release-notes/devel/en_US Live.xml,1.1,1.2

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv26062

Modified Files:
	Live.xml 
Log Message:
ready for test4


Index: Live.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- Live.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.1
+++ Live.xml	4 Apr 2007 07:18:07 -0000	1.2
@@ -2,14 +2,8 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Live">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Live</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Fedora Live Images</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     The Fedora release includes several live ISO images in addition to
     the traditional installation images. These ISO images are bootable,
@@ -23,47 +17,58 @@
     testing of the Fedora test release.
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Available-Images">
     <title>Available Images</title>
     <para>
       There are three live images available for Fedora 7.
     </para>
     <orderedlist numeration='arabic'>
-      <listitem>Fedora 7 i386 Desktop CD.  This is a CD sized image for i386 machines.  It has the default desktop environment (GNOME), support for all supported Fedora locales, and a basic set of the productivity applications available in Fedora.   </listitem>
-      <listitem>Fedora 7 x86_64 Desktop DVD.  This is a DVD sized image for x86_64 machines.  The package set is the same as that of the i386 Desktop CD. </listitem>
-      <listitem>Fedora 7 i386 KDE CD.  This is a CD sized image for i386 machines.  It includes the KDE Desktop environment and a large set of KDE applications.  Note that this image only has full support for English language. </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Fedora 7 i386 Desktop CD.  This is a CD sized image for i386
+	machines.  It has the default desktop environment (GNOME), support for
+	all supported Fedora locales, and a basic set of the productivity
+	applications available in Fedora.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Fedora 7 x86_64 Desktop DVD.  This is a DVD sized image for x86_64
+	machines.  The package set is the same as that of the i386 Desktop
+	CD.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Fedora 7 i386 KDE CD.  This is a CD sized image for i386 machines.
+	It includes the KDE Desktop environment and a large set of KDE
+	applications.  Note that this image only has full support for English
+	language.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </orderedlist>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Usage-Information">
     <title>Usage Information</title>
     <para>
       The live images should boot on any machine that supports booting
       from CD-ROM. Upon booting the CD, you can log in and use the
-      desktop environment as the <code>fedora</code> user. After logging
+      desktop environment as the fedora user. After logging
       in, if you wish to install the contents of the live image to your
-      hard drive, click on the <emphasis role='strong'>Install to Hard
-      Drive</emphasis> icon on the desktop.
+      hard drive, click on the <guilabel>Install to Hard
+      Drive</guilabel> icon on the desktop.
     </para>
     <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Other-Methods-of-Booting">
     <title>Other Methods of Booting</title>
     <para>
       Another way to use these live images is to put them on a USB
-      stick. To do this, install the <code>livecd-tools</code> package
+      stick. To do this, install the <package>livecd-tools</package> package
       from the development repository. Then, run the
-      <code>livecd-iso-to-stick</code> script:
+      <command>livecd-iso-to-stick</command> script:
     </para>
     <para/>
 <screen><![CDATA[/usr/bin/livecd-iso-to-stick /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1 
 ]]></screen>
     <para>
-      Replace <emphasis>/dev/sdb1</emphasis> with the partition where
+      Replace <replaceable>/dev/sdb1</replaceable> with the partition where
       you want to put the image.
     </para>
     <para>
@@ -74,22 +79,22 @@
     <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Differences-From-a-Regular-Fedora-Install">
     <title>Differences From a Regular Fedora Install</title>
     <para>
       The following items are different from a normal Fedora install
-      with the Live images.
+      with the live images.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The <code>sshd</code> service is disabled, since the passwords
+          The <command>sshd</command> service is disabled, since the passwords
           on the live image are blank.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'><ulink url='/wiki/NetworkManager'>NetworkManager</ulink></emphasis>
+          <application role="strong">NetworkManager</application>
           is enabled by default.
         </para>
       </listitem>