install-guide/devel/en_US intro.xml,1.5,1.6

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1240

Modified Files:
	intro.xml 
Log Message:
small grammatical fixes


Index: intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- intro.xml	6 May 2007 21:05:08 -0000	1.5
+++ intro.xml	6 May 2007 22:08:09 -0000	1.6
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
   <para>This guide covers installation of &DISTRO;, a Linux distribution
     built on free and open source software. This manual helps you
-    install &DISTRO; on desktops, laptops and servers. The installation
+    install &DISTRO; on desktops, laptops, and servers. The installation
     system is flexible enough to use even if you have no previous
     knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If you select default
     options, &DISTRO; provides a complete desktop operating system,
@@ -42,23 +42,23 @@
     <title>About This Document</title>
     <section id="sn-goals">
       <title>Goals</title>
-      <para>This guide will help a reader:</para>
+      <para>This guide helps a reader:</para>
       <orderedlist>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>understand how to locate the &DISTRO; distribution
-	    online,</para>
+	  <para>Understand how to locate the &DISTRO; distribution
+	    online</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>create configuration data that allows a computer to boot
-	    &DISTRO;,</para>
+	  <para>Create configuration data that allows a computer to boot
+	    &DISTRO;</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation
-	    program, and</para>
+	  <para>Understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation
+	    program</para>
 	</listitem>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>complete basic post-installation configuration of a
-	    &DISTRO; system.</para>
+	  <para>Complete basic post-installation configuration of a
+	    &DISTRO; system</para>
 	</listitem>
       </orderedlist>
       <tip>
@@ -97,6 +97,6 @@
       in &BZ;. To file a bug, fill in "&BZ-PROD;" as the Product, choose
       the name of this document from the Component list, and choose
       "devel" as the version. FDP volunteers receive your feedback, and
-      may contact you for additional information if necessary.</para>
+      may contact you for additional information, if necessary.</para>
   </section>
 </chapter>