4 commits - en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml en_US/File_systems.xml en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml en_US/Java.xml en_US/Tools.xml

Karsten Wade quaid at fedoraproject.org
Sat Nov 1 10:55:59 UTC 2008


 en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml                |   15 -
 en_US/File_systems.xml                  |   20 -
 en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml |    4 
 en_US/Java.xml                          |   36 +-
 en_US/Tools.xml                         |  457 +++++++++++++++-----------------
 5 files changed, 263 insertions(+), 269 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit bab3c18a80d7e957bff56e86262561d86b24c55a
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 03:54:42 2008 -0700

    Reordering to fix nesting problem (bug#469174).

diff --git a/en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml b/en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml
index 7071706..2b40f29 100644
--- a/en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml
+++ b/en_US/How_are_Things_for_Developers.xml
@@ -11,9 +11,9 @@
   <xi:include href="Java.xml"
     xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 
-<!-- Development.xml  -->
+<!-- Tools.xml  -->
 
-  <xi:include href="Development.xml"
+  <xi:include href="Tools.xml"
     xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 
 <!-- Linux_kernel.xml  -->
diff --git a/en_US/Tools.xml b/en_US/Tools.xml
index 230267d..9aec2ae 100644
--- a/en_US/Tools.xml
+++ b/en_US/Tools.xml
@@ -3,11 +3,13 @@
 
 <section lang="en" id="sn-Tools">
   <title>Tools </title>
+  <para>This section covers various development tools and
+    features.</para>
   <section id="sn-Eclipse">
     <title>Eclipse </title>
     <para>This release of Fedora includes Fedora Eclipse, based on the
-      Eclipse SDK version 3.4.  The 3.4 series of releases has a 
-	"What's New in 3.4" page:</para>
+      Eclipse SDK version 3.4.  The 3.4 series of releases has a "What's
+      New in 3.4" page:</para>
     <para><ulink
 	url="http://help.eclipse.org/stable/index.jsp?topic=/org.eclipse.platform.doc.user/whatsNew/platform_whatsnew.html"/></para>
     <para>Release notes specific to 3.4 are also available.</para>
@@ -19,19 +21,19 @@
     <section id="sn-Additional_plugins">
       <title>Additional plugins</title>
       <para>This release of Fedora includes plugins for C/C++
-	<command>eclipse-cdt</command>, RPM
-	specfile editing <command>eclipse-rpm-editor</command>, PHP
-	<command>eclipse-phpeclipse</command>,
-	Subversion <command>eclipse-subclipse</command>,
-	SELinux <command>eclipse-slide</command> and
-	<command>eclipse-setools</command>,
-	regular expression testing <command>eclipse-quickrex</command>,
-	Fortran <command>eclipse-photran</command>,
-	Bugzilla integration <command>eclipse-mylyn</command>, Git
+	<command>eclipse-cdt</command>, RPM specfile editing
+	<command>eclipse-rpm-editor</command>, PHP
+	<command>eclipse-phpeclipse</command>, Subversion
+	<command>eclipse-subclipse</command>, SELinux
+	<command>eclipse-slide</command> and
+	<command>eclipse-setools</command>, regular expression testing
+	<command>eclipse-quickrex</command>, Fortran
+	<command>eclipse-photran</command>, Bugzilla integration
+	<command>eclipse-mylyn</command>, Git
 	<command>eclipse-egit</command>, Perl
-	<command>eclipse-epic</command>,
-	Checkstyle <command>eclipse-checkstyle</command>, and
-	Python <command>eclipse-pydev</command>.</para>
+	<command>eclipse-epic</command>, Checkstyle
+	<command>eclipse-checkstyle</command>, and Python
+	<command>eclipse-pydev</command>.</para>
       <section id="sn-Translations_from_the_Babel_project_-_eclipse-nls">
 	<title>Translations from the Babel project - eclipse-nls</title>
 	<para>This release also includes the Babel language packs, which
@@ -42,8 +44,7 @@
 	  English.  The Babel project accepts contributions if you would
 	  like to help their translation efforts.</para>
 	<para>
-	  <ulink
-	    url="http://www.eclipse.org/babel/"/>
+	  <ulink url="http://www.eclipse.org/babel/"/>
 	</para>
       </section>
       <section id="sn-Upgrading_from_Fedora_9">
@@ -53,238 +54,230 @@
 	  simplest way to do this is to re-install.  For plug-in
 	  developers migrating from 3.3, refer to the "Plug-in Migration
 	  Guide":</para>
-	<para><ulink
-	    url="http://help.eclipse.org/ganymede/nav/2_3"/>
+	<para><ulink url="http://help.eclipse.org/ganymede/nav/2_3"/>
 	</para>
       </section>
     </section>
-    <section id="sn-GCC_Compiler_Collection">
-      <title>GCC Compiler Collection</title>
-      <para>This release of Fedora has been built with GCC 4.3.2, which
-	is included with the distribution. </para>
-      <para> For more information on GCC 4.3, refer to:</para>
-      <para>
-	<ulink
-	  url="http://gcc.gnu.org/gcc-4.3/"/>
-      </para>
-      <section id="sn-Target-specific_improvements">
-	<title>Target-specific improvements</title>
-	<section id="sn-IA-32_x86-64">
-	  <title>IA-32 x86-64</title>
-	  <para>
-	    <emphasis>ABI changes</emphasis>
-	  </para><itemizedlist>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para> Starting with GCC 4.3.1, decimal floating point
-		variables are aligned to their natural boundaries when
-		they are passed on the stack for i386.</para>
-	    </listitem>
-	  </itemizedlist><para>
-	    <emphasis>Command-line changes</emphasis>
-	  </para><itemizedlist>
-	    <listitem>
-	      <para> Starting with GCC 4.3.1, the <option>-mcld</option>
-		option has been added to automatically generate a
-		<computeroutput>cld</computeroutput> instruction in the
-		prologue of functions that use string instructions. This
-		option is used for backward compatibility on some
-		operating systems and can be enabled by default for
-		32-bit x86 targets by configuring GCC with the
-		<option>--enable-cld</option> configure option.</para>
-	    </listitem>
-	  </itemizedlist>
-	</section>
-      </section>
-    </section><section id="sn-Improved_Haskell_support">
-      <title>Improved Haskell support</title>
-      <para>Fedora 10 introduces better support for Haskell.  With a new
-	set of packaging guidelines and tools, it is incredibly easy to
-	support any Haskell program using the Glasgow Haskell Compiler.
-	Package creation and deployment, leveraging Fedora's quality
-	tools plus a few new friends has never been easier.  As support
-	for Haskell grows there will be continued development for
-	Haskell as more libraries are introduced.</para>
-      <para>Package creation is quite simple.  Haskell already provides
-	the infrastructure for compiling and deploying packages
-	consistently. Setting up a package for Fedora takes very little
-	time, meaning code that works in Haskell works in Fedora
-	too.</para>
-      <para>Fedora also provides tools for enterprise deployment of
-	Fedora packages.  With the inclusion of Haskell in Fedora, the
-	developer is now free to write enterprise level applications in
-	Haskell and feel secure knowing the code can be used in
-	Fedora.</para>
-      <para>
-	<ulink
-	  url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/GoodHaskellSupport"/>
-      </para>
-    </section><section id="sn-Objective_CAML_OCaml_coverage_greatly_extended">
-      <title>Objective CAML OCaml coverage greatly extended</title>
-      <para>Fedora 10 contains the OCaml 3.10.2 advanced programming
-	language and a very comprehensive list of packages:</para>
-      <para>
-	<ulink
-	  url="http://cocan.org/getting_started_with_ocaml_on_red_hat_and_fedora#Package_status"/>
-      </para><para>OCaml was available as an update to Fedora 9 but not
-	in the initial release. </para>
-    </section><section id="sn-NetBeans">
-      <title>NetBeans</title>
-      <para>This release of Fedora includes NetBeans IDE, version 6.1.
-	NetBeans IDE is an Integrated Development Environment (IDE) for
-	Java, C/C++, Ruby, PHP,  etc. Default configuration of the
-	NetBeans IDE (Java SE IDE configuration) supports development of
-	programs for the Java platform, Standard Edition (Java SE),
-	including development of the modules for the NetBeans
-	Platform.</para>
-      <para>The NetBeans IDE is a modular system and includes facilities
-	for updating and installing plugins. There is a wide spectrum of
-	plugins for the NetBeans IDE that are provided by community
-	members and third-party companies.</para>
-      <section id="sn-NetBean_resources">
-	<title>NetBean resources</title>
-	<itemizedlist>
+  </section>
+  <section id="sn-GCC_Compiler_Collection">
+    <title>GCC Compiler Collection</title>
+    <para>This release of Fedora has been built with GCC 4.3.2, which is
+      included with the distribution. </para>
+    <para> For more information on GCC 4.3, refer to:</para>
+    <para>
+      <ulink url="http://gcc.gnu.org/gcc-4.3/"/>
+    </para>
+    <section id="sn-Target-specific_improvements">
+      <title>Target-specific improvements</title>
+      <section id="sn-IA-32_x86-64">
+	<title>IA-32 x86-64</title>
+	<para>
+	  <emphasis>ABI changes</emphasis>
+	</para><itemizedlist>
 	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="http://www.netbeans.org/"/>
-	      - Official site of the NetBeans project.</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="http://wiki.netbeans.org/"/>
-	      - NetBeans Wiki pages.</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink url="mailto:linux-packaging at installer.netbeans.org"/>
-	      - Mailing list for discussion of the packaging
-	      issues.</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/bugs/netbeans"/>
-	      - Bug list for the NetBeans IDE.</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/bugs/netbeans-platform8"/>
-	      - Bug list for the NetBeans Platform.</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="http://www.netbeans.org/issues/"/>
-	      - Issue Tracker of the NetBeans project. Please, use
-	      <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Component:
-	      installer</guimenuitem></menuchoice>,
-	      <menuchoice><guimenuitem>OS:
-	      Linux</guimenuitem></menuchoice>,
-	      <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Subcomponent:
-	      rpm</guimenuitem></menuchoice> to file the issues
-	      related to the NetBeans RPMs.</para>
+	    <para> Starting with GCC 4.3.1, decimal floating point
+	      variables are aligned to their natural boundaries when
+	      they are passed on the stack for i386.</para>
+	  </listitem>
+	</itemizedlist><para>
+	  <emphasis>Command-line changes</emphasis>
+	</para><itemizedlist>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para> Starting with GCC 4.3.1, the <option>-mcld</option>
+	      option has been added to automatically generate a
+	      <computeroutput>cld</computeroutput> instruction in the
+	      prologue of functions that use string instructions. This
+	      option is used for backward compatibility on some
+	      operating systems and can be enabled by default for 32-bit
+	      x86 targets by configuring GCC with the
+	      <option>--enable-cld</option> configure option.</para>
 	  </listitem>
 	</itemizedlist>
       </section>
-    </section><section id="sn-AMQP_Infrastructure">
-      <title>AMQP Infrastructure</title>
-      <para> The AMQP Infrastructure package is a subset of the Red Hat
-	Enterprise MRG. The package allows for development of scalable,
-	interoperable, and high-performance enterprise applications.
-      </para>
-      <para>More specifically it consists of the following.  </para>
+    </section>
+  </section><section id="sn-Improved_Haskell_support">
+    <title>Improved Haskell support</title>
+    <para>Fedora 10 introduces better support for Haskell.  With a new
+      set of packaging guidelines and tools, it is incredibly easy to
+      support any Haskell program using the Glasgow Haskell Compiler.
+      Package creation and deployment, leveraging Fedora's quality tools
+      plus a few new friends has never been easier.  As support for
+      Haskell grows there will be continued development for Haskell as
+      more libraries are introduced.</para>
+    <para>Package creation is quite simple.  Haskell already provides
+      the infrastructure for compiling and deploying packages
+      consistently. Setting up a package for Fedora takes very little
+      time, meaning code that works in Haskell works in Fedora
+      too.</para>
+    <para>Fedora also provides tools for enterprise deployment of Fedora
+      packages.  With the inclusion of Haskell in Fedora, the developer
+      is now free to write enterprise level applications in Haskell and
+      feel secure knowing the code can be used in Fedora.</para>
+    <para>
+      <ulink
+	url="https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Features/GoodHaskellSupport"/>
+    </para>
+  </section><section id="sn-Objective_CAML_OCaml_coverage_greatly_extended">
+    <title>Objective CAML OCaml coverage greatly extended</title>
+    <para>Fedora 10 contains the OCaml 3.10.2 advanced programming
+      language and a very comprehensive list of packages:</para>
+    <para>
+      <ulink
+	url="http://cocan.org/getting_started_with_ocaml_on_red_hat_and_fedora#Package_status"/>
+    </para><para>OCaml was available as an update to Fedora 9 but not in
+      the initial release. </para>
+  </section><section id="sn-NetBeans">
+    <title>NetBeans</title>
+    <para>This release of Fedora includes NetBeans IDE, version 6.1.
+      NetBeans IDE is an Integrated Development Environment (IDE) for
+      Java, C/C++, Ruby, PHP,  etc. Default configuration of the
+      NetBeans IDE (Java SE IDE configuration) supports development of
+      programs for the Java platform, Standard Edition (Java SE),
+      including development of the modules for the NetBeans
+      Platform.</para>
+    <para>The NetBeans IDE is a modular system and includes facilities
+      for updating and installing plugins. There is a wide spectrum of
+      plugins for the NetBeans IDE that are provided by community
+      members and third-party companies.</para>
+    <section id="sn-NetBean_resources">
+      <title>NetBean resources</title>
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para> AMQP (protocol version 0-10) messaging
-	    broker/server</para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="http://www.netbeans.org/"/> - Official site of
+	    the NetBeans project.</para>
+	</listitem><listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="http://wiki.netbeans.org/"/> - NetBeans Wiki
+	    pages.</para>
 	</listitem><listitem>
-	  <para> Client bindings for C++, Python, and Java (using the
-	    JMS interface)</para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="mailto:linux-packaging at installer.netbeans.org"/>
+	    - Mailing list for discussion of the packaging
+	    issues.</para>
 	</listitem><listitem>
-	  <para> A set of command line interface
-	    configuration/management utilities</para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink
+	      url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/bugs/netbeans"/> 
+	    - Bug list for the NetBeans IDE.</para>
 	</listitem><listitem>
-	  <para> A high-performance asynchronous message store for
-	    durable messages and messaging configuration.</para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink
+	      url="https://admin.fedoraproject.org/pkgdb/packages/bugs/netbeans-platform8"/> 
+	    - Bug list for the NetBeans Platform.</para>
+	</listitem><listitem>
+	  <para>
+	      <ulink url="http://www.netbeans.org/issues/"/> - Issue
+	    Tracker of the NetBeans project. Please, use
+	    <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Component:
+		installer</guimenuitem></menuchoice>,
+	      <menuchoice><guimenuitem>OS:
+	      Linux</guimenuitem></menuchoice>,
+	      <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Subcomponent:
+	      rpm</guimenuitem></menuchoice> to file the issues
+	    related to the NetBeans RPMs.</para>
 	</listitem>
-      </itemizedlist><para />
-      <section id="sn-AMQP_resources">
-	<title>AMQP resources</title>
-	<para>For more information refer to the following
-	  resources:</para>
-	<itemizedlist>
-	  <listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink
-		url="http://www.redhat.com/mrg/resources"/>
-	      Red Hat MRG Documentation</para>
-	  </listitem><listitem>
-	    <para>
-	      <ulink url="http://amqp.org/"/>
-	      AMQP Project Site</para>
-	  </listitem>
-	</itemizedlist>
-      </section>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </section>
+  </section><section id="sn-AMQP_Infrastructure">
+    <title>AMQP Infrastructure</title>
+    <para> The AMQP Infrastructure package is a subset of the Red Hat
+      Enterprise MRG. The package allows for development of scalable,
+      interoperable, and high-performance enterprise applications.
+    </para>
+    <para>More specifically it consists of the following.  </para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<para> AMQP (protocol version 0-10) messaging
+	  broker/server</para>
+      </listitem><listitem>
+	<para> Client bindings for C++, Python, and Java (using the JMS
+	  interface)</para>
+      </listitem><listitem>
+	<para> A set of command line interface configuration/management
+	  utilities</para>
+      </listitem><listitem>
+	<para> A high-performance asynchronous message store for durable
+	  messages and messaging configuration.</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist><para />
+    <section id="sn-AMQP_resources">
+      <title>AMQP resources</title>
+      <para>For more information refer to the following
+	resources:</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="http://www.redhat.com/mrg/resources"/> Red Hat
+	    MRG Documentation</para>
+	</listitem><listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="http://amqp.org/"/> AMQP Project Site</para>
+	</listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
     </section>
-    <section id="sn-Appliance_building_tools">
-      <title>Appliance building tools</title>
-      <para>Appliances are pre-installed and pre-configured system
-	images. This package includes tools and meta-data that make it
-	easier for ISVs, developers, OEMS, etc. to create and deploy
-	virtual appliances. The two components of this feature are the
-	ACT (Appliance Creation Tool) and the AOS (The Appliance
-	Operating System).  Install the <package>appliance-tools</package> package
-	with <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem></menuchoice> or <command>
-	</command>yum.
+  </section>
+  <section id="sn-Appliance_building_tools">
+    <title>Appliance building tools</title>
+    <para>Appliances are pre-installed and pre-configured system images.
+      This package includes tools and meta-data that make it easier for
+      ISVs, developers, OEMS, etc. to create and deploy virtual
+      appliances. The two components of this feature are the ACT
+      (Appliance Creation Tool) and the AOS (The Appliance Operating
+      System).  Install the <package>appliance-tools</package> package
+      with <menuchoice><guimenuitem>Add/Remove
+	  Software</guimenuitem></menuchoice> or <command>
+      </command>yum.
+    </para>
+    <section id="sn-Appliance_Creation_Tool">
+      <title>Appliance Creation Tool</title>
+      <para>The Appliance Creation Tool is a tool that creates Appliance
+	Images from a kickstart file. This tool uses the live CD creator
+	API as well as patches to the live CD API that allow for the
+	creation of multi-partitioned disk images. These disk images can
+	then be booted in a virtual container such as Xen, KVM, and
+	VMware. This tool is included in the
+	<package>appliance-tools</package> package. This package
+	contains tools for building appliance images on Fedora based
+	systems including derived distributions such as RHEL, CentOS,
+	and others.</para>
+    </section>
+    <section id="sn-Appliance_Operating_System">
+      <title>Appliance Operating System</title>
+      <para>The Appliance Operating System is a scaled down version of
+	Fedora with a small footprint. It contains only the packages
+	necessary to run an appliance. The hardware supported by this
+	spin of Fedora would be limited, primarily focusing on virtual
+	containers such as KVM and VMware. The goal is to create a base
+	that developers can build their applications on top of, only
+	pulling in packages that their software requires.</para>
+    </section>
+    <section id="sn-Appliance_building_tools_resources">
+      <title>Appliance building tools resources</title>
+      <para>
+	<ulink url="http://thincrust.net/"/> Appliance Tool Project Site
       </para>
-      <section id="sn-Appliance_Creation_Tool">
-	<title>Appliance Creation Tool</title>
-	<para>The Appliance Creation Tool is a tool that creates
-	  Appliance Images from a kickstart file. This tool uses the
-	  live CD creator API as well as patches to the live CD API that
-	  allow for the creation of multi-partitioned disk images. These
-	  disk images can then be booted in a virtual container such as
-	  Xen, KVM, and VMware. This tool is included in the
-	  <package>appliance-tools</package>
-	  package. This package contains tools for building appliance
-	  images on Fedora based systems including derived distributions
-	  such as RHEL, CentOS, and others.</para>
-      </section>
-      <section id="sn-Appliance_Operating_System">
-	<title>Appliance Operating System</title>
-	<para>The Appliance Operating System is a scaled down version of
-	  Fedora with a small footprint. It contains only the packages
-	  necessary to run an appliance. The hardware supported by this
-	  spin of Fedora would be limited, primarily focusing on virtual
-	  containers such as KVM and VMware. The goal is to create a
-	  base that developers can build their applications on top of,
-	  only pulling in packages that their software requires.</para>
-      </section>
-      <section id="sn-Appliance_building_tools_resources">
-	<title>Appliance building tools resources</title>
-	<para>
-	  <ulink
-	    url="http://thincrust.net/"/>
-	  Appliance Tool Project Site </para>
-      </section>
-    </section><section id="sn-Python_NSS_bindings">
-      <title>Python NSS bindings</title>
-      <para>Python bindings for NSS/NSPR allow Python programs to
-	utilize the NSS cryptographic libraries for SSL/TLS and PKI
-	certificate management.  The <package>python-nss</package> package
-	provides a Python binding to the NSS and NSPR support
-	libraries.</para>
-      <para>Network Security Services (NSS) is a set
-	of libraries supporting security-enabled client and server
-	applications. Applications built with NSS can support SSL v2 and
-	v3, TLS, PKCS #5, PKCS #7, PKCS #11, PKCS #12, S/MIME, X.509 v3
-	certificates and other security standards. NSS has received FIPS
-	140 validation from NIST. </para>
-      <section id="sn-Python_NSS_bindings_resources">
-	<title>Python NSS bindings resources</title>
-	<para>
-	  <ulink
-	    url="http://people.redhat.com/jdennis/python-nss/doc/api/html/index.html"/>
-	  -- Library Documentation</para>
-      </section>
+    </section>
+  </section><section id="sn-Python_NSS_bindings">
+    <title>Python NSS bindings</title>
+    <para>Python bindings for NSS/NSPR allow Python programs to utilize
+      the NSS cryptographic libraries for SSL/TLS and PKI certificate
+      management.  The <package>python-nss</package> package provides a
+      Python binding to the NSS and NSPR support libraries.</para>
+    <para>Network Security Services (NSS) is a set of libraries
+      supporting security-enabled client and server applications.
+      Applications built with NSS can support SSL v2 and v3, TLS, PKCS
+      #5, PKCS #7, PKCS #11, PKCS #12, S/MIME, X.509 v3 certificates and
+      other security standards. NSS has received FIPS 140 validation
+      from NIST. </para>
+    <section id="sn-Python_NSS_bindings_resources">
+      <title>Python NSS bindings resources</title>
+      <para>
+	<ulink
+	  url="http://people.redhat.com/jdennis/python-nss/doc/api/html/index.html"/> 
+	-- Library Documentation</para>
     </section>
   </section>
 </section>
 
+


commit 213f3b31b8ab63dd3c66d3af4601a84b79267c92
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Sat Nov 1 02:19:02 2008 -0700

    Porting fixes/changes from wiki.
    
    * Minor grammatical edits.
    * Converting rough instructions to a step-by-step
    * ref. https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Docs/Beats/Java&diff=0&oldid=54780

diff --git a/en_US/Java.xml b/en_US/Java.xml
index 21ce995..74f7246 100644
--- a/en_US/Java.xml
+++ b/en_US/Java.xml
@@ -34,35 +34,49 @@
   <section id="sn-Handling_Java_applets_and_web_start_applications">
     <title>Handling Java Applets and web start applications</title>
     <para>In Fedora 10 <command>gcjwebplugin</command> has been
-      replaced by <command>IcedTeaPlugin</command> that runs
+      replaced by <command>IcedTeaPlugin</command>, which runs
       untrusted applets safely in a Web browser and works on any
       architecture. You can see which Applet Plugin is installed by
       typing <userinput>about:plugins</userinput> in Firefox.
       The new plugin adds support for the JavaScript bridge
       (LiveConnect) that was missing from earlier versions.  For more
-      details on "bytecode-to-JavaScript bridge (LiveConnect)", refer to
+      details on the bytecode-to-JavaScript bridge (LiveConnect), refer to
       the bug report:</para>
     <para>
       <ulink
 	url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=304021"/>
     </para>
-    <para>Feedback on the security policy is very appreciated. If
+    <para>Feedback on the security policy is appreciated. If
       you suspect the security policy may be too restrictive to enable
-      restricted applets, run the <command>firefox -g</command> command in a
-      terminal window to see what is being restricted, then grant the
-      restricted permission in the <filename>/usr/lib/jvm/java-1.6.0-openjdk-1.6.0.0/jre/lib/security/java.policy</filename> 
-      file.  If you then file a bug report, your exception could end up
-      in the packaged security policy and you won't have to hack the
-      policy file in the future.</para>
+      restricted applets, follow this procedure:</para>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Run the <command>firefox -g</command> command in a
+	  terminal window to see what is being restricted.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Then grant the restricted permission in the
+	  <filename>/usr/lib/jvm/java-1.6.0-openjdk-1.6.0.0/jre/lib/security/java.policy</filename> 
+	  file.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>File a bug report, so your exception can be included in
+	  the packaged security policy.  Packaging these exceptions
+	  allows system owners to avoid having to hack the policy file
+	  in the future.
+	</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
     <para>Experimental Web Start
       (<command>javaws</command>)
       support via NetX has been added to the IcedTea repository. When a
       Java Network Launching Protocol (<filename>.jnlp</filename>) file is embedded
       on a web page you can open it with the IcedTea Web Start
-      (<filename>/usr/bin/javaws</filename>).</para>
+      (<filename>/usr/bin/javaws</filename>).  For more information on
+      NetX, refer to:</para>
     <para>
       <ulink
-	url="http://jnlp.sourceforge.net/"/> -- NetX</para>
+	url="http://jnlp.sourceforge.net/"/></para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-New_integration_with_other_Fedora_technologies">
     <title>New integration with other Fedora technologies</title>


commit cb23bceb8519367e574d30d4fce7dc6d003fa3b7
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Fri Oct 31 23:38:43 2008 -0700

    Fixing content that got flagged and fixed in the wiki - https://fedoraproject.org/w/index.php?title=Docs/Beats/FileSystems&diff=0&oldid=52924

diff --git a/en_US/File_systems.xml b/en_US/File_systems.xml
index 02b6851..22e46f0 100644
--- a/en_US/File_systems.xml
+++ b/en_US/File_systems.xml
@@ -6,22 +6,24 @@
   <title>File systems</title>
   <section id="sn-eCryptfs">
     <title>eCryptfs</title>
-    <para>While Fedora 9 debuted encrypted fileystem support, F10
+    <para>While Fedora 9 debuted encrypted file system support, Fedora 10
       builds on that and fixes a number of problems that could have
       resulted in data corruption.</para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-EXT4">
     <title>EXT4</title>
-    <para>Fedora 9 debuted a preview of ext4 support. F10 brings a
-      fully ext4-compatible e2fsprogs. In addition Anaconda's partition
-      screen has an ext4 filesystem option available if you launch the
-      installer with the ext4 option. Fedora 10 also brings delayed
-      allocation for ext4. However, ext4 in Fedora 10 doesn't currently
-      support filesystems larger than 16 terabytes.</para>
+    <para>Fedora 9 debuted a preview of ext4 support. Fedora 10 brings a
+      fully ext4-compatible <package>e2fsprogs</package>. In addition,
+      the <application>Anaconda</application> partition screen has an
+      ext4 file system option available if you start the installer with
+      the <option>ext4</option> option at the boot prompt. Fedora 10
+      also brings delayed allocation for ext4. However, ext4 in Fedora
+      10 does not currently support file systems larger than 16
+      TiB.</para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-XFS">
     <title>XFS</title>
-    <para>XFS is now a supported filesystem and an option with the the
-      partitioning screen of Anaconda</para>
+    <para>XFS is now a supported file system and an option within the
+      partitioning screen of <application>Anaconda</application>.</para>
   </section>
 </section>


commit 0aa53d8abc820b0a0b070702468e834581bac3ca
Author: Karsten 'quaid' Wade <kwade at calliope.phig.org>
Date:   Fri Oct 31 23:24:25 2008 -0700

    Fixing bug#469449; removing content entirely as Echo is not being pushed forward this release.

diff --git a/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml b/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
index 58f9045..1d613dc 100644
--- a/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
+++ b/en_US/Fedora_desktop.xml
@@ -36,21 +36,6 @@
     <para>For information about the new graphical boot mode read <xref
     linkend="sn-Fedora_10_boot-time"/>.</para>
   </section>
-  <section id="sn-Echo_icon_theme">
-    <title>Echo icon theme</title>
-    <para>Echo is an icon theme developed for Fedora by the volunteer
-      Fedora Art community.  Echo inherits the isometric perspective
-      from the classic Bluecurve theme while introducing a refreshing
-      new look. It follows the freedesktop.org theme specification. The
-      current version covers essential icons from the desktop menus and
-      applications. Future revisions will bring broader coverage.
-    </para>
-    <para>Currently, both GNOME and Xfce use the Echo icon theme by
-      default. KDE continues to use the Oxygen icon theme. The next
-      release of Fedora may introduce Echo by default for KDE for a
-      consistent look and feel across different desktop
-      environments.</para>
-  </section>
   <section id="sn-Infrared_remote_support">
     <title>Infrared remote support</title>
     <para>New to Fedora 10 is the <package>gnome-lirc-properties</package>





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