768</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
-        To run the installation process in <option>text</option> mode,
-        enter:
+        To run the installation process in
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>text interface</primary>
+        </indexterm>
+        <option>text</option> mode, enter:
       </para>
 <screen>
   <userinput>linux text</userinput>
 </screen>
       <para>
-        To enable support for a serial console, enter
-        <option>serial</option> as an additional option.
+        To enable support for a
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>serial console</primary>
+        </indexterm>
+        serial console, enter <option>serial</option> as an additional
+        option.
       </para>
+
+      <note>
+        <title>Configuring the Installed System</title>
+
+        <para>
+          The installed system runs the Setup Agent the first time that
+          it boots. Use the Setup Agent to configure the display
+          settings for the new system. Refer to
+          <xref linkend="sn-firstboot-display"/> for more information on
+          configuring the display with the Setup Agent.
+        </para>
+      </note>
     </section>
 
     <section id="sn-boot-options-installmethod">
@@ -230,6 +250,16 @@
 <screen>
 <userinput>linux ip=<replaceable>192.168.1.10</replaceable> netmask=<replaceable>255.255.255.0</replaceable> gateway=<replaceable>192.168.1.1</replaceable> dns=<replaceable>192.168.1.2,192.168.1.3</replaceable></userinput>
 </screen>
+      <note>
+        <title>Configuring the Installed System</title>
+
+        <para>
+          Use the Network Configuration screen to specify the network
+          settings for the new system. Refer to
+          <xref linkend="ch-networkconfig"/> for more information on
+          configuring the network settings for the installed system.
+        </para>
+      </note>
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-remote-installation">
@@ -241,6 +271,9 @@
       display requires <command>telnet</command>, which is installed by
       default on &FED; systems. To remotely access the graphical display
       of an installation system, use client software that supports the
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>VNC (Virtual Network Computing)</primary>
+      </indexterm>
       VNC (Virtual Network Computing) display protocol. A number of
       providers offer VNC clients for Microsoft Windows and Mac OS, as
       well as UNIX-based systems.
@@ -248,6 +281,10 @@
     <tip>
       <title>Installing a VNC Client on &FED;</title>
       <para>
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>VNC (Virtual Network Computing)</primary>
+          <secondary>installing client</secondary>
+        </indexterm>
         &FED; includes <application>vncviewer</application>, the client
         provided by the developers of VNC. To obtain
         <application>vncviewer</application>, install the
@@ -259,11 +296,15 @@
       may either start the installation and manually login to the
       graphical display with a VNC client on another system, or
       configure the installation system to automatically connect to a
-      VNC client on the network that is running in
-      <emphasis>listening</emphasis> mode.
+      VNC client on the network that is running in <firstterm>listening
+      mode</firstterm>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>VNC (Virtual Network Computing)</primary>
+        <secondary>enabling</secondary>
+      </indexterm>
       To enable remote graphical access to the installation system,
       enter two options at the prompt:
     </para>
@@ -314,10 +355,14 @@
 
     <para>
       To have the installation system automatically connect to a VNC
-      client, first start the client in listening mode. On &FED;
-      systems, use the <option>-listen</option> option to run
-      <application>vncviewer</application> as a listener. In a terminal
-      window, enter the command:
+      client, first start the client in
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>VNC (Virtual Network Computing)</primary>
+        <secondary>listening mode</secondary>
+      </indexterm>
+      listening mode. On &FED; systems, use the <option>-listen</option>
+      option to run <application>vncviewer</application> as a listener.
+      In a terminal window, enter the command:
     </para>
 <screen>
  <userinput>vncviewer -listen</userinput>
@@ -364,6 +409,9 @@
 </screen>
     <para>
       To enable remote access to a text mode installation, use the
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>Telnet</primary>
+      </indexterm>
       <option>telnet</option> option at the
       <prompt>boot:</prompt>
       prompt:
@@ -396,7 +444,11 @@
     <title>Automating the Installation with Kickstart</title>
 
     <para>
-      A <firstterm>Kickstart</firstterm> file specifies settings for an
+      A
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>Kickstart</primary>
+      </indexterm>
+      <firstterm>Kickstart</firstterm> file specifies settings for an
       installation. Once booted, the installation system may read a
       Kickstart file and carry out the installation process without
       requiring any further input from a user.
@@ -568,10 +620,13 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        Hardware manufacturers may supply driver disks for &FED; with
-        the device, or provide image files to prepare the disks. To
-        obtain the latest drivers, download the correct file from the
-        website of the manufacturer.
+        Hardware manufacturers may supply
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>driver disks</primary>
+        </indexterm>
+        driver disks for &FED; with the device, or provide image files
+        to prepare the disks. To obtain the latest drivers, download the
+        correct file from the website of the manufacturer.
       </para>
 
       <note>
@@ -618,7 +673,7 @@
         The installation system may also read drivers from disk images
         that are held on network servers. Refer to
         <xref linkend="tb-driversources"/> for the supported sources of
-        driver image files.
+        driver disk image files.
       </para>
       <table id="tb-driversources">
         <title>Driver Disk Image Sources</title>
@@ -907,8 +962,12 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        To boot your computer in memory testing mode, enter
-        <userinput>memtest86</userinput> at the
+        To boot your computer in
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>memory testing mode</primary>
+        </indexterm>
+        memory testing mode, enter <userinput>memtest86</userinput> at
+        the
         <prompt>boot:</prompt>
         prompt. The first test starts immediately. By default,
         <command>memtest86</command> carries out a total of ten tests.
@@ -922,11 +981,16 @@
 
     <section id="sn-mode-rescue">
       <title>Booting Your Computer with the Rescue Mode</title>
-
-      <para>
-        You may boot a command-line Linux system from either a rescue
-        disc or the first installation disc, without installing &FED; on
-        the computer. This enables you to use the utilities and
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>rescue mode</primary>
+      </indexterm>
+      <para>
+        You may boot a command-line Linux system from either a
+        <indexterm>
+          <primary>rescue discs</primary>
+        </indexterm>
+        rescue disc or the first installation disc, without installing
+        &FED; on the computer. This enables you to use the utilities and
         functions of a running Linux system to modify or repair an
         installed system.
       </para>


Index: fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 22:36:07 -0000	1.13
+++ fedora-install-guide-bootloader-en.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.14
@@ -1,39 +1,40 @@
 <!-- $Id: -->
+
 <chapter id="ch-bootloader">
   <title>Boot Loader</title>
-
   <para>
     A <firstterm>boot loader</firstterm> is a small program that reads
     and launches the operating system. &FC; uses the
-    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader by default.  If you have
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>GRUB</primary>
+      <secondary>configuring</secondary>
+      <seealso>boot loader</seealso>
+    </indexterm>
+    <application>GRUB</application> boot loader by default. If you have
     multiple operating systems, the boot loader determines which one to
     boot, usually by offering a menu.
   </para>
-
   <para>
-    You may have a boot loader installed on your system already.  An
+    You may have a boot loader installed on your system already. An
     operating system may install its own preferred boot loader, or you
     may have installed a third-party boot loader.If your boot loader
     does not recognize Linux partitions, you may not be able to boot
-    &FC;.  Use <application>GRUB</application> as your boot loader to
-    boot Linux and most other operating systems.  Follow the directions
+    &FC;. Use <application>GRUB</application> as your boot loader to
+    boot Linux and most other operating systems. Follow the directions
     in this section to install <application>GRUB</application>.
   </para>
-
   <warning>
     <title>Installing GRUB</title>
+
     <para>
       If you install GRUB, it may overwrite your existing boot loader.
     </para>
   </warning>
-
   <para>
     The following screen displays boot loader configuration options.
   </para>
   <figure id="fig-bootloader-config">
-    <title>
-      Boot Loader Configuration Screen
-    </title>
+    <title>Boot Loader Configuration Screen</title>
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
         <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/bootloader-config.eps" format="EPS"/>
@@ -46,18 +47,19 @@
       </textobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
-
   <section id="sn-bootloader-config-change">
     <title>Keeping Your Existing Boot Loader Settings</title>
+
     <para>
       By default, the installation program installs GRUB in the
-      <firstterm>master boot record</firstterm>, <indexterm>
-	<primary>master boot record</primary>
-      </indexterm> or <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>, of the device for the root
-      file system.  To change or decline installation of a new boot
-      loader, select the <guibutton>Change boot loader</guibutton>
-      button.  The dialog shown in
-      <xref linkend="fig-bootloader-change"/> allows you to avoid
+      <firstterm>master boot record</firstterm>,
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>master boot record</primary>
+      </indexterm>
+      or <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>, of the device for the root file system.
+      To change or decline installation of a new boot loader, select the
+      <guibutton>Change boot loader</guibutton> button. The dialog shown
+      in <xref linkend="fig-bootloader-change"/> allows you to avoid
       installing or changing your existing boot loader settings.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-bootloader-change">
@@ -75,69 +77,67 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
     <important>
-     <title>Boot Loader Required</title>
+      <title>Boot Loader Required</title>
+
       <para>
-        Your computer must have <application>GRUB</application> or another boot loader installed
-	in order to start, unless you create a separate startup
-	disk to boot from. <!-- FIXME: Add reference to startup disk elsewhere in the
+        Your computer must have <application>GRUB</application> or
+        another boot loader installed in order to start, unless you
+        create a separate startup disk to boot from.
+<!-- FIXME: Add reference to startup disk elsewhere in the
 	IG. - PWF. -->
       </para>
     </important>
   </section>
-
   <section id="sn-bootloader-others">
-    <title>
-      Booting Additional Operating Systems
-    </title>
+    <title>Booting Additional Operating Systems</title>
+
     <para>
       If you have other operating systems already installed, &FC;
       attempts to automatically detect and configure
-      <application>GRUB</application> to boot them.  You may manually
+      <application>GRUB</application> to boot them. You may manually
       configure any additional operating systems if
-      <application>GRUB</application> does not detect them.  To
-      add, remove, or change the detected operating system settings,
-      use the options provided.
+      <application>GRUB</application> does not detect them. To add,
+      remove, or change the detected operating system settings, use the
+      options provided.
     </para>
+
     <variablelist>
       <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-          <guibutton>Add</guibutton>
-        </term>
+        <term><guibutton>Add</guibutton></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-	    Press the <guibutton>Add</guibutton> button to include an
-	    additional operating system in GRUB.  &FC; displays the
-	    dialog shown in <xref
+            Press the <guibutton>Add</guibutton> button to include an
+            additional operating system in GRUB. &FC; displays the
+            dialog shown in
+            <xref
 	      linkend="fig-bootloader-others-popup"/>.
-	  </para>
+          </para>
           <para>
-	    Select the disk partition which contains the bootable
-	    operating system from the drop-down list and give the entry
-	    a label.  <application>GRUB</application> displays this
-	    label in its boot menu.
-	  </para>
+            Select the disk partition which contains the bootable
+            operating system from the drop-down list and give the entry
+            a label. <application>GRUB</application> displays this label
+            in its boot menu.
+          </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-          <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>
-        </term>
-	<listitem>
-	  <para>
-	    To change an entry in the GRUB boot menu, select the entry
-	    and then select <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.
-	  </para>
+        <term><guibutton>Edit</guibutton></term>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            To change an entry in the GRUB boot menu, select the entry
+            and then select <guibutton>Edit</guibutton>.
+          </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
+
       <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-          <guibutton>Delete</guibutton>
-        </term>
+        <term><guibutton>Delete</guibutton></term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-	    To remove an entry from the GRUB boot menu, select the entry
-	    and then select <guibutton>Delete</guibutton>.
-	  </para>
+            To remove an entry from the GRUB boot menu, select the entry
+            and then select <guibutton>Delete</guibutton>.
+          </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
     </variablelist>
@@ -156,42 +156,40 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
   </section>
-
   <section id="sn-bootloader-password">
-    <title>
-      Setting a Boot Loader Password
-    </title>
+    <title>Setting a Boot Loader Password</title>
+
     <para>
       <application>GRUB</application> reads many file systems without
-      the help of an operating system.  An operator can interrupt the
+      the help of an operating system. An operator can interrupt the
       booting sequence to choose a different operating system to boot,
-      change boot options, or recover from a system error.  However, these
-      functions may introduce serious security risks in some
-      environments.  You can add a password to
+      change boot options, or recover from a system error. However,
+      these functions may introduce serious security risks in some
+      environments. You can add a password to
       <application>GRUB</application> so that the operator must enter
       the password to interrupt the normal boot sequence.
     </para>
     <tip>
       <title>GRUB Passwords Not Required</title>
       <para>
-	You may not require a <application>GRUB</application> password
-	if your system only has trusted operators, or is physically
-	secured with controlled console access.
+        You may not require a <application>GRUB</application> password
+        if your system only has trusted operators, or is physically
+        secured with controlled console access.
       </para>
       <para>
-	However, if there is a chance someone can get physical access to
-	the keyboard and monitor of your computer, that person can
-	reboot the system and access <application>GRUB</application>.
-	This is where a password is helpful.
+        However, if there is a chance someone can get physical access to
+        the keyboard and monitor of your computer, that person can
+        reboot the system and access <application>GRUB</application>.
+        This is where a password is helpful.
       </para>
     </tip>
     <para>
       To set a boot password, select the <guibutton>Use a boot loader
-	password</guibutton> checkbox.  The <guibutton>Change
-	password</guibutton> button will become active.  Select
+      password</guibutton> checkbox. The <guibutton>Change
+      password</guibutton> button will become active. Select
       <guibutton>Change password</guibutton> to display the dialog
-      below.  Type the desired password, and then confirm it by typing
-      it again in the spaces provided.
+      below. Type the desired password, and then confirm it by typing it
+      again in the spaces provided.
     </para>
     <figure id="fig-bootloader-password">
       <title>Entering A Boot Password</title>
@@ -211,84 +209,94 @@
       <title>Choose a Good Password</title>
       <para>
         Choose a password that is easy for you to remember but hard for
-	others to guess.
+        others to guess.
       </para>
     </tip>
     <warning>
       <title>Forgotten <application>GRUB</application> Passwords</title>
+
       <para>
         <application>GRUB</application> stores the password in encrypted
-	form, so it <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> be read or recovered. If
-	you forget the boot password, boot the system normally and then
-	change the password entry in the
-	<filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename> file. If you cannot
-	boot, you may be able to use the "rescue" mode on the first &FC;
-	installation disc to reset the GRUB password.
+        form, so it <emphasis>cannot</emphasis> be read or recovered. If
+        you forget the boot password, boot the system normally and then
+        change the password entry in the
+        <filename>/boot/grub/grub.conf</filename> file. If you cannot
+        boot, you may be able to use the "rescue" mode on the first &FC;
+        installation disc to reset the GRUB password.
       </para>
     </warning>
+
     <para>
       If you do need to change the <application>GRUB</application>
-      password, use the <command>grub-md5-crypt</command> utility.  For
+      password, use the <command>grub-md5-crypt</command> utility. For
       information on using this utility, use the command <command>man
-	grub-md5-crypt</command> in a terminal window to read the manual
+      grub-md5-crypt</command> in a terminal window to read the manual
       pages.
     </para>
   </section>
-
   <section id="sn-bootloader-advanced">
-    <title>
-      Advanced Boot loader Options
-    </title>
+    <title>Advanced Boot loader Options</title>
+
     <para>
-      The default boot options are adequate for most situations.  The
+      The default boot options are adequate for most situations. The
       installation program writes the <application>GRUB</application>
       boot loader in the
       <indexterm>
-	<primary>master boot record</primary>
-      </indexterm> master boot record (<abbrev>MBR</abbrev>),
-      overwriting any existing boot loader.
+        <primary>master boot record</primary>
+      </indexterm>
+      master boot record (<abbrev>MBR</abbrev>), overwriting any
+      existing boot loader.
     </para>
+
     <para>
       Tto keep your current boot loader in the <abbrev>MBR</abbrev>, use
       the advanced settings to place <application>GRUB</application> in
       the first sector of the partition holding the Linux root file
       system.
     </para>
+
     <para>
       You may also need the advanced options if your
       <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev> enumerates your disk devices differently
-      than &FC; expects.  On a few systems, &FC; may not configure the
+      than &FC; expects. On a few systems, &FC; may not configure the
       disk drive geometry for large disks correctly because of a broken
-      <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev>.  To work around this problem, mark the
+      <abbrev>BIOS</abbrev>. To work around this problem, mark the
       <guibutton>Force LBA32</guibutton> checkbox.
     </para>
+
     <para>
       The Linux kernel usually auto-detects its environment correctly,
-      and no additional kernel parameters are needed.  However, you may provide
-      any needed kernel parameter using the advanced boot
-      loader options.
+      and no additional kernel parameters are needed. However, you may
+      provide any needed kernel parameter using the advanced boot loader
+      options.
     </para>
+
     <note>
-     <title>Kernel Parameters</title>
+      <title>Kernel Parameters</title>
+
       <para>
         For a partial list of the kernel command line parameters, type
-	the following command in a terminal window: <userinput>man
-	  bootparam</userinput>.  For a comprehensive and authoritative
-	list, refer to the documentation provided in the kernel sources.
+        the following command in a terminal window: <userinput>man
+        bootparam</userinput>. For a comprehensive and authoritative
+        list, refer to the documentation provided in the kernel sources.
       </para>
     </note>
+
     <para>
       To alter any of these settings, mark the <guibutton>Configure
-	advanced boot loader options</guibutton> checkbox.  Select
-      <guibutton>Next</guibutton> and the menu shown in <xref
+      advanced boot loader options</guibutton> checkbox. Select
+      <guibutton>Next</guibutton> and the menu shown in
+      <xref
 	linkend="fig-bootloader-advanced"/> appears.
     </para>
+
     <note>
-     <title>Optional Menu</title>
+      <title>Optional Menu</title>
+
       <para>
         &FC; displays the following advanced boot options menu
-	<emphasis>only</emphasis> if the advanced configuration checkbox
-	described above has been selected.
+        <emphasis>only</emphasis> if the advanced configuration checkbox
+        described above has been selected.
       </para>
     </note>
     <figure id="fig-bootloader-advanced">
@@ -305,9 +313,7 @@
         </textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
-
   </section>
-
 </chapter>
 
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 <!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
 <!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.15">
-<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2006-01-26">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.16">
+<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2006-01-29">
 <!ENTITY DOCID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
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-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.15"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.16"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
 <!ENTITY FDP-INFO SYSTEM "fdp-info-en.xml" >
 
 <!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">


Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.18
retrieving revision 1.19
diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	26 Jan 2006 00:15:39 -0000	1.18
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.19
@@ -3,8 +3,12 @@
 <chapter id="ch-firstboot">
   <title>First Boot</title>
   <para>
-    The <application>Setup Agent</application> launches the first time
-    that you start a new &FC; system. Use <application>Setup
+    The
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>Setup Agent</primary>
+    </indexterm>
+    <application>Setup Agent</application> launches the first time that
+    you start a new &FC; system. Use <application>Setup
     Agent</application> to configure the system for use before you log
     in.
   </para>
@@ -80,6 +84,7 @@
       The
       <indexterm>
         <primary>firewall</primary>
+        <secondary>configuring</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <firstterm>firewall</firstterm> built into &FC; checks every
       incoming and outgoing network connection on your machine against a
@@ -90,9 +95,14 @@
     <para>
       By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
       that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
-      permit only Secure SHell (SSH) connections from other systems. You
-      may make changes on this screen to allow access to specific
-      network services on your &FED; system.
+      permit only
+      <indexterm>
+        <primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
+        <secondary>firewall configuration</secondary>
+      </indexterm>
+      SSH (Secure SHell) connections from other systems. You may make
+      changes on this screen to allow access to specific network
+      services on your &FED; system.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -157,6 +167,7 @@
       The
       <indexterm>
         <primary>&SEL;</primary>
+        <secondary>configuring</secondary>
       </indexterm>
       <firstterm>&SEL;</firstterm> (Security Enhanced Linux) framework
       is part of &FC;. &SEL; limits the actions of both users and
@@ -195,7 +206,7 @@
             breach of security policies only causes an error message to
             appear. No activities are actually prohibited when &SEL; is
             installed in this mode. You may change the &SEL; mode to
-            <guilabel>Active</guilabel> at any time after booting.
+            <guilabel>Enforcing</guilabel> at any time after booting.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>


Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	26 Jan 2006 00:15:39 -0000	1.17
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.18
@@ -2,9 +2,10 @@
 
 <chapter id="ch-packageselection">
   <title>Package Selection</title>
+  <remark role="FIXME">TEXT SUBJECT TO CHANGE: The package selection screen is still being developed.</remark>
   <para>
     By default, the &FED; installation process loads a selection of
-    software that is suitable for a desktop system. This screen enables
+    software that is suitable for a desktop system. The package selection screen enables
     you to customize the set of software to match your requirements.
   </para>
   <para>
@@ -80,6 +81,13 @@
       </menuchoice>.
     </para>
   </tip>
+  <section id="sn-mandatory-packages">
+    <title>Core Software</title>
+  <para>
+   <remark role="FIXME">Mention some base stuff that is part of every &FC; system: SMTP, SSH, CUPS, NFS, Python and <command>yum</command>...</remark>
+  </para>
+  </section>
+
   <section id="sn-lang-packages">
     <title>Additional Language Support</title>
 


Index: fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml	23 Jan 2006 23:24:09 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-techref-en.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.6
@@ -5,6 +5,9 @@
   <para>
     This document provides a reference for using the &FED; installation
     software, known as <command>anaconda</command>. To learn more about
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>Anaconda</primary>
+    </indexterm>
     <command>anaconda</command>, visit the project webpage:
     <ulink url="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda"/>.
   </para>
@@ -18,7 +21,12 @@
       <term>Boot Loader</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          &FED; uses the <command>GRUB</command> boot loader. Refer to
+          &FED; uses the
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>GRUB</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
+          <command>GRUB</command> boot loader. Refer to
           <ulink url="http://www.gnu.org/software/grub/"/> for more
           information.
         </para>
@@ -40,9 +48,13 @@
       <term>Audio Support</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The Linux kernel used by &FED; incorporates ALSA (Advanced
-          Linux Sound Architecture). For more information about ALSA,
-          refer to the project website:
+          The Linux kernel used by &FED; incorporates
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>ALSA (Advanced
+          Linux Sound Architecture)</primary>
+          </indexterm>
+          ALSA (Advanced Linux Sound Architecture). For more information
+          about ALSA, refer to the project website:
           <ulink url="http://www.alsa-project.org/"/>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -53,6 +65,9 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Both the installation system and &FED; itself use the
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>Xorg</primary>
+          </indexterm>
           <command>Xorg</command> suite to provide graphical
           capabilities. Components of <command>Xorg</command> manage the
           display, keyboard and mouse for the desktop environments that
@@ -66,9 +81,14 @@
       <term>Remote Displays</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          &FC; and <command>anaconda</command> include VNC to enable
-          remote access to graphical displays. For more information
-          about VNC, refer to the documentation on the RealVNC website:
+          &FC; and <command>anaconda</command> include
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>VNC (Virtual Network Computing)</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
+          VNC (Virtual Network Computing) software to enable remote
+          access to graphical displays. For more information about VNC,
+          refer to the documentation on the RealVNC website:
           <ulink url="http://www.realvnc.com/documentation/"/>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -90,9 +110,42 @@
     </varlistentry>
 
     <varlistentry>
+      <term>Remote System Access</term>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>
+          &FC; incorporates the
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>OpenSSH</primary>
+            <seealso>SSH</seealso>
+          </indexterm>
+          OpenSSH suite to provide remote access to the system. The SSH
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
+          service enables a number of functions, which include access to
+          the command-line from other systems, remote command execution,
+          and network file transfers. During the installation process
+          <command>anaconda</command> may use the <command>scp</command>
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>scp</primary>
+            <seealso>SSH</seealso>
+          </indexterm>
+          feature of OpenSSH to transfer crash reports to remote
+          systems. Refer to the OpenSSH website for more information:
+          <ulink url="http://www.openssh.com/"/>.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
+    </varlistentry>
+
+    <varlistentry>
       <term>Access Control</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>&SEL;</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
           &SEL; provides Mandatory Access Control (MAC) capabilities
           that supplement the standard Linux security features. Refer to
           the &SEL; FAQ for more information:
@@ -105,8 +158,14 @@
       <term>Firewall</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          &FED; uses the <command>netfilter</command> framework. The
-          Netfilter project website provides documentation for both <command>netfilter</command>, and the
+          The Linux kernel used by &FED; incorporates the
+          <command>netfilter</command> framework to provide
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>firewall</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
+          firewall features. The Netfilter project website provides
+          documentation for both <command>netfilter</command>, and the
           <command>iptables</command> administration facilities:
           <ulink url="http://netfilter.org/documentation/index.html"/>.
         </para>
@@ -117,8 +176,13 @@
       <term>Software Installation</term>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          &FED; uses <command>yum</command> to manage the RPM packages
-          that make up the system. Refer to
+          &FED; uses
+          <indexterm>
+            <primary>yum</primary>
+            <secondary>documentation</secondary>
+          </indexterm>
+          <command>yum</command> to manage the RPM packages that make up
+          the system. Refer to
           <ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/"/> for more
           information.
         </para>


Index: rpm-info.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- rpm-info.xml	26 Jan 2006 00:15:39 -0000	1.5
+++ rpm-info.xml	29 Jan 2006 20:37:55 -0000	1.6
@@ -28,10 +28,15 @@
 <!--PLEASE ADD A TRANSLATION FOR EACH ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE.-->
   </titles>
   <changelog order="newest-first">
+    <revision date="2006-01-29" number="1.16" role="doc">
+      <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
+<!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
+      <details>Updated indexing.</details>
+    </revision>
     <revision date="2006-01-26" number="1.15" role="doc">
       <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
 <!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
-      <details>Updated Package Selection screen for test2.</details>
+      <details lang="en">Updated Package Selection screen for test2.</details>
     </revision>
     <revision date="2006-01-23" number="1.14" role="doc">
       <author worker="StuartEllis"/>




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