release-notes/devel/en_US OverView.xml,1.29,1.30

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Oct 8 22:13:11 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv16191

Modified Files:
	OverView.xml 
Log Message:
Don't use docs jargon.



Index: OverView.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.29
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -r1.29 -r1.30
--- OverView.xml	8 Oct 2007 22:10:35 -0000	1.29
+++ OverView.xml	8 Oct 2007 22:13:09 -0000	1.30
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>One of four Live images that can be run from a disc or
 	    USB flash device, and can be installed to hard disk as
-	    desired.  See the "Live" beat for more information about the
-	    Live images.</para>
+	    desired.  See the "Live" section for more information about
+	    the Live images.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
       <para>More custom spins are available at <ulink




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