install-guide/devel/en_US new-users.xml,1.2,1.3

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17793

Modified Files:
	new-users.xml 
Log Message:
Make this admonition clearer.



Index: new-users.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- new-users.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:37:27 -0000	1.2
+++ new-users.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:50:11 -0000	1.3
@@ -200,11 +200,11 @@
 	system as desired.</para>
       <tip>
 	<title>Download Size</title>
-	<para>A default installation of &DISTRO; requires more time to
-	  download than the Live CD, but includes more software.  It
-	  generally requires less time to download than the entire DVD
-	  distribution.  Actual results depend on the mirror you select
-	  and general network traffic conditions.</para>
+	<para>Installing the default software for &DISTRO; over the
+	  Internet requires more time than the Live CD, but less time
+	  than the entire DVD distribution.  Actual results depend on
+	  the actual software you select and network traffic
+	  conditions.</para>
       </tip>
       <para>The following table explains where to find the desired files
 	on a mirror site.</para>