release-notes/devel/en_US Devel.xml, 1.6, 1.7 I18n.xml, 1.14, 1.15 Java.xml, 1.14, 1.15 Kernel.xml, 1.21, 1.22 Live.xml, 1.4, 1.5 OverView.xml, 1.18, 1.19 PackageChanges.xml, 1.16, 1.17 PackageNotes.xml, 1.15, 1.16 RELEASE-NOTES.xml, 1.13, 1.14 Virtualization.xml, 1.14, 1.15 Xorg.xml, 1.15, 1.16

Sun Apr 22 09:18:50 UTC 2007

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv21197/en_US

Modified Files:
	Devel.xml I18n.xml Java.xml Kernel.xml Live.xml OverView.xml 
	PackageChanges.xml PackageNotes.xml RELEASE-NOTES.xml 
	Virtualization.xml Xorg.xml 
Log Message:
various fixes, many shouldn't affect translation but hard to say


Index: Devel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Devel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7

--- Devel.xml	4 Apr 2007 13:15:42 -0000	1.6
+++ Devel.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:47 -0000	1.7
@@ -151,13 +151,14 @@
       <section id="sn-Eclipse-nonpkg">
 	<title>Non-packaged Plugins/Features</title>
 	<para>
-	  Fedora Eclipse contains a patch to allow non-root users to
-	  make use of the Update Manager functionality for installing
-	  non-packaged plugins and features. Such plugins are installed
-	  in the user's home directory under the <code>.eclipse</code>
-	  directory. Please note, however, that these plugins do not
-	  have associated GCJ-compiled bits and may therefore run slower
-	  than expected.
+	  Fedora Eclipse contains a patch to allow non-<systemitem
+	    class="username">root</systemitem> users to make use of the
+	  Update Manager functionality for installing non-packaged
+	  plugins and features. Such plugins are installed in the user's
+	  home directory under the <code>.eclipse</code> directory.
+	  Please note, however, that these plugins do not have
+	  associated GCJ-compiled bits and may therefore run slower than
+	  expected.
 	</para>
       </section>
       <section id="sn-Alternative-JREs">


Index: I18n.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/I18n.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
--- I18n.xml	22 Apr 2007 02:02:57 -0000	1.14
+++ I18n.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:47 -0000	1.15
@@ -13,8 +13,9 @@
     <para>
       To install additional language support from the Languages group,
       use <application>Pirut</application> via
-      <guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove
-	Software</guimenuitem>, or run this command:
+      <menuchoice>
+	<guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove
+	Software</guimenuitem></menuchoice>, or run this command:
     </para>
     <screen><![CDATA[su -c 'yum groupinstall <language>-support'
       ]]></screen>


Index: Java.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Java.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
--- Java.xml	4 Apr 2007 13:17:37 -0000	1.14
+++ Java.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.15
@@ -51,14 +51,16 @@
   <section id="sn-Handling-Java-and-Java-like-Packages">
     <title>Handling Java and Java-like Packages</title>
     <para>
-      In addition to the <package>java-gcj-compat</package> free software
-      stack, Fedora lets you install multiple Java implementations and
-      switch between them using the <command>alternatives</command> command
-      line tool. However, every Java system you install must be packaged
-      using the JPackage Project packaging guidelines to take advantage
-      of <command>alternatives</command>. Once these packages are installed
-      properly, the root user may switch between
-      <command>java</command> and <command>javac</command> implementations using the
+      In addition to the <package>java-gcj-compat</package> free
+      software stack, Fedora lets you install multiple Java
+      implementations and switch between them using the
+      <command>alternatives</command> command line tool. However, every
+      Java system you install must be packaged using the JPackage
+      Project packaging guidelines to take advantage of
+      <command>alternatives</command>. Once these packages are installed
+      properly, the <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user
+      may switch between <command>java</command> and
+      <command>javac</command> implementations using the
       <command>alternatives</command> command:
     </para>
 <screen><![CDATA[alternatives --config java  


Index: Kernel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Kernel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.21
retrieving revision 1.22
diff -u -r1.21 -r1.22
--- Kernel.xml	21 Apr 2007 22:01:02 -0000	1.21
+++ Kernel.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.22
@@ -28,8 +28,9 @@
       drivers.</para>
       <note>
 	<title>IDE Device Names Changed</title>
-	<para>The new IDE drivers now cause all IDE drives to have device names
-	such as /dev/sdX instead of /dev/hdX.</para>
+	<para>The new IDE drivers now cause all IDE drives to have
+	  device names such as <filename>/dev/sdX</filename> instead of
+	  <filename>/dev/hdX</filename>.</para>
       </note>
     </listitem>
     <listitem>
@@ -129,7 +130,8 @@
 ]]></screen>
     <para>
       Select one or more of these flavors, separated by commas and no
-      spaces, as appropriate. Enter the root password when prompted.
+      spaces, as appropriate. Enter the <systemitem
+	class="username">root</systemitem> password when prompted.
     </para>
     <note>
       <title>32bit Kernel Includes Kdump</title>


Index: Live.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Live.xml	21 Apr 2007 21:27:27 -0000	1.4
+++ Live.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.5
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
       <listitem>
 	<para>Fedora 7 i386 KDE Desktop CD.  This is a CD sized image
 	  for i386 machines. It includes the KDE Desktop environment and
-	  a large set of KDE applications.  Note that this image only
-	  has full support for English language.  Note that GNOME based
+	  a large set of KDE applications.  This image only
+	  has full support for the English language.  The GNOME based
 	  Live images do not include the
 	  <application>OpenOffice.org</application> office suite to save
 	  space.  Instead they include
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
       from CD-ROM. Upon booting the CD, you can log in and use the
       desktop environment as the <systemitem
 	class="username">fedora</systemitem> user.  Leave the password
-      prompt blank to login.  The Live images to not automatically login
+      prompt blank to login.  The Live images do not automatically login
       so users can select a preferred language.  After logging in, if
       you wish to install the contents of the live image to your hard
       drive, click on the <guilabel>Install to Hard Drive</guilabel>


Index: OverView.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.18
retrieving revision 1.19
diff -u -r1.18 -r1.19
--- OverView.xml	21 Apr 2007 20:52:30 -0000	1.18
+++ OverView.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.19
@@ -24,8 +24,9 @@
       <title>Spins</title>
       <para>For the first time, Fedora includes several different spins
 	with combinations of software to meet the requirements of end
-	users. In addition to a very small `boot.iso` image for network
-	installation, users have the following choices:</para>
+	users. In addition to a very small <package>boot.iso</package>
+	image for network installation, users have the following
+	choices:</para>
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>GNOME and KDE desktop environment based bootable Live
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@
 	    and event attendees.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A regular image for desktops, workstations and server
+	  <para>A regular image for desktops, workstations, and server
 	    users. This spin provides a good upgrade path and similar
 	    environment for users of previous releases of Fedora.</para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -72,8 +73,8 @@
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Display devices can be hot plugged and work
-	    automatically, thanks to the inclusion of <application>Xorg
-	    Server</application> 1.3.</para>
+	    automatically, thanks to the inclusion of Xorg Server
+	    1.3.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>This release provides a number of firmware packages for
@@ -96,15 +97,15 @@
         </listitem>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>Firefox 2 includes a host of new features including an
-	    inline speller checker, built-in phishing protection, and
+	    inline spell checker, built-in phishing protection, and
 	    the ability to resume browsing sessions.</para>
 	  <para><ulink
 	      url="http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/2.0/releasenotes/"/></para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>I18N support is much improved by the presence of SCIM
-	    input methods, which now work after installation
-	    automatically without any configuration. SCIM can handle
+	    input methods, which now work automatically after
+	    installation without any configuration. SCIM can handle
 	    nearly every alphabet/set of characters in use. Fedora is
 	    now more accessible to a wider audience by the default
 	    inclusion of a number of language packages and input methods
@@ -135,12 +136,12 @@
 	    experience while saving resources.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>edora now integrates the experimental nouveau driver
-	    within <application>Xorg</application> and the kernel. The
-	    nouveau driver aims to provide free and open source 3D
-	    drivers for nVidia cards. End users are asked to provide
-	    feedback on this feature to the project developers, to
-	    further the goal of having fully functional 3D drivers by
+	  <para>Fedora now integrates the experimental
+	    <package>nouveau</package> driver within Xorg and the
+	    kernel. The <package>nouveau</package> driver aims to provide free and open
+	    source 3D drivers for nVidia cards. End users are asked to
+	    provide feedback on this feature to the project developers,
+	    to further the goal of having fully functional 3D drivers by
 	    default.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -164,11 +165,10 @@
           <para>
 	    This release integrates Kernel-based Virtual Machine (KVM)
 	    technology with Fedora's graphical
-	    <package>virt-manager</package> and command-line
+	    <application>virt-manager</application> and command-line
 	    <command>virsh</command> tools. KVM provides a hardware
 	    accelerated virtualization solution, and users have a choice
-	    between KVM and <application>Xen</application>, along with
-	    <application>Qemu</application>, in this release.
+	    between KVM and Xen, along with Qemu, in this release.
           </para>
 	  <para>
 	    <ulink url="http://kvm.sourceforge.net/"/>
@@ -177,18 +177,19 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>In this release, all hard disk partitions follow a
 	    <filename>/dev/sd*</filename> naming convention due to a new
-	    libata driver interface in the kernel. The
-	    <application>Anaconda</application> installer eases the
+	    <package>libata</package> driver interface in the kernel.
+	    The <application>Anaconda</application> installer eases the
 	    transition for release upgrades.</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Smolt, an opt-in tool that send anonymous hardware
+	  <para>Smolt, an opt-in tool that sends anonymous hardware
 	    profile information to the Fedora Project, is integrated
-	    with firstboot in the installer. All data is available on
-	    the Smolt homepage. This profile information is used to
-	    leverage cooperation from vendors in improving end user
-	    hardware experience, and to priortize development and
-	    quality assurance on commonly used hardware.</para>
+	    with <application>firstboot</application> in the installer.
+	    All data is available on the Smolt homepage. This profile
+	    information is used to leverage cooperation from vendors in
+	    improving end user hardware experience, and to priortize
+	    development and quality assurance on commonly used
+	    hardware.</para>
 	  <para><ulink
 	      url="https://hosted.fedoraproject.org/projects/smolt"/></para>
 	  <para><ulink url="http://smolt.fedoraproject.org"/></para>


Index: PackageChanges.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/PackageChanges.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- PackageChanges.xml	22 Apr 2007 06:49:49 -0000	1.16
+++ PackageChanges.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.17
@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@
     release notes for Fedora 7 test4.</emphasis>
   </para>
 
-<screen><![CDATA[This list was made using the {{{treediff}}} utility, ran as
-    {{{treediff newtree oldtree}}} against the test4 tree of 20 Apr. 2007.
+<screen><![CDATA[## This list was made using the {{{treediff}}} utility, ran as
+##    {{{treediff newtree oldtree}}} against the test4 tree of 20 Apr. 2007.
+
 treediff /mnt/redhat/released/FC-6/GOLD/source \
                /mnt/redhat/rel-eng/f7-test4-20070420.0/6.93/Fedora/source
 ]]></screen>


Index: PackageNotes.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/PackageNotes.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- PackageNotes.xml	22 Apr 2007 05:28:55 -0000	1.15
+++ PackageNotes.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.16
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
       be circumvented in a number of ways:</para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-	<para>Reduce its volume to a acceptable level or completely mute
+	<para>Reduce its volume to an acceptable level or completely mute
 	  the PC speaker in <command>alsamixer</command> with the
 	  setting for <literal>PC Speak</literal>.</para>
       </listitem>
@@ -30,13 +30,13 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-cdrkit">
-    <title><package>cdrtools</package> Replaced by <package>cdrkit</package></title>
+    <title>The <package>cdrtools</package> Packages is Replaced by <package>cdrkit</package></title>
     <para>Recent versions of <package>cdrtools</package> intermix code
       under the GPL and CDDL licenses, which are mutually incompatible.
       To avoid this problem, in this release <package>cdrtools</package>
       has been replaced by a fork called cdrkit. Thanks to Joerg Jaspert
       (<email>joerg AT debian.org</email>) from Debian for initiating
-      development of this software and reaching out to us.</para>
+      development of this software and reaching out to Fedora.</para>
     <para><ulink url="http://lwn.net/Articles/195167/"/></para>
     <para><ulink url="http://www.cdrkit.org/"/></para>
     <para><ulink
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
   </section>
   <section id="sn-perl-split">
     <title>Perl Package Split</title>
-    <para>Development related files have been split up from Perl and are
+    <para>Development related files have been split from Perl and are
       now available in the <package>perl-devel</package> package. As a
       temporary exception to the Fedora packaging guidelines,
       <package>perl</package> requires <package>perl-devel</package> to
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
   <section id="sn-System-Tools">
     <title>System Tools</title>
     <section id="sn-apcupsd">
-      <title>apcupsd</title>
+      <title><package>apcupsd</package></title>
       <para>
         The <package>apcupsd</package> package has been upgraded to version
 	3.14.0. This version removes the old master/slave networking mode. Refer
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
   <section id="sn-Engineering-and-Scientific">
     <title>Engineering and Scientific</title>
     <section id="sn-paraview">
-      <title>paraview</title>
+      <title><package>paraview</package></title>
       <para>
         The <package>mpi</package> build and sub-package of
 	<package>paraview</package> have been removed until


Index: RELEASE-NOTES.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/RELEASE-NOTES.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- RELEASE-NOTES.xml	22 Apr 2007 05:37:19 -0000	1.13
+++ RELEASE-NOTES.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.14
@@ -188,11 +188,9 @@
 
 <!-- Database Servers -->
 
-<!-- NO NEW CONTENT FOR F7
   <xi:include href="./DatabaseServers.xml"
     xpointer="element(sn-DatabaseServers)"
     xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
--->
 
 <!-- I18n -->
 


Index: Virtualization.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Virtualization.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
--- Virtualization.xml	22 Apr 2007 01:54:52 -0000	1.14
+++ Virtualization.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.15
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@
   <para>
     Virtualization in Fedora 7 supports both Xen and KVM virtualization
     platforms.  The <systemitem class="library">libvirt</systemitem> API
-    and its corresponding tools, <package>virt-manager</package> and
-    <command>virsh</command>, have been updated to support both KVM and
-    Xen.  Users can choose which virtualization platform to install, and
-    use the same tools without regard to that choice.
+    and its corresponding tools, <application>virt-manager</application>
+    and <command>virsh</command>, have been updated to support both KVM
+    and Xen.  Users can choose which virtualization platform to install,
+    and use the same tools without regard to that choice.
   </para>
   <para>Xen in Fedora 7 is based on version 3.0.4.</para>
   <para>KVM in Fedora 7 is based on version 19-1.</para>
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
     <title>Guest Operating Systems</title>
     <para>
       The Fedora 7 development team has tested Xen with Fedora 6, Fedora
-      7 and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4.5 and 5.0 guests. Other guests
+      7, and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4.5 and 5.0 guests. Other guests
       have not been tested. With full virtualization, users can expect
       reasonable success with a larger variety of operating systems,
       including some proprietary operating systems.
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          The applications <command>virt-manager</command> and
+          The applications <application>virt-manager</application> and
 	  <command>virsh</command> can now work with inactive domains.
 	  Previously, only <command>xm</command> could handle inactive
 	  domains.


Index: Xorg.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Xorg.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- Xorg.xml	4 Apr 2007 13:19:46 -0000	1.15
+++ Xorg.xml	22 Apr 2007 09:18:48 -0000	1.16
@@ -38,10 +38,12 @@
       The X server queries the attached monitor for supported resolution ranges,
       and attempts to pick the highest resolution available with the correct
       aspect ratio for the display. Users can set their preferred resolution in
-      <guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Screen 
-	Resolution</guimenuitem>, and the default resolution for the system can
+      <menuchoice>
+<guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Preferences</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Screen 
+	Resolution</guimenuitem></menuchoice>, and the default resolution for the system can
       be changed with
-      <guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem>.
+      <menuchoice>
+<guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
     </para>
     <para>
       If the <filename>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</filename> configuration file is not
@@ -76,7 +78,8 @@
       those used in some widescreen displays, you may want to switch to the
       <filename>intel</filename> driver. You may switch drivers by using
       <command>system-config-display</command>, available in the menus under
-      <guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem>.
+      <menuchoice>
+<guimenu>System</guimenu><guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Display</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
     </para>
     <para>
       We welcome feedback on the experimental <filename>intel</filename> driver.


