translation-quick-start-guide/en_US Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml, 1.8, 1.9

[Noriko Mizumoto (noriko)]

Author: noriko

Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11206

Modified Files:
	Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml 
Log Message:
Sec2.2 step3 modified. 2.3 step3 modified. 2.4 entirely written.


Index: Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	11 Apr 2008 06:20:04 -0000	1.8
+++ Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	15 Apr 2008 05:15:22 -0000	1.9
@@ -90,8 +90,7 @@
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Copy and paste the SSH key in the space provided in order to
-	  complete the account application.
+		This public key (~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub) will be used for your &FED; account creation described in Section 2.4.
 	</para>
       </step>
     </procedure>
@@ -145,6 +144,11 @@
 	</para>
 	<screen><command>gpg --keyserver subkeys.pgp.net --send-keys <replaceable>GPGKEYID</replaceable></command></screen>
       </step>
+      <step>
+        <para>
+		This GPG key ID will be used for your &FED; account creation described in Section 2.4.
+  	</para>
+      </step>
     </procedure>
   </section>
   
@@ -153,17 +157,38 @@
     <procedure>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  To sign up for a &FED; account, first visit <ulink
-	    url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and select
-	  <guilabel>Apply for a new account</guilabel>. 
+	  To sign up for a &FED; account, first visit <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and select
+	  <guilabel>New Account</guilabel>. 
+	</para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
+	  Fill in <guilabel>Username</guilabel>, <guilabel>Full Name</guilabel> and <guilabel>Email</guilabel>, and click <guibutton>Sign up!</guibutton>. Your password will be emailed to you.
+	</para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
+	  Go back to <ulink url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/"/> and log in with your password.
 	</para>
       </step>
       <step>
 	<para>
-	  Fill in the form and choose a password for your &FED; account.
-	  Enter information for your GPG key ID and SSH key in the form.
-	  In the <guilabel>Comments</guilabel> field, write the
-	  languages you plan to work on.
+		To submitt public SSH key and GPG key ID, click <guilabel>My Account</guilabel> or go to <ulink url=" https://admin.fedoraproject.org/accounts/user/edit"/>.
+        </para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
+	  In the Edit Account (user_name) page, enter your GPG key ID in <guilabel>GPG Key ID:</guilabel> field. For pubic SSH key, click <guilabel>Browse...</guilabel> located next to <guilabel>Public SSH Key:</guilabel> and specify your public SSH key.
+  	</para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
+	  For other fields, please fill only when you feel comfortable to open those infomration. Otherwise you can leave them empty.
+  	</para>
+      </step>
+      <step>
+	<para>
+	  Now click <guilabel>Save!</guilabel> located at the bottom of this page to save your information.
 	</para>
       </step>
     </procedure>