release-notes/F-8/en_US ArchSpecific.xml,1.3,1.4

[Jason Taylor (jmtaylor)]

Author: jmtaylor

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/F-8/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv32080/en_US

Modified Files:
	ArchSpecific.xml 
Log Message:
Changed a couple places to active voice.


Index: ArchSpecific.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/F-8/en_US/ArchSpecific.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- ArchSpecific.xml	29 Nov 2007 18:11:27 -0000	1.3
+++ ArchSpecific.xml	29 Nov 2007 19:14:45 -0000	1.4
@@ -202,8 +202,8 @@
 	  </formalpara>	  
 	  <screen><![CDATA[boot cd: /images/netboot/ppc32.img]]></screen>
 	  <para>
-	    You must also configure OpenFirmware on the Pegasos manually
-	    to make the installed Fedora system bootable. To do this,
+	    Manual configuration of the Open''''''Firmware on the Pegasos 
+	    is required to make the installed Fedora system bootable. To do this,
 	    set the <envar>boot-device</envar> and
 	    <envar>boot-file</envar> environment variables
 	    appropriately.
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
 	  <formalpara>
 	    <title>Genesi Efika 5200B</title>
 	    <para>
-	     In order to run Linux correctly on the Efika, the "Device Tree Supplement" must be downloaded 		     from <ulink url='http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree'>http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree</ulink> and installed according to the documentation therein. At the time of writing, the firmware of the Efika has bugs which prevent correct operation of the <application>yaboot</application> bootloader. Genesi stated that a fixed firmware would be made available by April 2007. As of November 2007, it is not yet available.
+	     To run Linux correctly on the Efika, download the "Device Tree Supplement" from <ulink url='http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree'>http://www.powerdeveloper.org/platforms/efika/devicetree</ulink> and installed according to the documentation therein. At the time of writing, the firmware of the Efika has bugs which prevent correct operation of the <application>yaboot</application> bootloader. Genesi stated that a fixed firmware would be made available by April 2007. As of November 2007, it is not yet available.
 	    </para>
 	  </formalpara>
 	</listitem>