release-notes/devel/en_US OverView.xml,1.29,1.30
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Oct 8 22:13:11 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv16191
Modified Files:
OverView.xml
Log Message:
Don't use docs jargon.
Index: OverView.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.29
retrieving revision 1.30
diff -u -r1.29 -r1.30
--- OverView.xml 8 Oct 2007 22:10:35 -0000 1.29
+++ OverView.xml 8 Oct 2007 22:13:09 -0000 1.30
@@ -48,8 +48,8 @@
<listitem>
<para>One of four Live images that can be run from a disc or
USB flash device, and can be installed to hard disk as
- desired. See the "Live" beat for more information about the
- Live images.</para>
+ desired. See the "Live" section for more information about
+ the Live images.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>More custom spins are available at <ulink
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