release-notes/devel/en_US Java.xml,1.8,1.9

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv2645

Modified Files:
	Java.xml 
Log Message:
Good for FC6


Index: Java.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Java.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- Java.xml	24 Sep 2006 20:41:49 -0000	1.8
+++ Java.xml	25 Sep 2006 08:56:19 -0000	1.9
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
     <note>
       <title>Fedora Core Does Not Include Java</title>
       <para>
-        Java is a trademark of Sun Microsystems. `java-gcj-compat` is an
-        entirely free software stack that is '''not''' Java, but may run
-        Java software.
+        Java is a trademark of Sun Microsystems.
+	<package>java-gcj-compat</package> is an entirely free software stack
+	that is <emphasis>not</emphasis> Java, but may run Java software.
       </para>
     </note>
   </para>
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
   <para>
     The
 <!--GetVal-macro not supported by the docbook formatter, but giving it a shot anyway-->
-    java-gcj-compat infrastructure has three key components: a
+    <package>java-gcj-compat</package> infrastructure has three key components: a
     <emphasis role='strong'>GNU Java</emphasis> runtime
     (<code>libgcj</code>), the <emphasis role='strong'>Eclipse
     Java</emphasis> compiler (<code>ecj</code>), and a set of wrappers
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@
     <title>64-bit JNI Libraries</title>
     <para>
       The 64-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on x86_64 systems in
-      Fedora Core and Extras will not run on 32-bit JREs. Either switch
-      to a 64-bit java alternative, or install the 32-bit version of the
+      Fedora Core and Extras do not run on 32-bit JREs. Either switch
+      to a 64-bit Java alternative, or install the 32-bit version of the
       packages, if available. To install a 32-bit version, use the
       following command:
     </para>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
 ]]></screen>
     <para>
       Likewise, the 32-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on ppc64
-      systems will not run with a 64-bit JRE. To install the 64-bit
+      systems do not run with a 64-bit JRE. To install the 64-bit
       version, use the following command:
     </para>
 <screen><![CDATA[yum install <package_name>.ppc64 
@@ -104,9 +104,10 @@
     <title>Handling Java Applets</title>
     <para>
       This release of Fedora Core includes a preview release of
-      <code>gcjwebplugin</code>, a Firefox plugin for Java applets.
-      <code>gcjwebplugin</code> is not enabled by default because
-      although the security implementation in <code>GNU Classpath</code>
+      <code>gcjwebplugin</code>, a <application>Firefox</application> plugin for
+      Java applets.
+      <code>gcjwebplugin</code> is not enabled by default.
+      Although the security implementation in <code>GNU Classpath</code>
       is being actively developed, it is not mature enough to run
       untrusted applets safely. That said, the AWT and Swing
       implementations in <code>GNU Classpath</code> are now sufficiently
@@ -146,7 +147,7 @@
   <section>
     <title>Eclipse</title>
     <para>
-      This release of Fedora Core includes Fedora Eclipse which is based
+      This release of Fedora Core includes Fedora Eclipse, which is based
       on the <ulink url='http://www.eclipse.org'>Eclipse</ulink> SDK
       version 3.2. The "New and Noteworthy" page for this release can be
       accessed
@@ -173,7 +174,7 @@
       <ulink url='http://www.eclipse.org/vep'>VE</ulink>, the Visual
       Editor. As of this writing, it is expected that an updated version
       of <ulink url='http://pydev.sf.net'>PyDev</ulink>, the Python
-      development tools, will also be available in Fedora Extras.
+      development tools, is going to be available in Fedora Extras.
       Assistance in getting these projects packaged and tested with GCJ
       is always welcome. Contact the interested parties through
       <ulink url='http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-devel-java-list/'>fedora-devel-java-list</ulink>
@@ -181,7 +182,7 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       Fedora also includes plugins and features that are particularly
-      useful to FOSS hackers,
+      useful to FOSS hackers:
       <ulink url='http://fedora-test.fedoraproject.org/fedora-docs/fedora-docs/ChangeLog'>ChangeLog</ulink>
       editing with <code>eclipse-changelog</code> and Bugzilla
       interaction with <code>eclipse-bugzilla</code>. Our CDT package